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Ⅳ.书面表达。
假如你是来自英国的玛丽Mary，现与父母一起居住在中国。请你介绍一下自己的饮食习惯。
要求：1.语言流畅，语法正确，书写工整；
2.70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, I'm Mary from the UK. I'm living in China with my parents now. Let me share my eating habits with you.
假如你是来自英国的玛丽Mary，现与父母一起居住在中国。请你介绍一下自己的饮食习惯。
要求：1.语言流畅，语法正确，书写工整；
2.70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, I'm Mary from the UK. I'm living in China with my parents now. Let me share my eating habits with you.
I have a good habit of eating vegetables
and fruit every day. They give me lots of
vitamins and keep me healthy. Besides, I
eat three meals a day, and I have them on
time. They give me energy.
However, I have a bad habit too. I eat
too much fast food. I know it's not good for
me, but it tastes good. In future, I should
eat less junk food and drink more water.
and fruit every day. They give me lots of
vitamins and keep me healthy. Besides, I
eat three meals a day, and I have them on
time. They give me energy.
However, I have a bad habit too. I eat
too much fast food. I know it's not good for
me, but it tastes good. In future, I should
eat less junk food and drink more water.
答案
One possible version:
Hello, I'm Mary from the UK. I'm
living in China with my parents now. Let
me share my eating habits with you.
I have a good habit of eating vegetables
and fruit every day. They give me lots of
vitamins and keep me healthy. Besides, I
eat three meals a day, and I have them on
time. They give me energy.
However, I have a bad habit too. I eat
too much fast food. I know it's not good for
me, but it tastes good. In future, I should
eat less junk food and drink more water.
Hello, I'm Mary from the UK. I'm
living in China with my parents now. Let
me share my eating habits with you.
I have a good habit of eating vegetables
and fruit every day. They give me lots of
vitamins and keep me healthy. Besides, I
eat three meals a day, and I have them on
time. They give me energy.
However, I have a bad habit too. I eat
too much fast food. I know it's not good for
me, but it tastes good. In future, I should
eat less junk food and drink more water.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要明确写作核心是介绍自己的饮食习惯，先理清行文逻辑：第一步先写自己的健康饮食习惯，补充这些习惯带来的好处，让内容更充实；第二步可以补充一个真实的小不良饮食习惯，让内容更自然；最后简单提一下后续的调整计划，收尾完整。写作时要多用简单常用的句型，控制总词数在70左右，保证语法正确，搭配少量衔接词让语句更通顺，不要出现和主题无关的内容。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 梳理核心要点：覆盖健康饮食习惯、不良饮食习惯、后续改进计划三个部分，完全贴合题目要求。
2. 选用合适衔接词：用besides衔接不同的好习惯，用however转折引出不良习惯，让行文逻辑连贯，避免句子零散。
3. 统一使用一般现在时描述日常习惯，保证语法准确，控制词数符合要求，最终成文如下参考版本。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, I'm Mary from the UK. I'm living in China with my parents now. Let me share my eating habits with you.
I have a good habit of eating vegetables and fruit every day. They give me lots of vitamins and keep me healthy. Besides, I eat three meals a day, and I have them on time. They give me energy.
However, I have a bad habit too. I eat too much fast food. I know it's not good for me, but it tastes good. In future, I should eat less junk food and drink more water.
【知识点】
饮食话题写作，衔接词运用，一般现在时
【点评】
本篇范文内容完整贴合题意，逻辑层次清晰，先介绍健康饮食习惯及益处，再转折引出自身的不良饮食习惯，最后说明后续的调整方向，用词地道简单，没有语法错误，词数符合70词左右的要求，是一篇合格的参考范文。学生作答时也可以结合自身实际调整习惯相关的表述，只要要点齐全、语法正确即可拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要明确写作核心是介绍自己的饮食习惯，先理清行文逻辑：第一步先写自己的健康饮食习惯，补充这些习惯带来的好处，让内容更充实；第二步可以补充一个真实的小不良饮食习惯，让内容更自然；最后简单提一下后续的调整计划，收尾完整。写作时要多用简单常用的句型，控制总词数在70左右，保证语法正确，搭配少量衔接词让语句更通顺，不要出现和主题无关的内容。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 梳理核心要点：覆盖健康饮食习惯、不良饮食习惯、后续改进计划三个部分，完全贴合题目要求。
2. 选用合适衔接词：用besides衔接不同的好习惯，用however转折引出不良习惯，让行文逻辑连贯，避免句子零散。
3. 统一使用一般现在时描述日常习惯，保证语法准确，控制词数符合要求，最终成文如下参考版本。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, I'm Mary from the UK. I'm living in China with my parents now. Let me share my eating habits with you.
I have a good habit of eating vegetables and fruit every day. They give me lots of vitamins and keep me healthy. Besides, I eat three meals a day, and I have them on time. They give me energy.
However, I have a bad habit too. I eat too much fast food. I know it's not good for me, but it tastes good. In future, I should eat less junk food and drink more water.
【知识点】
饮食话题写作，衔接词运用，一般现在时
【点评】
本篇范文内容完整贴合题意，逻辑层次清晰，先介绍健康饮食习惯及益处，再转折引出自身的不良饮食习惯，最后说明后续的调整方向，用词地道简单，没有语法错误，词数符合70词左右的要求，是一篇合格的参考范文。学生作答时也可以结合自身实际调整习惯相关的表述，只要要点齐全、语法正确即可拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.7
