2026年启东中学作业本九年级英语上册译林版盐城专版第86页答案
(2025·江苏苏州·期中)在成长的路上难免遇到青春期难题,而别人的及时帮助,往往能成为我们解开困境、收获勇气的成长力量。请你写一篇英语作文,分享在你的成长过程中,别人帮你化解难题(如学习压力、交友困扰、自我怀疑等)的故事。
【要点】1. What is the person who has helped you grow like?
2. What happened to you and him/her?
3. How do you feel?
【要求】1. 词数 100 左右。
2. 适当扩展内容,增加细节。
3. 文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。
The person who has helped me grow
The person who has helped me grow is my English teacher, Ms Li. With her warm smile and endless patience, she creates a supportive classroom where everyone feels valued.

Last term, I felt nervous about giving a speech in front of the class. Ms Li noticed my worry and spent extra time practising with me after class. She taught me to take deep breaths and speak slowly. Finally, I did well and gained confidence. Surprisingly, I won second prize!

This experience taught me that with others' help, we can overcome all kinds of difficulties. I hope everyone can find such a helpful person in their life.







答案

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The person who has helped me grow
The person who has helped me grow is my English teacher, Ms Li. With her warm smile and endless patience, she creates a supportive classroom where everyone feels valued.
Last term, I felt nervous about giving a speech in front of the class. Ms Li noticed my worry and spent extra time practising with me after class. She taught me to take deep breaths and speak slowly. Finally, I did well and gained confidence. Surprisingly, I won second prize!
This experience taught me that with others' help, we can overcome all kinds of difficulties. I hope everyone can find such a helpful person in their life.

解析

【分析】首先明确作文要求:需围绕“成长中他人帮助化解难题”的主题,涵盖人物特点、事件经过、个人感受三个要点,词数100左右,不得出现真实信息。写作思路:1. 确定帮助自己的人物并描述其特质;2. 选取具体事件,详细叙述他人帮助的过程;3. 抒发事件后的感悟,紧扣成长主题。
【解析】写作时,开篇点明帮助自己的人及性格特点;中间叙述具体事例:自己因演讲紧张,老师课后花时间辅导,教授调整状态的方法,最终成功获奖;结尾点明他人帮助的意义,抒发感悟。注意控制词数,增加细节,避免真实信息。
【答案】The person who has helped me grow
The person who has helped me grow is my English teacher, Ms Li. With her warm smile and endless patience, she creates a supportive classroom where everyone feels valued.
Last term, I felt nervous about giving a speech in front of the class. Ms Li noticed my worry and spent extra time practising with me after class. She taught me to take deep breaths and speak slowly. Finally, I did well and gained confidence. Surprisingly, I won second prize!
This experience taught me that with others' help, we can overcome all kinds of difficulties. I hope everyone can find such a helpful person in their life.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点式记叙文
【点评】本文紧扣题目所有要求,涵盖全部要点,细节丰富,情感真挚,符合词数要求,无真实信息,是一篇符合标准的初中英语作文。
【难度系数】0.6