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七、书面表达。
自然灾害时有发生，往往骤然降临，很难预警。请你以“地震”为主题，根据以下提示写一篇主题报告，给同学们提供一些地震逃生的建议。
室内
室外
不要从高楼上跳下
远离桥梁、树木、路灯和电线
可以藏在桌下，要远离窗户、沉重
家具
在车里时，应待在里面
地面停止晃动时，要快速离开
在山里时，要当心落石
……
……
注意：
1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2.不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名；
3.语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：furniture(n.家具)，shake(v.晃动)，brave(adj.勇敢的)
What to Do in an Earthquake
自然灾害时有发生，往往骤然降临，很难预警。请你以“地震”为主题，根据以下提示写一篇主题报告，给同学们提供一些地震逃生的建议。
室内
室外
不要从高楼上跳下
远离桥梁、树木、路灯和电线
可以藏在桌下，要远离窗户、沉重
家具在车里时，应待在里面
地面停止晃动时，要快速离开
在山里时，要当心落石
……
……
注意：
1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2.不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名；
3.语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：furniture(n.家具)，shake(v.晃动)，brave(adj.勇敢的)
What to Do in an Earthquake
答案
One possible version:
What to Do in an Earthquake
Earthquakes always happen suddenly, so it is difficult to warn people about them. Here is some advice for you to keep safe.
When you're inside, you can't jump out of high buildings. You can hide under a table, and you should stay away from windows and heavy furniture. You'd better leave the building quickly when the ground stops shaking. But don't use the lifts.
When you are outside, you'd better keep away from bridges, trees, street lights and power lines. When you're in a car or a bus, you should stay inside. When you are in the mountains, you should be careful of falling rocks. What's more, you must keep calm, be brave and be helpful.
If you follow the advice, you can be safe and help save others.
What to Do in an Earthquake
Earthquakes always happen suddenly, so it is difficult to warn people about them. Here is some advice for you to keep safe.
When you're inside, you can't jump out of high buildings. You can hide under a table, and you should stay away from windows and heavy furniture. You'd better leave the building quickly when the ground stops shaking. But don't use the lifts.
When you are outside, you'd better keep away from bridges, trees, street lights and power lines. When you're in a car or a bus, you should stay inside. When you are in the mountains, you should be careful of falling rocks. What's more, you must keep calm, be brave and be helpful.
If you follow the advice, you can be safe and help save others.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕地震逃生给同学提供建议，需结合给定的室内外逃生提示，适当拓展内容，完成一篇语句连贯、符合词数要求的短文。解题思路：①先确定文章结构：开头引入地震突发难预警，点明给出逃生建议；②分室内、室外两部分，对应提示内容补充合理拓展（如室内逃生勿用电梯）；③结尾总结，强调保持冷静勇敢，确保内容贴合主题、符合要求。
【解析】首先书写标题What to Do in an Earthquake；开头点明地震突发难预警，引出逃生建议；室内部分对应提示，补充“勿用电梯”的合理拓展；室外部分覆盖所有给定提示；结尾补充保持冷静勇敢的内容，确保语句连贯、符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
What to Do in an Earthquake
Earthquakes always happen suddenly, so it is difficult to warn people about them. Here is some advice for you to keep safe.
When you're inside, you can't jump out of high buildings. You can hide under a table, and you should stay away from windows and heavy furniture. You'd better leave the building quickly when the ground stops shaking. But don't use the lifts.
When you are outside, you'd better keep away from bridges, trees, street lights and power lines. When you're in a car or a bus, you should stay inside. When you are in the mountains, you should be careful of falling rocks. What's more, you must keep calm, be brave and be helpful.
If you follow the advice, you can be safe and help save others.
【知识点】英语书面表达、地震逃生常识、英语写作技巧
【点评】文章紧扣地震逃生主题，结合给定提示合理拓展（补充勿用电梯），结构清晰，分室内外场景给出实用建议，语句连贯，符合写作要求，能有效传递逃生知识。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先书写标题What to Do in an Earthquake；开头点明地震突发难预警，引出逃生建议；室内部分对应提示，补充“勿用电梯”的合理拓展；室外部分覆盖所有给定提示；结尾补充保持冷静勇敢的内容，确保语句连贯、符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
What to Do in an Earthquake
Earthquakes always happen suddenly, so it is difficult to warn people about them. Here is some advice for you to keep safe.
When you're inside, you can't jump out of high buildings. You can hide under a table, and you should stay away from windows and heavy furniture. You'd better leave the building quickly when the ground stops shaking. But don't use the lifts.
When you are outside, you'd better keep away from bridges, trees, street lights and power lines. When you're in a car or a bus, you should stay inside. When you are in the mountains, you should be careful of falling rocks. What's more, you must keep calm, be brave and be helpful.
If you follow the advice, you can be safe and help save others.
【知识点】英语书面表达、地震逃生常识、英语写作技巧
【点评】文章紧扣地震逃生主题，结合给定提示合理拓展（补充勿用电梯），结构清晰，分室内外场景给出实用建议，语句连贯，符合写作要求，能有效传递逃生知识。
【难度系数】0.6
