1. 教材原句:It really gave me the feeling of a horse race. (the feeling of)
仿写:古典音乐给我一种暴风雨即将来临的感觉。
2. 教材原句:I never realized that you could dance to it! (realize that)
仿写:我从来没有意识到音乐会对我的生活产生如此大的影响。
3. 教材原句:It reminds me of high mountains! (remind…of…)
仿写:这首曲子使我想起了我的充满快乐的童年。
仿写:古典音乐给我一种暴风雨即将来临的感觉。
2. 教材原句:I never realized that you could dance to it! (realize that)
仿写:我从来没有意识到音乐会对我的生活产生如此大的影响。
3. 教材原句:It reminds me of high mountains! (remind…of…)
仿写:这首曲子使我想起了我的充满快乐的童年。
答案
1. Classical music gives me the feeling of a coming storm.
2. I never realized that music could play such a big role in my life.
3. The song reminds me of my childhood which was full of joy.
2. I never realized that music could play such a big role in my life.
3. The song reminds me of my childhood which was full of joy.
解析
【分析】本题为句型仿写题,需先明确教材原句的核心结构与固定短语,再将中文语义对应替换,确保语法正确、短语使用准确。具体思路:1. 对应“the feeling of”结构,将中文“古典音乐”“暴风雨即将来临”转化为符合英语表达的名词短语,组合成正确句子;2. 对应“realize that”引导的宾语从句,将中文语义拆分为主句和宾语从句部分,调整为正确的英语语序;3. 对应“remind...of...”结构,补充修饰“童年”的定语从句,使句子完整准确。
【解析】1. 对应“the feeling of”结构,仿写为:Classical music gives me the feeling of a coming storm. 2. 对应“realize that”引导的宾语从句,仿写为:I never realized that music could play such a big role in my life. 3. 对应“remind...of...”结构,仿写为:The song reminds me of my childhood which was full of joy.
【答案】1. Classical music gives me the feeling of a coming storm. 2. I never realized that music could play such a big role in my life. 3. The song reminds me of my childhood which was full of joy.
【知识点】固定短语用法,宾语从句,定语从句
【点评】本题考查基础句型与固定短语的仿写,需准确掌握教材原句的结构,结合中文语义进行替换,注意语法细节(如时态、从句引导词),属于基础题型。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】1. 对应“the feeling of”结构,仿写为:Classical music gives me the feeling of a coming storm. 2. 对应“realize that”引导的宾语从句,仿写为:I never realized that music could play such a big role in my life. 3. 对应“remind...of...”结构,仿写为:The song reminds me of my childhood which was full of joy.
【答案】1. Classical music gives me the feeling of a coming storm. 2. I never realized that music could play such a big role in my life. 3. The song reminds me of my childhood which was full of joy.
【知识点】固定短语用法,宾语从句,定语从句
【点评】本题考查基础句型与固定短语的仿写,需准确掌握教材原句的结构,结合中文语义进行替换,注意语法细节(如时态、从句引导词),属于基础题型。
【难度系数】0.7
写作任务
音乐将世间万物都带进了美好的时空。每每听着音乐,就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。音乐有着无穷的魅力。请你以“Music makes me ”为题,补全题目并根据写作要点,用英语写一篇词数100左右的短文。
写作要点:
1. Why do you like music?
2. What kind of music do you like best?
3. How does music influence you?
Music makes me
Music is like a key, which opens the door to the world for me.
思路点拨
1. 本文是一篇应用文,说明音乐的作用以及对自己的影响,因此人称以第一人称为主。
2. 文章须包含音乐的作用、最喜欢的音乐类型以及音乐对自己的影响,时态以一般现在时为主。
3. 文章可适当增加细节,使自己的观点更加通顺。
写作模板

难句突破
1. 我喜欢那些对我有帮助的音乐。(be helpful to)
2. 流行歌曲带给我能量,而古典音乐帮助我集中精力学习。(while...)
3. 如果没有音乐,我们的生活将不会如此有趣。(if...)
高分作文
Music makes me happy
Music is like a key, which opens the door to the world for me.
