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Today, many students have some bad eating habits. As we all know, we are what we eat. Bad eating habits are very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without having breakfast. And some like to have too many snacks and are particular about food. In the long run, our health will be worse and worse.
To keep fit, we should eat healthy food such as proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables and fruit. We'd better have meals regularly. We also need proper exercise.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. In this way, we can have enough energy to study better.
That's all. Thank you.
Today, many students have some bad eating habits. As we all know, we are what we eat. Bad eating habits are very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without having breakfast. And some like to have too many snacks and are particular about food. In the long run, our health will be worse and worse.
To keep fit, we should eat healthy food such as proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables and fruit. We'd better have meals regularly. We also need proper exercise.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. In this way, we can have enough energy to study better.
That's all. Thank you.
答案
答案略
解析
【分析】
这篇范文围绕学生不良饮食习惯展开，采用“提出问题-给出建议-总结观点”的清晰结构，符合英语议论文的写作逻辑。开头点明学生普遍存在的不良饮食习惯，中间提供保持健康的具体方法，结尾强调养成健康饮食习惯的重要性，思路连贯，适合作为同类话题写作的参考范例。
【解析】
该范文层次分明，内容完整：1. 开头段：引出学生不良饮食习惯的现象，用“we are what we eat”点明饮食与健康的关联，说明不良习惯对健康的长期影响；2. 主体段：针对保持健康提出具体可行的建议，包括食用健康食物、规律饮食、适当运动；3. 结尾段：总结观点，强调养成健康饮食习惯对身体和学习的重要性。全文语言简洁准确，表达流畅，符合高分范文的要求。
【答案】
略
【知识点】
英语议论文写作、健康话题英语表达
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，围绕健康主题展开，给出的建议具体实用，语言规范，是学生学习健康话题英语写作的优秀范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
这篇范文围绕学生不良饮食习惯展开，采用“提出问题-给出建议-总结观点”的清晰结构，符合英语议论文的写作逻辑。开头点明学生普遍存在的不良饮食习惯，中间提供保持健康的具体方法，结尾强调养成健康饮食习惯的重要性，思路连贯，适合作为同类话题写作的参考范例。
【解析】
该范文层次分明，内容完整：1. 开头段：引出学生不良饮食习惯的现象，用“we are what we eat”点明饮食与健康的关联，说明不良习惯对健康的长期影响；2. 主体段：针对保持健康提出具体可行的建议，包括食用健康食物、规律饮食、适当运动；3. 结尾段：总结观点，强调养成健康饮食习惯对身体和学习的重要性。全文语言简洁准确，表达流畅，符合高分范文的要求。
【答案】
略
【知识点】
英语议论文写作、健康话题英语表达
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，围绕健康主题展开，给出的建议具体实用，语言规范，是学生学习健康话题英语写作的优秀范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
假如你是李华,是一名七年级的学生。你的英国笔友 Michael 想知道中国学生是如何保持健康的。请你以自己为例,根据下面表格中的提示给他回信。词数 80 左右。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Michael,
I'm happy to tell you how Chinese students keep healthy. And I would like to take myself as an example.
That's all I do for a healthy body. How about you?
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Michael,
I'm happy to tell you how Chinese students keep healthy. And I would like to take myself as an example.
First of all, a healthy diet is very important, so I eat food like rice, eggs, fish and vegetables every day. I also eat more fruit and drink enough water. Snacks and fast food are bad for our health. My parents always tell me to eat less of them.
Also, I take enough exercise every week. It keeps me away from getting sick and helps me study well. I do morning exercises every day.
I also do other exercise. I usually walk, run, jump or play football after school.
It makes me relaxed.
That's all I do for a healthy body. How about you?
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Michael,
I'm happy to tell you how Chinese students keep healthy. And I would like to take myself as an example.
First of all, a healthy diet is very important, so I eat food like rice, eggs, fish and vegetables every day. I also eat more fruit and drink enough water. Snacks and fast food are bad for our health. My parents always tell me to eat less of them.
Also, I take enough exercise every week. It keeps me away from getting sick and helps me study well. I do morning exercises every day. I also do other exercise. I usually walk, run, jump or play football after school. It makes me relaxed.
That's all I do for a healthy body. How about you?
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Michael,
I'm happy to tell you how Chinese students keep healthy. And I would like to take myself as an example.
First of all, a healthy diet is very important, so I eat food like rice, eggs, fish and vegetables every day. I also eat more fruit and drink enough water. Snacks and fast food are bad for our health. My parents always tell me to eat less of them.
Also, I take enough exercise every week. It keeps me away from getting sick and helps me study well. I do morning exercises every day. I also do other exercise. I usually walk, run, jump or play football after school. It makes me relaxed.
That's all I do for a healthy body. How about you?
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以七年级学生李华的身份给英国笔友Michael回信，介绍中国学生保持健康的方法，需结合表格提示完成内容。解题思路：1. 确定文章核心要点，对应表格分为“健康饮食”和“足够运动”两部分；2. 健康饮食部分，需涵盖“多吃健康食物、少吃垃圾食品、喝足够的水”，用简单英语表达；3. 足够运动部分，要包含“做早操、其他运动（如走路、跑步等）”，可补充运动的益处；4. 注意词数要求，开头结尾已给出，仅需补充中间内容，语言符合七年级学生水平，逻辑连贯。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 先写健康饮食内容：说明日常吃米饭、鸡蛋、鱼、蔬菜，多吃水果，喝足够的水，少吃零食和快餐；2. 再写运动内容：说明每天做早操，课后进行走路、跑步、跳跃或踢足球等运动，运动能让人少生病、助力学习；3. 衔接已给的开头结尾，确保内容完整，符合书信格式，词数达标。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Michael,
I'm happy to tell you how Chinese students keep healthy. And I would like to take myself as an example.
First of all, a healthy diet is very important, so I eat food like rice, eggs, fish and vegetables every day. I also eat more fruit and drink enough water. Snacks and fast food are bad for our health. My parents always tell me to eat less of them.
Also, I take enough exercise every week. It keeps me away from getting sick and helps me study well. I do morning exercises every day. I also do other exercise. I usually walk, run, jump or play football after school. It makes me relaxed.
That's all I do for a healthy body. How about you?
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、健康话题表达、简单句运用
【点评】本题结合学生熟悉的健康话题，考查英语应用文写作能力，要求覆盖表格要点，语言通顺，贴近学生生活，易于发挥，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】写作步骤：1. 先写健康饮食内容：说明日常吃米饭、鸡蛋、鱼、蔬菜，多吃水果，喝足够的水，少吃零食和快餐；2. 再写运动内容：说明每天做早操，课后进行走路、跑步、跳跃或踢足球等运动，运动能让人少生病、助力学习；3. 衔接已给的开头结尾，确保内容完整，符合书信格式，词数达标。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Michael,
I'm happy to tell you how Chinese students keep healthy. And I would like to take myself as an example.
First of all, a healthy diet is very important, so I eat food like rice, eggs, fish and vegetables every day. I also eat more fruit and drink enough water. Snacks and fast food are bad for our health. My parents always tell me to eat less of them.
Also, I take enough exercise every week. It keeps me away from getting sick and helps me study well. I do morning exercises every day. I also do other exercise. I usually walk, run, jump or play football after school. It makes me relaxed.
That's all I do for a healthy body. How about you?
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、健康话题表达、简单句运用
【点评】本题结合学生熟悉的健康话题，考查英语应用文写作能力，要求覆盖表格要点，语言通顺，贴近学生生活，易于发挥，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.7
