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假如你是李明,今天早晨父母不在家,你决定自己做早餐。你尝试着做了一个鸡肉三明治,味道还不错。请你根据下面的提示问题写一篇英语短文,介绍一下你是如何做鸡肉三明治的。
1. What are the ingredients of making a chicken sandwich? (butter, bread, a tomato, lettuce and chicken);2. How do you make a chicken sandwich?
注意:1. 文中不得透露个人真实信息;2. 词数80左右。
请使用下面的表格完成自评并修改、誊写你的作文。
假如你是李明,今天早晨父母不在家,你决定自己做早餐。你尝试着做了一个鸡肉三明治,味道还不错。请你根据下面的提示问题写一篇英语短文,介绍一下你是如何做鸡肉三明治的。
1. What are the ingredients of making a chicken sandwich? (butter, bread, a tomato, lettuce and chicken);2. How do you make a chicken sandwich?
注意:1. 文中不得透露个人真实信息;2. 词数80左右。
请使用下面的表格完成自评并修改、誊写你的作文。
答案
One possible version:
I'm Li Ming. This morning, my parents were not at home, so I made a chicken sandwich for breakfast. Before cooking, I prepared all kinds of ingredients. I bought some butter, bread, a tomato, lettuce and chicken. Now, let me tell you how I made it.
First, I put the butter on a piece of bread. Next, I cut up the tomato into pieces and then put them onto the bread. Then, I put some lettuce and chicken on the bread. Finally, I put another piece of bread on the top. The chicken sandwich was ready.
How delicious it was! Why not have a try?
I'm Li Ming. This morning, my parents were not at home, so I made a chicken sandwich for breakfast. Before cooking, I prepared all kinds of ingredients. I bought some butter, bread, a tomato, lettuce and chicken. Now, let me tell you how I made it.
First, I put the butter on a piece of bread. Next, I cut up the tomato into pieces and then put them onto the bread. Then, I put some lettuce and chicken on the bread. Finally, I put another piece of bread on the top. The chicken sandwich was ready.
How delicious it was! Why not have a try?
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作要求：以第一人称叙述，时态以一般过去时为主；需包含指定食材（黄油、面包、番茄、生菜、鸡肉）和制作步骤，词数约80词。写作思路：1. 开头交代背景（父母不在家，自己做早餐）；2. 列出所需食材；3. 按制作顺序用连接词（first、next、then、finally）串联步骤；4. 结尾表达食物的味道，确保逻辑连贯、语法正确。
【解析】
1. 开头点明身份与事件：I'm Li Ming. This morning, my parents were not at home, so I made a chicken sandwich for breakfast.
2. 说明准备的食材：Before cooking, I prepared all kinds of ingredients. I bought some butter, bread, a tomato, lettuce and chicken.
3. 按顺序写制作步骤：First, I put the butter on a piece of bread. Next, I cut up the tomato into pieces and then put them onto the bread. Then, I put some lettuce and chicken on the bread. Finally, I put another piece of bread on the top. The chicken sandwich was ready.
4. 结尾表达感受：How delicious it was! Why not have a try?
全程使用第一人称，一般过去时，用连接词使步骤清晰，涵盖所有指定要点，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I'm Li Ming. This morning, my parents were not at home, so I made a chicken sandwich for breakfast. Before cooking, I prepared all kinds of ingredients. I bought some butter, bread, a tomato, lettuce and chicken. Now, let me tell you how I made it.
First, I put the butter on a piece of bread. Next, I cut up the tomato into pieces and then put them onto the bread. Then, I put some lettuce and chicken on the bread. Finally, I put another piece of bread on the top. The chicken sandwich was ready.
How delicious it was! Why not have a try?
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、步骤类表达
【点评】
该范文严格遵循题目要求，采用第一人称，以一般过去时为主要时态，完整涵盖了指定的食材和制作步骤，使用first、next等连接词使文章逻辑清晰，语法正确，词汇运用恰当，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.3
首先明确写作要求：以第一人称叙述，时态以一般过去时为主；需包含指定食材（黄油、面包、番茄、生菜、鸡肉）和制作步骤，词数约80词。写作思路：1. 开头交代背景（父母不在家，自己做早餐）；2. 列出所需食材；3. 按制作顺序用连接词（first、next、then、finally）串联步骤；4. 结尾表达食物的味道，确保逻辑连贯、语法正确。
【解析】
1. 开头点明身份与事件：I'm Li Ming. This morning, my parents were not at home, so I made a chicken sandwich for breakfast.
2. 说明准备的食材：Before cooking, I prepared all kinds of ingredients. I bought some butter, bread, a tomato, lettuce and chicken.
3. 按顺序写制作步骤：First, I put the butter on a piece of bread. Next, I cut up the tomato into pieces and then put them onto the bread. Then, I put some lettuce and chicken on the bread. Finally, I put another piece of bread on the top. The chicken sandwich was ready.
4. 结尾表达感受：How delicious it was! Why not have a try?
全程使用第一人称，一般过去时，用连接词使步骤清晰，涵盖所有指定要点，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I'm Li Ming. This morning, my parents were not at home, so I made a chicken sandwich for breakfast. Before cooking, I prepared all kinds of ingredients. I bought some butter, bread, a tomato, lettuce and chicken. Now, let me tell you how I made it.
First, I put the butter on a piece of bread. Next, I cut up the tomato into pieces and then put them onto the bread. Then, I put some lettuce and chicken on the bread. Finally, I put another piece of bread on the top. The chicken sandwich was ready.
How delicious it was! Why not have a try?
