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你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“A Day to Remember”为主题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇文章，向专栏投稿，叙述让你印象深刻的一天，并谈谈你的感受。
要求：
①根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80；
②语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁；
③文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“A Day to Remember”为主题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇文章，向专栏投稿，叙述让你印象深刻的一天，并谈谈你的感受。
要求：
①根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80；
②语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁；
③文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
答案
A Day to Remember
Last Sunday is the day to remember.
It was a bright and sunny day. I went fishing with my father. We started fishing as soon as we arrived at a clear lake. Half an hour passed,but we got no fish. I became impatient and wanted to give up. "Just wait patiently, son. Nothing in the world is easy to get." My father encouraged me, so I sat patiently to fish with my father. Finally, I got a beautiful big fish. A sense of success and happiness came to me.
I'll remember this day forever because I have learned that being patient is so important to me.
Last Sunday is the day to remember.
It was a bright and sunny day. I went fishing with my father. We started fishing as soon as we arrived at a clear lake. Half an hour passed,but we got no fish. I became impatient and wanted to give up. "Just wait patiently, son. Nothing in the world is easy to get." My father encouraged me, so I sat patiently to fish with my father. Finally, I got a beautiful big fish. A sense of success and happiness came to me.
I'll remember this day forever because I have learned that being patient is so important to me.
解析
【分析】
本次征文主题为“A Day to Remember”，核心要求是叙述印象深刻的一天并谈谈感受，词数不少于80，文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。解题思路：1. 选取贴近生活的具体事件（如与家人的经历），便于写出细节；2. 采用“总-分-总”结构：开头直接点题，明确难忘的具体日期；中间详细叙述事件的时间、地点、人物、起因、发展与结果，加入细节让内容充实；结尾升华主题，点明从事件中获得的感悟；3. 注意时态统一用一般过去时，语言流畅，避免真实信息。
【解析】
写作时需紧扣主题，遵循以下步骤：①开头：直接点题，点明Last Sunday是难忘的一天；②中间：交代背景（天气晴朗，和父亲去湖边钓鱼），描述事件过程（起初半小时没钓到鱼，自己不耐烦想放弃，父亲鼓励要耐心），最终结果（钓到大鱼，获得成就感）；③结尾：点明感悟，强调耐心的重要性。全文用一般过去时，词数达标，无真实信息，符合征文要求。
【答案】
A Day to Remember
Last Sunday is the day to remember.
It was a bright and sunny day. I went fishing with my father. We started fishing as soon as we arrived at a clear lake. Half an hour passed,but we got no fish. I became impatient and wanted to give up. "Just wait patiently, son. Nothing in the world is easy to get." My father encouraged me, so I sat patiently to fish with my father. Finally, I got a beautiful big fish. A sense of success and happiness came to me.
I'll remember this day forever because I have learned that being patient is so important to me.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、主题感悟表达
【点评】
范文紧扣征文主题，选取和父亲钓鱼的日常小事，通过细节描写（如钓鱼时的波折、父亲的鼓励）让内容真实生动，结尾点明感悟，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合各项要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次征文主题为“A Day to Remember”，核心要求是叙述印象深刻的一天并谈谈感受，词数不少于80，文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。解题思路：1. 选取贴近生活的具体事件（如与家人的经历），便于写出细节；2. 采用“总-分-总”结构：开头直接点题，明确难忘的具体日期；中间详细叙述事件的时间、地点、人物、起因、发展与结果，加入细节让内容充实；结尾升华主题，点明从事件中获得的感悟；3. 注意时态统一用一般过去时，语言流畅，避免真实信息。
【解析】
写作时需紧扣主题，遵循以下步骤：①开头：直接点题，点明Last Sunday是难忘的一天；②中间：交代背景（天气晴朗，和父亲去湖边钓鱼），描述事件过程（起初半小时没钓到鱼，自己不耐烦想放弃，父亲鼓励要耐心），最终结果（钓到大鱼，获得成就感）；③结尾：点明感悟，强调耐心的重要性。全文用一般过去时，词数达标，无真实信息，符合征文要求。
【答案】
A Day to Remember
Last Sunday is the day to remember.
It was a bright and sunny day. I went fishing with my father. We started fishing as soon as we arrived at a clear lake. Half an hour passed,but we got no fish. I became impatient and wanted to give up. "Just wait patiently, son. Nothing in the world is easy to get." My father encouraged me, so I sat patiently to fish with my father. Finally, I got a beautiful big fish. A sense of success and happiness came to me.
I'll remember this day forever because I have learned that being patient is so important to me.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、主题感悟表达
【点评】
范文紧扣征文主题，选取和父亲钓鱼的日常小事，通过细节描写（如钓鱼时的波折、父亲的鼓励）让内容真实生动，结尾点明感悟，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合各项要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
