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Ⅶ.书面表达(满分17分)
你所就读的学校上周举行了义卖活动,为洪水受灾地区的灾民筹款。请你根据以下要点,用英语写一篇相关报道向校英语报投稿。
要点如下:1.情况概述:附近的村庄上周遭遇洪水,村民们需要重建家园;
2.活动内容:义卖和义演等;
3.你们的收获和感受。
注意:1.词数80左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Helping the Homeless After a Flood
Last week, the village near our city had a serious flood.
你所就读的学校上周举行了义卖活动,为洪水受灾地区的灾民筹款。请你根据以下要点,用英语写一篇相关报道向校英语报投稿。
要点如下:1.情况概述:附近的村庄上周遭遇洪水,村民们需要重建家园;
2.活动内容:义卖和义演等;
3.你们的收获和感受。
注意:1.词数80左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Helping the Homeless After a Flood
Last week, the village near our city had a serious flood.
答案
Ⅶ. Helping the Homeless After a Flood
Last week, the village near our city had a serious flood. Hundreds of people were hurt and many houses were destroyed. Our school held an activity to help them rebuild their houses last week. Some students sold second-hand books, clothes and other things to raise money. And others gave wonderful performances to raise money and cheer people up.
Finally, we raised over 5,000 yuan for them. Though we were tired, we felt very happy. We helped others in need on our own. We were proud of ourselves.
Last week, the village near our city had a serious flood. Hundreds of people were hurt and many houses were destroyed. Our school held an activity to help them rebuild their houses last week. Some students sold second-hand books, clothes and other things to raise money. And others gave wonderful performances to raise money and cheer people up.
Finally, we raised over 5,000 yuan for them. Though we were tired, we felt very happy. We helped others in need on our own. We were proud of ourselves.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作（报道类），需围绕学校为洪水受灾村民筹款的活动完成报道，核心要点有三个：受灾情况、活动内容、收获感受。解题思路：1. 承接已给开头，补充洪水受灾的具体细节（如人员受伤、房屋被毁）；2. 清晰介绍学校组织的义卖、义演两项活动；3. 说明筹款结果及自身的收获与感受，同时注意词数要求，确保语句连贯。
【解析】
先补充洪水受灾的具体情况，再介绍学校组织的义卖（售卖二手书籍、衣物等）和义演活动，最后说明筹款成果及自身感受，具体内容如下：
Last week, the village near our city had a serious flood. Hundreds of people were hurt and many houses were destroyed. Our school held an activity to help them rebuild their houses last week. Some students sold second-hand books, clothes and other things to raise money. And others gave wonderful performances to raise money and cheer people up. Finally, we raised over 5,000 yuan for them. Though we were tired, we felt very happy. We helped others in need on our own. We were proud of ourselves.
【答案】
Helping the Homeless After a Flood
Last week, the village near our city had a serious flood. Hundreds of people were hurt and many houses were destroyed. Our school held an activity to help them rebuild their houses last week. Some students sold second-hand books, clothes and other things to raise money. And others gave wonderful performances to raise money and cheer people up. Finally, we raised over 5,000 yuan for them. Though we were tired, we felt very happy. We helped others in need on our own. We were proud of ourselves.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式写作、语句连贯
【点评】
本题为校园生活相关的英语书面表达题，要求学生根据给定要点完成报道，贴近学生实际，考查学生的语言组织和要点整合能力，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作（报道类），需围绕学校为洪水受灾村民筹款的活动完成报道，核心要点有三个：受灾情况、活动内容、收获感受。解题思路：1. 承接已给开头，补充洪水受灾的具体细节（如人员受伤、房屋被毁）；2. 清晰介绍学校组织的义卖、义演两项活动；3. 说明筹款结果及自身的收获与感受，同时注意词数要求，确保语句连贯。
【解析】
先补充洪水受灾的具体情况，再介绍学校组织的义卖（售卖二手书籍、衣物等）和义演活动，最后说明筹款成果及自身感受，具体内容如下：
Last week, the village near our city had a serious flood. Hundreds of people were hurt and many houses were destroyed. Our school held an activity to help them rebuild their houses last week. Some students sold second-hand books, clothes and other things to raise money. And others gave wonderful performances to raise money and cheer people up. Finally, we raised over 5,000 yuan for them. Though we were tired, we felt very happy. We helped others in need on our own. We were proud of ourselves.
【答案】
Helping the Homeless After a Flood
Last week, the village near our city had a serious flood. Hundreds of people were hurt and many houses were destroyed. Our school held an activity to help them rebuild their houses last week. Some students sold second-hand books, clothes and other things to raise money. And others gave wonderful performances to raise money and cheer people up. Finally, we raised over 5,000 yuan for them. Though we were tired, we felt very happy. We helped others in need on our own. We were proud of ourselves.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式写作、语句连贯
【点评】
本题为校园生活相关的英语书面表达题，要求学生根据给定要点完成报道，贴近学生实际，考查学生的语言组织和要点整合能力，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