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、步骤类表达
【点评】
该范文严格遵循题目要求，采用第一人称，以一般过去时为主要时态，完整涵盖了指定的食材和制作步骤，使用first、next等连接词使文章逻辑清晰，语法正确，词汇运用恰当，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.3
项目学习
炎炎夏日里冰沙是解暑圣品，那你知道冰沙的历史以及如何做冰沙吗？请查阅资料，写一篇有关冰沙的博客。
My Food Blog About Smoothie
The history of smoothie:
Recipe
• Ingredients:
• Steps:
炎炎夏日里冰沙是解暑圣品，那你知道冰沙的历史以及如何做冰沙吗？请查阅资料，写一篇有关冰沙的博客。
My Food Blog About Smoothie
The history of smoothie:
Recipe
• Ingredients:
• Steps:
答案
My Food Blog About Smoothie
The history of smoothie:
The earliest smoothie appeared in the US in the 1930s. An ice cream seller created this cold sweet drink at first. By the 1960s, it became a popular cool treat across the world. Now it is one of the most popular summer drinks, and we can make different fruit smoothies easily at home.
Recipe
• Ingredients:
1 cup of fresh strawberries, 2 spoons of vanilla ice cream, 1 bowl of ice cubes, a little honey, 1 cup of milk
• Steps:
First, wash the strawberries and cut them into small pieces. Next, put the strawberry pieces, ice cubes, ice cream and milk all into the blender. Then turn on the blender and let it run for about one minute. If you like a sweeter taste, you can add some honey and mix them for 10 more seconds. Finally, pour the strawberry smoothie into a glass, and you can enjoy your cool tasty summer treat!
The history of smoothie:
The earliest smoothie appeared in the US in the 1930s. An ice cream seller created this cold sweet drink at first. By the 1960s, it became a popular cool treat across the world. Now it is one of the most popular summer drinks, and we can make different fruit smoothies easily at home.
Recipe
• Ingredients:
1 cup of fresh strawberries, 2 spoons of vanilla ice cream, 1 bowl of ice cubes, a little honey, 1 cup of milk
• Steps:
First, wash the strawberries and cut them into small pieces. Next, put the strawberry pieces, ice cubes, ice cream and milk all into the blender. Then turn on the blender and let it run for about one minute. If you like a sweeter taste, you can add some honey and mix them for 10 more seconds. Finally, pour the strawberry smoothie into a glass, and you can enjoy your cool tasty summer treat!
解析
【分析】本题要求撰写一篇关于冰沙的英文博客，需涵盖冰沙的历史和制作方法。解题思路：1. 查阅冰沙相关资料，梳理其发展历史，明确关键时间节点与流行情况；2. 设计一款简单易操作的冰沙食谱，列出具体材料和清晰的制作步骤；3. 用符合博客风格的英文组织内容，保证结构清晰、语言通顺。
【解析】首先确定博客主题为“My Food Blog About Smoothie”，接着整理冰沙历史：最早于20世纪30年代出现在美国，由冰淇淋卖家发明，20世纪60年代成为全球流行的清凉美食，如今是受欢迎的夏日饮品，家庭可轻松制作不同水果冰沙。然后设计食谱：准备新鲜草莓、香草冰淇淋、冰块、蜂蜜、牛奶等材料；制作步骤按顺序操作，用连接词明确流程，最后倒入杯子即可享用。
【答案】My Food Blog About Smoothie
The history of smoothie:
The earliest smoothie appeared in the US in the 1930s. An ice cream seller created this cold sweet drink at first. By the 1960s, it became a popular cool treat across the world. Now it is one of the most popular summer drinks, and we can make different fruit smoothies easily at home.
Recipe
• Ingredients:
1 cup of fresh strawberries, 2 spoons of vanilla ice cream, 1 bowl of ice cubes, a little honey, 1 cup of milk
• Steps:
First, wash the strawberries and cut them into small pieces. Next, put the strawberry pieces, ice cubes, ice cream and milk all into the blender. Then turn on the blender and let it run for about one minute. If you like a sweeter taste, you can add some honey and mix them for 10 more seconds. Finally, pour the strawberry smoothie into a glass, and you can enjoy your cool tasty summer treat!
【知识点】英文应用文写作、生活常识（冰沙相关）
【点评】本题属于项目学习类任务，结合资料查阅、英文写作与生活实践，既锻炼信息整理和英文表达能力，又贴近生活，实用性较强。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先确定博客主题为“My Food Blog About Smoothie”，接着整理冰沙历史：最早于20世纪30年代出现在美国，由冰淇淋卖家发明，20世纪60年代成为全球流行的清凉美食，如今是受欢迎的夏日饮品，家庭可轻松制作不同水果冰沙。然后设计食谱：准备新鲜草莓、香草冰淇淋、冰块、蜂蜜、牛奶等材料；制作步骤按顺序操作，用连接词明确流程，最后倒入杯子即可享用。
【答案】My Food Blog About Smoothie
The history of smoothie:
The earliest smoothie appeared in the US in the 1930s. An ice cream seller created this cold sweet drink at first. By the 1960s, it became a popular cool treat across the world. Now it is one of the most popular summer drinks, and we can make different fruit smoothies easily at home.
Recipe
• Ingredients:
1 cup of fresh strawberries, 2 spoons of vanilla ice cream, 1 bowl of ice cubes, a little honey, 1 cup of milk
• Steps:
First, wash the strawberries and cut them into small pieces. Next, put the strawberry pieces, ice cubes, ice cream and milk all into the blender. Then turn on the blender and let it run for about one minute. If you like a sweeter taste, you can add some honey and mix them for 10 more seconds. Finally, pour the strawberry smoothie into a glass, and you can enjoy your cool tasty summer treat!
【知识点】英文应用文写作、生活常识（冰沙相关）
【点评】本题属于项目学习类任务，结合资料查阅、英文写作与生活实践，既锻炼信息整理和英文表达能力，又贴近生活，实用性较强。
【难度系数】0.6
