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著名的音乐家冼星海曾经说过：“音乐是人生最大的快乐；音乐是生活中的一股清泉；音乐是陶冶性情的熔炉。”音乐在我们的生活中起到十分重要的作用，请你根据以下写作要点写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。
写作要点：
1. What's your favourite music type?
2. Why do you like this kind of music?
3. What's the influence of music on your life?
著名的音乐家冼星海曾经说过：“音乐是人生最大的快乐；音乐是生活中的一股清泉；音乐是陶冶性情的熔炉。”音乐在我们的生活中起到十分重要的作用，请你根据以下写作要点写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。
写作要点：
1. What's your favourite music type?
2. Why do you like this kind of music?
3. What's the influence of music on your life?
答案
If someone asks me, "Do you like music?" I'm sure I will answer, "Of course, I do. "That's because I do believe music has a great influence on our lives.
Different people like different music. As for me, I prefer classical music that can make me feel peaceful. Maybe some people think it is hard for them to understand classical music. However, I like it because it makes me more thoughtful. Whenever I feel tired or stressed out, classical music makes me feel relaxed. Once I felt down because of making a mistake in my work, I listened to some classical music and the music really cheered me up.
All in all, music is not only the medicine of a troubled mind, but also a great help in my life.
Different people like different music. As for me, I prefer classical music that can make me feel peaceful. Maybe some people think it is hard for them to understand classical music. However, I like it because it makes me more thoughtful. Whenever I feel tired or stressed out, classical music makes me feel relaxed. Once I felt down because of making a mistake in my work, I listened to some classical music and the music really cheered me up.
All in all, music is not only the medicine of a troubled mind, but also a great help in my life.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：围绕音乐的作用，根据三个写作要点（喜欢的音乐类型、喜欢的原因、音乐对生活的影响）写100词左右的英语短文。解题思路：1. 确定自己喜爱的音乐类型（如古典音乐）；2. 结合自身感受说明喜欢该类型的原因；3. 通过具体事例阐述音乐对生活的积极影响；4. 组织语言时注意语句通顺，紧扣要点，控制词数。
【解析】
先开篇点明对音乐的喜爱，引出话题；接着说明自己喜欢古典音乐，解释喜欢的原因（让人平静、更具思考性）；再举例说明音乐的影响（疲惫时放松、低落时振作）；最后总结音乐的作用，完成短文。
【答案】
If someone asks me, "Do you like music?" I'm sure I will answer, "Of course, I do. "That's because I do believe music has a great influence on our lives.
Different people like different music. As for me, I prefer classical music that can make me feel peaceful. Maybe some people think it is hard for them to understand classical music. However, I like it because it makes me more thoughtful. Whenever I feel tired or stressed out, classical music makes me feel relaxed. Once I felt down because of making a mistake in my work, I listened to some classical music and the music really cheered me up.
All in all, music is not only the medicine of a troubled mind, but also a great help in my life.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式英语短文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣写作要求的三个要点，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，准确表达了个人对音乐的喜好、原因及音乐对生活的影响，符合词数要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作任务：围绕音乐的作用，根据三个写作要点（喜欢的音乐类型、喜欢的原因、音乐对生活的影响）写100词左右的英语短文。解题思路：1. 确定自己喜爱的音乐类型（如古典音乐）；2. 结合自身感受说明喜欢该类型的原因；3. 通过具体事例阐述音乐对生活的积极影响；4. 组织语言时注意语句通顺，紧扣要点，控制词数。
【解析】
先开篇点明对音乐的喜爱，引出话题；接着说明自己喜欢古典音乐，解释喜欢的原因（让人平静、更具思考性）；再举例说明音乐的影响（疲惫时放松、低落时振作）；最后总结音乐的作用，完成短文。
【答案】
If someone asks me, "Do you like music?" I'm sure I will answer, "Of course, I do. "That's because I do believe music has a great influence on our lives.
Different people like different music. As for me, I prefer classical music that can make me feel peaceful. Maybe some people think it is hard for them to understand classical music. However, I like it because it makes me more thoughtful. Whenever I feel tired or stressed out, classical music makes me feel relaxed. Once I felt down because of making a mistake in my work, I listened to some classical music and the music really cheered me up.
All in all, music is not only the medicine of a troubled mind, but also a great help in my life.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式英语短文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣写作要求的三个要点，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，准确表达了个人对音乐的喜好、原因及音乐对生活的影响，符合词数要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
