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体育运动能促进身体发育,增强身体素质,磨炼意志。英语老师让你们围绕“最喜爱的运动”这一话题进行讨论。下面表格列出了你们组的同学最喜欢的运动,请根据这些内容提示,写一篇英语短文,词数60左右,在英语课上做小组汇报。
体育运动能促进身体发育,增强身体素质,磨炼意志。英语老师让你们围绕“最喜爱的运动”这一话题进行讨论。下面表格列出了你们组的同学最喜欢的运动,请根据这些内容提示,写一篇英语短文,词数60左右,在英语课上做小组汇报。
Now let me introduce three students' favourite sports in our group.
Peter loves basketball very much. He plays basketball for fun. He practises playing basketball with his friends twice a week. He thinks basketball builds team spirit.
Helen keeps fit by jogging in the park. She thinks that it is relaxing to jog. She does it three times a week.
Jenny loves ping-pong very much. She plays ping-pong with her classmates four times a week. Ping-pong is good for Jenny because it keeps her healthy. It is good exercise.
Exercise is good for our health. Let's make exercise a part of our life.
答案
参考范文：
Now let me introduce three students' favourite sports in our group.
Peter loves basketball very much. He plays basketball for fun. He practises playing basketball with his friends twice a week. He thinks basketball builds team spirit.
Helen keeps fit by jogging in the park. She thinks that it is relaxing to jog. She does it three times a week.
Jenny loves ping-pong very much. She plays ping-pong with her classmates four times a week. Ping-pong is good for Jenny because it keeps her healthy. It is good exercise.
Exercise is good for our health. Let's make exercise a part of our life.
Now let me introduce three students' favourite sports in our group.
Peter loves basketball very much. He plays basketball for fun. He practises playing basketball with his friends twice a week. He thinks basketball builds team spirit.
Helen keeps fit by jogging in the park. She thinks that it is relaxing to jog. She does it three times a week.
Jenny loves ping-pong very much. She plays ping-pong with her classmates four times a week. Ping-pong is good for Jenny because it keeps her healthy. It is good exercise.
Exercise is good for our health. Let's make exercise a part of our life.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：围绕“最喜爱的运动”写60词左右的小组汇报英语短文，需结合表格中Peter、Helen、Jenny的运动项目、原因、频率信息。解题思路：1. 开头总起，引出介绍组内同学的喜爱运动；2. 分别介绍三人，对应表格的姓名、运动、原因、频率，用简单句串联；3. 结尾加简短总结或呼吁，符合汇报语境，控制词数。
【解析】
按照书面表达的规范步骤：① 开头用Now let me introduce...引出主题；② 分述三人：Peter对应basketball，原因fun，频率twice a week；Helen对应jog，原因relaxing，频率three times a week；Jenny对应ping-pong，原因good exercise，频率four times a week，用简单句连接信息；③ 结尾添加总结句呼应主题，形成完整短文，确保词数符合要求。
【答案】
Now let me introduce three students' favourite sports in our group.
Peter loves basketball very much. He plays basketball for fun. He practises playing basketball with his friends twice a week. He thinks basketball builds team spirit.
Helen keeps fit by jogging in the park. She thinks that it is relaxing to jog. She does it three times a week.
Jenny loves ping-pong very much. She plays ping-pong with her classmates four times a week. Ping-pong is good for Jenny because it keeps her healthy. It is good exercise.
Exercise is good for our health. Let's make exercise a part of our life.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、信息提取整合、话题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整运用表格所有信息，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合小组汇报的场景，还加入了合理的总结与呼吁，是优秀的参考范例，适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】
0.3
首先明确题目要求：围绕“最喜爱的运动”写60词左右的小组汇报英语短文，需结合表格中Peter、Helen、Jenny的运动项目、原因、频率信息。解题思路：1. 开头总起，引出介绍组内同学的喜爱运动；2. 分别介绍三人，对应表格的姓名、运动、原因、频率，用简单句串联；3. 结尾加简短总结或呼吁，符合汇报语境，控制词数。
【解析】
按照书面表达的规范步骤：① 开头用Now let me introduce...引出主题；② 分述三人：Peter对应basketball，原因fun，频率twice a week；Helen对应jog，原因relaxing，频率three times a week；Jenny对应ping-pong，原因good exercise，频率four times a week，用简单句连接信息；③ 结尾添加总结句呼应主题，形成完整短文，确保词数符合要求。
【答案】
Now let me introduce three students' favourite sports in our group.
Peter loves basketball very much. He plays basketball for fun. He practises playing basketball with his friends twice a week. He thinks basketball builds team spirit.
Helen keeps fit by jogging in the park. She thinks that it is relaxing to jog. She does it three times a week.
Jenny loves ping-pong very much. She plays ping-pong with her classmates four times a week. Ping-pong is good for Jenny because it keeps her healthy. It is good exercise.
Exercise is good for our health. Let's make exercise a part of our life.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、信息提取整合、话题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整运用表格所有信息，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合小组汇报的场景，还加入了合理的总结与呼吁，是优秀的参考范例，适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】
0.3
