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七、书面表达(20 分)
时光飞逝，七年级的学习生活已接近尾声。你的班级将推选本班的年度优秀学生。假如你是李华，请你根据以下信息，推荐 Eric 为本班的年度优秀学生。
注意：
1. 需要包含表格内所有信息；
2. 词数 90 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello everyone! I'm Li Hua. I would like to recommend Eric as the Excellent Student of the Year.
时光飞逝，七年级的学习生活已接近尾声。你的班级将推选本班的年度优秀学生。假如你是李华，请你根据以下信息，推荐 Eric 为本班的年度优秀学生。
注意：
1. 需要包含表格内所有信息；
2. 词数 90 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello everyone! I'm Li Hua. I would like to recommend Eric as the Excellent Student of the Year.
Eric is a tall boy with short hair.
He is very friendly. No matter who in
my class is in trouble, he will offer to
help them. He also likes sports very
much, especially basketball. If he has
time, he often goes to the playground to
play basketball with his classmates. He
is also very good at studying. He is good
at all subjects. Once on the bus, the bus
was full of people. Then an old man got
on and Eric offered his seat to the old
man. He is an example for us to follow.
So I hope he gets this award.
He is very friendly. No matter who in
my class is in trouble, he will offer to
help them. He also likes sports very
much, especially basketball. If he has
time, he often goes to the playground to
play basketball with his classmates. He
is also very good at studying. He is good
at all subjects. Once on the bus, the bus
was full of people. Then an old man got
on and Eric offered his seat to the old
man. He is an example for us to follow.
So I hope he gets this award.
答案
One possible version:
Hello everyone! I'm Li Hua. I
would like to recommend Eric as the
Excellent Student of the Year.
Eric is a tall boy with short hair.
He is very friendly. No matter who in
my class is in trouble, he will offer to
help them. He also likes sports very
much, especially basketball. If he has
time, he often goes to the playground to
play basketball with his classmates. He
is also very good at studying. He is good
at all subjects. Once on the bus, the bus
was full of people. Then an old man got
on and Eric offered his seat to the old
man. He is an example for us to follow.
So I hope he gets this award.
Hello everyone! I'm Li Hua. I
would like to recommend Eric as the
Excellent Student of the Year.
Eric is a tall boy with short hair.
He is very friendly. No matter who in
my class is in trouble, he will offer to
help them. He also likes sports very
much, especially basketball. If he has
time, he often goes to the playground to
play basketball with his classmates. He
is also very good at studying. He is good
at all subjects. Once on the bus, the bus
was full of people. Then an old man got
on and Eric offered his seat to the old
man. He is an example for us to follow.
So I hope he gets this award.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题先明确写作任务：写一篇推荐信推荐Eric当选年度优秀学生。第一步先梳理所有必须覆盖的要点：表格里的性格友好、爱好运动、学习努力、优秀事迹这四项内容一个都不能漏。接下来搭建行文逻辑：先承接给定的开头，先介绍Eric的性格特点，补充友好的具体表现让内容不空洞；接着介绍他的运动爱好，补充相关的日常细节；之后介绍他的学习状态，对应“学习努力”的要求；再补充一件具体的优秀事迹，让推荐理由更有说服力；最后收尾说明他是大家的榜样，呼吁大家支持他获得奖项。全程注意以一般现在时作为主体时态，描述过往事迹时切换为一般过去时，控制总词数在90左右，保证语句通顺符合七年级英语的表达水平即可。
【解析】
1. 文体与时态确定：本文属于应用文体的推荐信，介绍人物日常特征用一般现在时，叙述过往发生的优秀事迹用一般过去时，人称以第三人称he指代Eric。
2. 逐点覆盖要求内容：
① 性格部分：点明Eric为人十分友好，班里任何同学遇到困难他都会主动伸出援手，和全班同学都相处得非常融洽。
② 爱好部分：说明他非常热爱运动，尤其擅长打篮球，有空的时候经常约同班同学去操场打球，带动大家一起锻炼身体。
③ 学习情况部分：点明他学习非常努力，对待各门功课都很认真，所有科目的成绩都很优异，还经常主动给学习有困难的同学讲解题目。
④ 优秀事迹部分：补充具体真实的小事例，比如之前坐公交的时候车上满员，有老人上车后Eric主动起身让座，让推荐理由更有说服力。
3. 收尾：点明Eric是全班同学学习的好榜样，表达自己希望他能获得这个奖项的诉求。
4. 最后通读检查：确认所有表格信息都已覆盖，词数符合要求，没有语法错误，行文连贯自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello everyone! I'm Li Hua. I would like to recommend Eric as the Excellent Student of the Year.
