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（2025·江苏泰州姜堰第四中学期中改编）根据所给要点提示，以“The changes in my hometown”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。
【要点】1. What was your hometown like in the past?
2. What changes have taken place over the years?
3. How do you feel?
【要求】1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括要点中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
3. 100 词左右。
4. 不得使用真实姓名。
The changes in my hometown
（2025·江苏泰州姜堰第四中学期中改编）根据所给要点提示，以“The changes in my hometown”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。
【要点】1. What was your hometown like in the past?
2. What changes have taken place over the years?
3. How do you feel?
【要求】1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括要点中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
3. 100 词左右。
4. 不得使用真实姓名。
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old and beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be small. The traffic was not convenient. People used to walk or ride to the town.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
答案
One possible version
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old and beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be small. The traffic was not convenient. People used to walk or ride to the town.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old and beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be small. The traffic was not convenient. People used to walk or ride to the town.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先明确核心主题是介绍家乡的变化，必须覆盖题干给出的三个必写要点。第一步先梳理文章逻辑框架，按照“过去的家乡面貌-近年发生的变化-个人感受与展望”的顺序分层，避免内容混乱。第二步确定对应时态：描述过去的家乡用一般过去时，搭配used to do的常用结构体现过去的固有状态，描述已经发生的变化用现在完成时，介绍当下的生活状态用一般现在时，最后展望未来用一般将来时，从根源上避免时态错误。第三步填充内容，对应要点1从生活水平、住房、交通三个常见维度写过去的状态，要点2对应这三个维度写当下的进步，形成自然的今昔对比，最后要点3抒发对家乡的自豪感和美好期许，控制总词数在100左右，不出现真实个人信息，保证上下文连贯。
【解析】
写作可按照以下4个步骤完成：
1. 开篇引入：简单点明家乡属性，自然引出后续的今昔对比内容。
2. 完成要点1写作：用一般过去时+used to结构，依次介绍过去家乡规模小、人们生活贫困、房屋狭小、交通不便，出行只能靠步行或骑车的状态，完整覆盖“过去的家乡是什么样”的要求。
3. 完成要点2写作：用现在完成时引出“巨变已经发生”的表述，对应过去的维度做反向对比：人们生活质量提升、房屋宽敞明亮、很多家庭拥有私家车、出行可选公交/出租车，补充“每年有大量世界各地游客到访”的细节丰富内容，完整覆盖“近年发生的变化”的要求。
4. 完成要点3写作：收尾直接抒发个人感受，表达对家乡未来发展的信心，收束全文，整体检查语法错误、要点覆盖情况和词数，符合所有题干要求即可。
【答案】
One possible version
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old and beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be small. The traffic was not convenient. People used to walk or ride to the town.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
【知识点】
今昔对比写作、时态正确运用、英语语篇谋篇
【点评】
本篇参考范文完整覆盖题干所有给定要点，逻辑清晰层次分明，今昔对比自然流畅，时态切换准确合理，语句通顺无语法错误，补充了世界各地游客来访的细节让内容更充实，完全符合100词左右的字数要求，是非常规范的同主题参考范文，学生可以借此掌握“变化类”作文的通用写作框架。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先明确核心主题是介绍家乡的变化，必须覆盖题干给出的三个必写要点。第一步先梳理文章逻辑框架，按照“过去的家乡面貌-近年发生的变化-个人感受与展望”的顺序分层，避免内容混乱。第二步确定对应时态：描述过去的家乡用一般过去时，搭配used to do的常用结构体现过去的固有状态，描述已经发生的变化用现在完成时，介绍当下的生活状态用一般现在时，最后展望未来用一般将来时，从根源上避免时态错误。第三步填充内容，对应要点1从生活水平、住房、交通三个常见维度写过去的状态，要点2对应这三个维度写当下的进步，形成自然的今昔对比，最后要点3抒发对家乡的自豪感和美好期许，控制总词数在100左右，不出现真实个人信息，保证上下文连贯。
【解析】
写作可按照以下4个步骤完成：
1. 开篇引入：简单点明家乡属性，自然引出后续的今昔对比内容。
2. 完成要点1写作：用一般过去时+used to结构，依次介绍过去家乡规模小、人们生活贫困、房屋狭小、交通不便，出行只能靠步行或骑车的状态，完整覆盖“过去的家乡是什么样”的要求。
3. 完成要点2写作：用现在完成时引出“巨变已经发生”的表述，对应过去的维度做反向对比：人们生活质量提升、房屋宽敞明亮、很多家庭拥有私家车、出行可选公交/出租车，补充“每年有大量世界各地游客到访”的细节丰富内容，完整覆盖“近年发生的变化”的要求。
4. 完成要点3写作：收尾直接抒发个人感受，表达对家乡未来发展的信心，收束全文，整体检查语法错误、要点覆盖情况和词数，符合所有题干要求即可。
【答案】
One possible version
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old and beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be small. The traffic was not convenient. People used to walk or ride to the town.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
【知识点】
今昔对比写作、时态正确运用、英语语篇谋篇
【点评】
本篇参考范文完整覆盖题干所有给定要点，逻辑清晰层次分明，今昔对比自然流畅，时态切换准确合理，语句通顺无语法错误，补充了世界各地游客来访的细节让内容更充实，完全符合100词左右的字数要求，是非常规范的同主题参考范文，学生可以借此掌握“变化类”作文的通用写作框架。
【难度系数】
0.7