I think of music as one of the best ways to wash away my worries. When I listen to it, I feel relaxed and peaceful. I like the music that is helpful to me. So pop and classical music are the music that I enjoy listening to the most. Pop songs bring me energy, while classical music helps me focus on studying. Music influences me deeply. If I feel tired, lively music cheers me up. It teaches me to stay positive. When I'm sad, I will choose soft music to listen to. It helps me have a peaceful mind and gives me the feeling of staying alone.
Music is very important in our life. If there is no music, our life won't be so interesting.
音乐将世间万物都带进了美好的时空。每每听着音乐,就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。音乐有着无穷的魅力。请你以“Music makes me ”为题,补全题目并根据写作要点,用英语写一篇词数100左右的短文。
写作要点:
1. Why do you like music?
2. What kind of music do you like best?
3. How does music influence you?
Music makes me
Music is like a key, which opens the door to the world for me.
思路点拨
1. 本文是一篇应用文,说明音乐的作用以及对自己的影响,因此人称以第一人称为主。
2. 文章须包含音乐的作用、最喜欢的音乐类型以及音乐对自己的影响,时态以一般现在时为主。
3. 文章可适当增加细节,使自己的观点更加通顺。
写作模板
难句突破
1. 我喜欢那些对我有帮助的音乐。(be helpful to)
2. 流行歌曲带给我能量,而古典音乐帮助我集中精力学习。(while...)
3. 如果没有音乐,我们的生活将不会如此有趣。(if...)
高分作文
Music makes me happy
Music is like a key, which opens the door to the world for me.
I think of music as one of the best ways to wash away my worries. When I listen to it, I feel relaxed and peaceful. I like the music that is helpful to me. So pop and classical music are the music that I enjoy listening to the most. Pop songs bring me energy, while classical music helps me focus on studying. Music influences me deeply. If I feel tired, lively music cheers me up. It teaches me to stay positive. When I'm sad, I will choose soft music to listen to. It helps me have a peaceful mind and gives me the feeling of staying alone.
Music is very important in our life. If there is no music, our life won't be so interesting.
答案
1. I like the music that is helpful to me.
2. Pop songs bring me energy, while classical music helps me focus on studying.
3. If there is no music, our life won't be so interesting.
2. Pop songs bring me energy, while classical music helps me focus on studying.
3. If there is no music, our life won't be so interesting.
解析
【分析】
本题考查英语句子的正确表达,需结合给定提示(如be helpful to、while、if),运用对应句式(定语从句、并列句、条件句)完成翻译,符合英语语法与表达习惯即可。
【解析】
1. 先行词为music,用that引导定语从句,be helpful to表示“对……有帮助”,故译为:I like the music that is helpful to me.
2. while表对比,连接两个并列分句,bring sb sth表“给某人带来某物”,help sb do sth表“帮助某人做某事”,故译为:Pop songs bring me energy, while classical music helps me focus on studying.
3. if引导条件状语从句,主句用一般将来时的否定形式,故译为:If there is no music, our life won't be so interesting.
【答案】
1. I like the music that is helpful to me.
2. Pop songs bring me energy, while classical music helps me focus on studying.
3. If there is no music, our life won't be so interesting.
【知识点】
定语从句;并列连词while;条件状语从句
【点评】
本题为英语基础句式训练题,侧重考查特定短语、连词的用法及基础语法的运用,是英语写作的核心基础题型,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题考查英语句子的正确表达,需结合给定提示(如be helpful to、while、if),运用对应句式(定语从句、并列句、条件句)完成翻译,符合英语语法与表达习惯即可。
【解析】
1. 先行词为music,用that引导定语从句,be helpful to表示“对……有帮助”,故译为:I like the music that is helpful to me.
2. while表对比,连接两个并列分句,bring sb sth表“给某人带来某物”,help sb do sth表“帮助某人做某事”,故译为:Pop songs bring me energy, while classical music helps me focus on studying.
3. if引导条件状语从句,主句用一般将来时的否定形式,故译为:If there is no music, our life won't be so interesting.
【答案】
1. I like the music that is helpful to me.
2. Pop songs bring me energy, while classical music helps me focus on studying.
3. If there is no music, our life won't be so interesting.
【知识点】
定语从句;并列连词while;条件状语从句
【点评】
本题为英语基础句式训练题,侧重考查特定短语、连词的用法及基础语法的运用,是英语写作的核心基础题型,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
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