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写作演练＞＞
假设你是汤姆(Tom)，你作为交流生来到中国某中学。请根据提示给你家乡的朋友琳达(Linda)写一封邮件，向她介绍你现在的学校生活。80词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
提示:1. 学习情况。2. 课外活动。3. 同学关系。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:以第一人称为主。③ 按提示顺序对学校生活进行介绍。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
写作演练＞＞
假设你是汤姆(Tom)，你作为交流生来到中国某中学。请根据提示给你家乡的朋友琳达(Linda)写一封邮件，向她介绍你现在的学校生活。80词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
提示:1. 学习情况。2. 课外活动。3. 同学关系。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:以第一人称为主。③ 按提示顺序对学校生活进行介绍。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons.
I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me.
We often chat together after lunch.
We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案
One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
解析
【分析】
本题要求以汤姆的身份给琳达写一封介绍新学校生活的邮件，需用一般现在时、第一人称，涵盖学习情况、课外活动、同学关系三个要点，结构分为三段对应提纲内容，注意邮件格式与词数要求。解题思路：先明确每段核心内容，第二段写学习相关（学校作息、课程、喜欢的科目及原因），第三段写课外活动（兴趣、加入的社团），第四段写同学相处情况，最后收尾表达对学校的喜爱，确保内容紧扣要点、语言准确。
【解析】
1. 第二段（学习情况）：说明学校早上7点半开始上课，每天有六节课，最喜欢语文因为能了解中国文化；
2. 第三段（课外活动）：提到喜欢足球，是校足球队成员，周三下午放学后训练，还喜欢阅读，常从图书馆借书；
3. 第四段（同学关系）：表示在学校有很多新朋友，他们很友好，午饭后常一起聊天，互相学习帮助；
最后加上结尾句，符合邮件格式，时态正确，内容连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
【知识点】英语书信写作、一般现在时、要点式写作
【点评】本文紧扣写作提示的三个要点，结构清晰，符合邮件格式，语言简洁流畅，准确传达了新学校生活的情况，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.7
本题要求以汤姆的身份给琳达写一封介绍新学校生活的邮件，需用一般现在时、第一人称，涵盖学习情况、课外活动、同学关系三个要点，结构分为三段对应提纲内容，注意邮件格式与词数要求。解题思路：先明确每段核心内容，第二段写学习相关（学校作息、课程、喜欢的科目及原因），第三段写课外活动（兴趣、加入的社团），第四段写同学相处情况，最后收尾表达对学校的喜爱，确保内容紧扣要点、语言准确。
【解析】
1. 第二段（学习情况）：说明学校早上7点半开始上课，每天有六节课，最喜欢语文因为能了解中国文化；
2. 第三段（课外活动）：提到喜欢足球，是校足球队成员，周三下午放学后训练，还喜欢阅读，常从图书馆借书；
3. 第四段（同学关系）：表示在学校有很多新朋友，他们很友好，午饭后常一起聊天，互相学习帮助；
最后加上结尾句，符合邮件格式，时态正确，内容连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
【知识点】英语书信写作、一般现在时、要点式写作
【点评】本文紧扣写作提示的三个要点，结构清晰，符合邮件格式，语言简洁流畅，准确传达了新学校生活的情况，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.7
