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四、书面表达
假设你是李华,在外教 Jordan 的指导下,你在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛(English Drama Competition)中获得了一等奖。请给 Jordan 写一封感谢信,表示对他的感谢。
要求:(1)需包含所有要点提示,可适当补充,以使语句通顺,行文连贯;(2)信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息;(3)80 词左右(短文的开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jordan,
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,在外教 Jordan 的指导下,你在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛(English Drama Competition)中获得了一等奖。请给 Jordan 写一封感谢信,表示对他的感谢。
要求:(1)需包含所有要点提示,可适当补充,以使语句通顺,行文连贯;(2)信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息;(3)80 词左右(短文的开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jordan,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Jordan,
I am writing to thank you for all your help. With your guidance, I won first prize in the English Drama Competition. I am truly happy and grateful.
You helped me practise my pronunciation again and again. I used to speak too fast, but you taught me to slow down and speak clearly. Your patience made me more confident.
You also showed me how to use body language and facial expressions. I learnt that acting is not just about words. Your creative ideas made my performance more lively and interesting.
Thank you for being such a wonderful teacher. I will always remember your kindness. I hope to join more activities like this in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
(115 words)
Dear Jordan,
I am writing to thank you for all your help. With your guidance, I won first prize in the English Drama Competition. I am truly happy and grateful.
You helped me practise my pronunciation again and again. I used to speak too fast, but you taught me to slow down and speak clearly. Your patience made me more confident.
You also showed me how to use body language and facial expressions. I learnt that acting is not just about words. Your creative ideas made my performance more lively and interesting.
Thank you for being such a wonderful teacher. I will always remember your kindness. I hope to join more activities like this in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
(115 words)
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一封给外教Jordan的感谢信，需围绕“感谢其指导自己在英语戏剧大赛中获一等奖”展开。首先明确书信格式，开头点明写信目的，中间具体说明外教的帮助（如发音练习、肢体语言指导等），结尾表达感激与未来意愿，同时注意不能出现真实信息，保证行文连贯。
【解析】
1. 开头：直接点明写信目的，说明因外教指导在英语戏剧大赛获一等奖而感谢；
2. 中间段：具体列举外教的帮助，如反复练习发音、指导肢体语言和表情，体现其耐心与创意；
3. 结尾：再次表达感谢，提及未来参与类似活动的意愿；
4. 落款：按书信格式书写Yours, Li Hua。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jordan,
I am writing to thank you for all your help. With your guidance, I won first prize in the English Drama Competition. I am truly happy and grateful.
You helped me practise my pronunciation again and again. I used to speak too fast, but you taught me to slow down and speak clearly. Your patience made me more confident.
You also showed me how to use body language and facial expressions. I learnt that acting is not just about words. Your creative ideas made my performance more lively and interesting.
Thank you for being such a wonderful teacher. I will always remember your kindness. I hope to join more activities like this in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、感谢信的格式、英语表达得体性
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要点，内容具体充实，通过细节体现对老师帮助的真诚感谢，语言流畅自然，符合书信格式要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀感谢信。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求写一封给外教Jordan的感谢信，需围绕“感谢其指导自己在英语戏剧大赛中获一等奖”展开。首先明确书信格式，开头点明写信目的，中间具体说明外教的帮助（如发音练习、肢体语言指导等），结尾表达感激与未来意愿，同时注意不能出现真实信息，保证行文连贯。
【解析】
1. 开头：直接点明写信目的，说明因外教指导在英语戏剧大赛获一等奖而感谢；
2. 中间段：具体列举外教的帮助，如反复练习发音、指导肢体语言和表情，体现其耐心与创意；
3. 结尾：再次表达感谢，提及未来参与类似活动的意愿；
4. 落款：按书信格式书写Yours, Li Hua。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jordan,
I am writing to thank you for all your help. With your guidance, I won first prize in the English Drama Competition. I am truly happy and grateful.
You helped me practise my pronunciation again and again. I used to speak too fast, but you taught me to slow down and speak clearly. Your patience made me more confident.
You also showed me how to use body language and facial expressions. I learnt that acting is not just about words. Your creative ideas made my performance more lively and interesting.
Thank you for being such a wonderful teacher. I will always remember your kindness. I hope to join more activities like this in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、感谢信的格式、英语表达得体性
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要点，内容具体充实，通过细节体现对老师帮助的真诚感谢，语言流畅自然，符合书信格式要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀感谢信。
【难度系数】
0.5