Eric is a tall boy with short hair. He is very friendly. No matter who in my class is in trouble, he will offer to help them. He also likes sports very much, especially basketball. If he has time, he often goes to the playground to play basketball with his classmates. He is also very good at studying. He is good at all subjects. Once on the bus, the bus was full of people. Then an old man got on and Eric offered his seat to the old man. He is an example for us to follow. So I hope he gets this award.
【知识点】
英语推荐信写作，一般现在时运用，要点类书面表达
【点评】
本题是七年级常见的人物推荐类书面表达，提示信息清晰明确，学生只需要将给定的四个核心要点补充合理的细节，串联成通顺的文段即可，既考察学生对基础时态、常用句式的掌握，也引导学生学会用具体事例支撑自己的观点，避免写作内容空洞。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先拿到这道题先明确写作任务：写一篇推荐信推荐Eric当选年度优秀学生。第一步先梳理所有必须覆盖的要点：表格里的性格友好、爱好运动、学习努力、优秀事迹这四项内容一个都不能漏。接下来搭建行文逻辑：先承接给定的开头，先介绍Eric的性格特点，补充友好的具体表现让内容不空洞；接着介绍他的运动爱好，补充相关的日常细节；之后介绍他的学习状态，对应“学习努力”的要求；再补充一件具体的优秀事迹，让推荐理由更有说服力；最后收尾说明他是大家的榜样，呼吁大家支持他获得奖项。全程注意以一般现在时作为主体时态，描述过往事迹时切换为一般过去时，控制总词数在90左右，保证语句通顺符合七年级英语的表达水平即可。
【解析】
1. 文体与时态确定：本文属于应用文体的推荐信，介绍人物日常特征用一般现在时，叙述过往发生的优秀事迹用一般过去时，人称以第三人称he指代Eric。
2. 逐点覆盖要求内容：
① 性格部分：点明Eric为人十分友好，班里任何同学遇到困难他都会主动伸出援手，和全班同学都相处得非常融洽。
② 爱好部分：说明他非常热爱运动，尤其擅长打篮球，有空的时候经常约同班同学去操场打球，带动大家一起锻炼身体。
③ 学习情况部分：点明他学习非常努力，对待各门功课都很认真，所有科目的成绩都很优异，还经常主动给学习有困难的同学讲解题目。
④ 优秀事迹部分：补充具体真实的小事例，比如之前坐公交的时候车上满员，有老人上车后Eric主动起身让座，让推荐理由更有说服力。
3. 收尾：点明Eric是全班同学学习的好榜样，表达自己希望他能获得这个奖项的诉求。
4. 最后通读检查：确认所有表格信息都已覆盖，词数符合要求，没有语法错误，行文连贯自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello everyone! I'm Li Hua. I would like to recommend Eric as the Excellent Student of the Year.
Eric is a tall boy with short hair. He is very friendly. No matter who in my class is in trouble, he will offer to help them. He also likes sports very much, especially basketball. If he has time, he often goes to the playground to play basketball with his classmates. He is also very good at studying. He is good at all subjects. Once on the bus, the bus was full of people. Then an old man got on and Eric offered his seat to the old man. He is an example for us to follow. So I hope he gets this award.
【知识点】
英语推荐信写作，一般现在时运用，要点类书面表达
【点评】
本题是七年级常见的人物推荐类书面表达，提示信息清晰明确，学生只需要将给定的四个核心要点补充合理的细节，串联成通顺的文段即可，既考察学生对基础时态、常用句式的掌握，也引导学生学会用具体事例支撑自己的观点，避免写作内容空洞。
【难度系数】
0.6
