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四、书面表达
请你根据下面表格中的内容提示，以“Great Changes in My Hometown”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述家乡所发生的变化。
要求：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 短文标题已写好，不计入总词数。
Great Changes in My Hometown
Great Changes in My Hometown
请你根据下面表格中的内容提示，以“Great Changes in My Hometown”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述家乡所发生的变化。
| 过去 | 现在 |
| 房屋又小又旧，人们生活贫困。 | 房屋宽敞明亮，新建了许多高楼大厦，人们过上了幸福的生活。 |
| 环境污染严重，垃圾随处可见。 | 环境变好了，山更绿了，水更清了，天更蓝了。 |
| 交通不方便，游客很少。 | 交通便捷，很多人拥有自己的汽车，很多游客来旅游。 |
要求：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 短文标题已写好，不计入总词数。
Great Changes in My Hometown
Great Changes in My Hometown
答案
One possible version:
Great Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very poor. The houses were small and old. People lived a hard life. What's more, the environment was polluted seriously and garbage could be seen everywhere. Besides, the traffic was inconvenient and there were few tourists.
However, with the development of society, great changes have taken place now. There are many high-rise buildings and the houses are big and bright. People are living a happy life. The environment has become better. The mountains are greener, the water is clearer and the sky is bluer. Also, the traffic is convenient. Many people have their own cars and a lot of tourists come to visit my hometown. I'm proud of the great changes in my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.
Great Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very poor. The houses were small and old. People lived a hard life. What's more, the environment was polluted seriously and garbage could be seen everywhere. Besides, the traffic was inconvenient and there were few tourists.
However, with the development of society, great changes have taken place now. There are many high-rise buildings and the houses are big and bright. People are living a happy life. The environment has become better. The mountains are greener, the water is clearer and the sky is bluer. Also, the traffic is convenient. Many people have their own cars and a lot of tourists come to visit my hometown. I'm proud of the great changes in my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇对比家乡过去与现在变化的英语书面表达，解题思路如下：1. 明确文章结构：采用“点题→过去状况→现在变化→感受展望”的结构；2. 紧扣表格提示的三个核心对比点（房屋、环境、交通），分别对应过去和现在的描述；3. 时态选择：过去的情况用一般过去时，现在的变化用一般现在时或现在完成时；4. 使用衔接词（如in the past, however）串联内容，确保逻辑连贯，同时控制词数在80左右。
【解析】
1. 开头点题，引出家乡变化的主题；
2. 描述过去的状况：用一般过去时，说明房屋小旧、生活贫困、环境污染、交通不便游客少；
3. 转折写现在的变化：用现在完成时或一般现在时，对应过去的三点，说明房屋宽敞、环境变好、交通便捷游客多；
4. 结尾抒发对家乡变化的自豪，展望未来；
5. 确保覆盖所有表格要点，时态正确，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Great Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very poor. The houses were small and old. People lived a hard life. What's more, the environment was polluted seriously and garbage could be seen everywhere. Besides, the traffic was inconvenient and there were few tourists.
However, with the development of society, great changes have taken place now. There are many high-rise buildings and the houses are big and bright. People are living a happy life. The environment has become better. The mountains are greener, the water is clearer and the sky is bluer. Also, the traffic is convenient. Many people have their own cars and a lot of tourists come to visit my hometown. I'm proud of the great changes in my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、时态运用、对比类写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，采用对比手法清晰展现家乡的变化，时态运用准确，衔接词自然流畅，覆盖了表格所有要点，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一篇对比家乡过去与现在变化的英语书面表达，解题思路如下：1. 明确文章结构：采用“点题→过去状况→现在变化→感受展望”的结构；2. 紧扣表格提示的三个核心对比点（房屋、环境、交通），分别对应过去和现在的描述；3. 时态选择：过去的情况用一般过去时，现在的变化用一般现在时或现在完成时；4. 使用衔接词（如in the past, however）串联内容，确保逻辑连贯，同时控制词数在80左右。
【解析】
1. 开头点题，引出家乡变化的主题；
2. 描述过去的状况：用一般过去时，说明房屋小旧、生活贫困、环境污染、交通不便游客少；
3. 转折写现在的变化：用现在完成时或一般现在时，对应过去的三点，说明房屋宽敞、环境变好、交通便捷游客多；
4. 结尾抒发对家乡变化的自豪，展望未来；
5. 确保覆盖所有表格要点，时态正确，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Great Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very poor. The houses were small and old. People lived a hard life. What's more, the environment was polluted seriously and garbage could be seen everywhere. Besides, the traffic was inconvenient and there were few tourists.
However, with the development of society, great changes have taken place now. There are many high-rise buildings and the houses are big and bright. People are living a happy life. The environment has become better. The mountains are greener, the water is clearer and the sky is bluer. Also, the traffic is convenient. Many people have their own cars and a lot of tourists come to visit my hometown. I'm proud of the great changes in my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、时态运用、对比类写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，采用对比手法清晰展现家乡的变化，时态运用准确，衔接词自然流畅，覆盖了表格所有要点，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
