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2025南京联合体期末你校英文网站正面向全校学生举办主题为"How to go green at school"的征文活动。请你根据下面要求,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意:
1. 内容涵盖所有要点,全文连贯通顺;
2. 词数80左右文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
How to go green at school
Without green, life has no hope. Going green means we should
Thanks for your reading!
2025南京联合体期末你校英文网站正面向全校学生举办主题为"How to go green at school"的征文活动。请你根据下面要求,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意:
1. 内容涵盖所有要点,全文连贯通顺;
2. 词数80左右文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
How to go green at school
Without green, life has no hope. Going green means we should
protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution. Sadly, we can often see some bad behaviours in our school. Some students waste paper or drop litter everywhere, while others leave lights and computers on when they are not in use.
To make our school greener, we should place more recycling bins. Also, we can start a "No-Waste Lunch" campaign, encouraging students to bring reusable bottles instead of plastic ones. Third, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Finally, plant more trees in school gardens.
Small actions make a big difference.
Let's work together for a greener school!
To make our school greener, we should place more recycling bins. Also, we can start a "No-Waste Lunch" campaign, encouraging students to bring reusable bottles instead of plastic ones. Third, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Finally, plant more trees in school gardens.
Small actions make a big difference.
Let's work together for a greener school!
Thanks for your reading!
答案
One possible version:
How to go green at school
Without green, life has no hope.
Going green means we should protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution. Sadly, we can often see some bad behaviours in our school. Some students waste paper or drop litter everywhere, while others leave lights and computers on when they are not in use.
To make our school greener, we should place more recycling bins. Also, we can start a "No-Waste Lunch" campaign, encouraging students to bring reusable bottles instead of plastic ones. Third, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Finally, plant more trees in school gardens.
Small actions make a big difference.
Let's work together for a greener school!
Thanks for your reading!
How to go green at school
Without green, life has no hope.
Going green means we should protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution. Sadly, we can often see some bad behaviours in our school. Some students waste paper or drop litter everywhere, while others leave lights and computers on when they are not in use.
To make our school greener, we should place more recycling bins. Also, we can start a "No-Waste Lunch" campaign, encouraging students to bring reusable bottles instead of plastic ones. Third, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Finally, plant more trees in school gardens.
Small actions make a big difference.
Let's work together for a greener school!
Thanks for your reading!
解析
【分析】
首先明确本次书面表达的主题是“How to go green at school”，需要涵盖三个核心要点：解释“going green”的含义、列举校园里的不良环保行为、提出让校园更环保的建议。解题思路如下：
1. 先紧扣主题解释“going green”的内涵，贴合校园场景，从节约资源、减少污染的角度切入；
2. 结合校园实际，列举常见的不环保行为，比如浪费纸张、乱扔垃圾、不关电器等，让内容真实可信；
3. 提出的建议要具体可行，符合校园场景，比如增设回收箱、开展环保活动、重复利用物品、植树等，同时用连接词让内容连贯；
4. 注意词数要求，衔接开头和结尾，语言要通顺自然，不能出现个人身份信息。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接题目给出的开头，解释“going green”：明确其核心是通过节约资源、减少污染来保护环境，用简洁准确的英语表达；
2. 描述校园不良行为：选取校园中常见的现象，用while等连接词串联不同行为，丰富内容；
3. 给出环保建议：用also, third, finally等连接词，分点提出具体可行的措施，让逻辑清晰；
4. 结尾添加呼吁性语句，呼应主题，再衔接题目给出的结尾句，使文章结构完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to go green at school
Without green, life has no hope.
Going green means we should protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution. Sadly, we can often see some bad behaviours in our school. Some students waste paper or drop litter everywhere, while others leave lights and computers on when they are not in use.
To make our school greener, we should place more recycling bins. Also, we can start a "No-Waste Lunch" campaign, encouraging students to bring reusable bottles instead of plastic ones. Third, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Finally, plant more trees in school gardens.
Small actions make a big difference.
Let's work together for a greener school!
Thanks for your reading!
【知识点】
英语书面表达；环保主题写作；应用文写作
【点评】
本题围绕校园环保这一贴近学生生活的主题展开，考查学生对环保类词汇、句式的掌握，以及逻辑组织和语言表达能力。要求内容覆盖所有要点，语言连贯，既考查学生的知识运用，也引导学生树立环保意识，符合初中英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确本次书面表达的主题是“How to go green at school”，需要涵盖三个核心要点：解释“going green”的含义、列举校园里的不良环保行为、提出让校园更环保的建议。解题思路如下：
1. 先紧扣主题解释“going green”的内涵，贴合校园场景，从节约资源、减少污染的角度切入；
2. 结合校园实际，列举常见的不环保行为，比如浪费纸张、乱扔垃圾、不关电器等，让内容真实可信；
3. 提出的建议要具体可行，符合校园场景，比如增设回收箱、开展环保活动、重复利用物品、植树等，同时用连接词让内容连贯；
4. 注意词数要求，衔接开头和结尾，语言要通顺自然，不能出现个人身份信息。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接题目给出的开头，解释“going green”：明确其核心是通过节约资源、减少污染来保护环境，用简洁准确的英语表达；
2. 描述校园不良行为：选取校园中常见的现象，用while等连接词串联不同行为，丰富内容；
3. 给出环保建议：用also, third, finally等连接词，分点提出具体可行的措施，让逻辑清晰；
4. 结尾添加呼吁性语句，呼应主题，再衔接题目给出的结尾句，使文章结构完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to go green at school
Without green, life has no hope.
Going green means we should protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution. Sadly, we can often see some bad behaviours in our school. Some students waste paper or drop litter everywhere, while others leave lights and computers on when they are not in use.
To make our school greener, we should place more recycling bins. Also, we can start a "No-Waste Lunch" campaign, encouraging students to bring reusable bottles instead of plastic ones. Third, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Finally, plant more trees in school gardens.
Small actions make a big difference.
Let's work together for a greener school!
Thanks for your reading!
【知识点】
英语书面表达；环保主题写作；应用文写作
【点评】
本题围绕校园环保这一贴近学生生活的主题展开，考查学生对环保类词汇、句式的掌握，以及逻辑组织和语言表达能力。要求内容覆盖所有要点，语言连贯，既考查学生的知识运用，也引导学生树立环保意识，符合初中英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】
0.6
