主题写作指导
【话题分析】
本单元以“相同还是不同”为话题,运用形容词或副词的比较级对不同人或事物的外貌特征、性格特征和兴趣爱好等进行比较。学会交友,合理应对朋友之间的差异,并且思考成长的变化,总结进步和得失。
【佳句积累】
1. 我最好的朋友与我完全不同。
My best friend is quite
2. 我并不在乎我的朋友们是否比我更优秀。
I don’t
3. 我妹妹害羞,所以对她来说交朋友不容易。
My sister is shy so
4. 我篮球打得和他一样好。
I play basketball
5. 刘浩和我都会打篮球,但是他打得比我好。
6. 我不在意我的朋友与我相同或者不同。
I don’t
7. 交朋友最好的方法是微笑。
8. 作为朋友,我认为我们应该互相帮助,真正关心彼此。
As friends ,I think we
【话题分析】
本单元以“相同还是不同”为话题,运用形容词或副词的比较级对不同人或事物的外貌特征、性格特征和兴趣爱好等进行比较。学会交友,合理应对朋友之间的差异,并且思考成长的变化,总结进步和得失。
【佳句积累】
1. 我最好的朋友与我完全不同。
My best friend is quite
different
from
me.2. 我并不在乎我的朋友们是否比我更优秀。
I don’t
care
if/whether
my friends are better
than
me.3. 我妹妹害羞,所以对她来说交朋友不容易。
My sister is shy so
it's
not easy for
her to
make
friends.4. 我篮球打得和他一样好。
I play basketball
as
well
as
he does.5. 刘浩和我都会打篮球,但是他打得比我好。
Both
Liu Hao and
I can play basketball ,but he plays it better
than
me.6. 我不在意我的朋友与我相同或者不同。
I don’t
care
if/whether
my friends are the
same
as
me or different
.7. 交朋友最好的方法是微笑。
The
best
way
to
make friends is to
smile
.8. 作为朋友,我认为我们应该互相帮助,真正关心彼此。
As friends ,I think we
should
help and truly care
about
each other.答案
1. different from
2. care if/whether; better than
3. it's; for; to make
4. as well as
5. Both; and; better than
6. care if/whether; the same as; different
7. The best way to; to smile
8. should; care about
2. care if/whether; better than
3. it's; for; to make
4. as well as
5. Both; and; better than
6. care if/whether; the same as; different
7. The best way to; to smile
8. should; care about
解析
【分析】
本题围绕单元话题“相同还是不同”,考察英语核心短语、句型及比较级的运用,需结合固定搭配、常用句型结构逐一填空。解题时,先回忆每句对应的固定表达:1.对应“与……不同”的固定搭配;2.对应“在乎”的短语、宾语从句引导词及比较级结构;3.对应it作形式主语的固定句型;4.对应原级比较结构;5.对应“两者都”的短语及比较级;6.对应“在乎”“与……相同”及“不同”的表达;7.对应“做某事最好的方法”的结构;8.对应情态动词及“关心”的短语。
【解析】
1. 固定搭配be different from表示“与……不同”,符合句意,故填different from;
2. “在乎”用care about,宾语从句用if/whether(是否)引导,“比……优秀”用副词well的比较级better than,故填care if/whether; better than;
3. 固定句型It's + adj. + for sb. + to do sth.中it作形式主语,真正主语是后面的不定式,故填it's; for; to make;
4. 原级比较结构as + 副词原级 + as表示“和……一样……”,此处用well修饰play basketball,故填as well as;
5. “两者都”用both…and…,“比……好”用well的比较级better than,故填Both; and; better than;
6. “在乎”用care,宾语从句用if/whether引导,“与……相同”是the same as,“不同”用形容词different,故填care if/whether; the same as; different;
7. “做某事最好的方法”是the best way to do sth,不定式作表语,故填The best way to; to smile;
8. 情态动词should表示“应该”,固定短语care about表示“关心”,故填should; care about。
【答案】
1. different from
2. care if/whether; better than
3. it's; for; to make
4. as well as
5. Both; and; better than
6. care if/whether; the same as; different
7. The best way to; to smile
8. should; care about
【知识点】
固定搭配、形容词比较级、固定句型
【点评】
本题是英语写作的基础积累题,围绕单元交友话题考察核心表达,帮助学生掌握比较级的运用,为主题写作打基础,难度较低。
【难度系数】
0.8
本题围绕单元话题“相同还是不同”,考察英语核心短语、句型及比较级的运用,需结合固定搭配、常用句型结构逐一填空。解题时,先回忆每句对应的固定表达:1.对应“与……不同”的固定搭配;2.对应“在乎”的短语、宾语从句引导词及比较级结构;3.对应it作形式主语的固定句型;4.对应原级比较结构;5.对应“两者都”的短语及比较级;6.对应“在乎”“与……相同”及“不同”的表达;7.对应“做某事最好的方法”的结构;8.对应情态动词及“关心”的短语。
【解析】
1. 固定搭配be different from表示“与……不同”,符合句意,故填different from;
2. “在乎”用care about,宾语从句用if/whether(是否)引导,“比……优秀”用副词well的比较级better than,故填care if/whether; better than;
3. 固定句型It's + adj. + for sb. + to do sth.中it作形式主语,真正主语是后面的不定式,故填it's; for; to make;
4. 原级比较结构as + 副词原级 + as表示“和……一样……”,此处用well修饰play basketball,故填as well as;
5. “两者都”用both…and…,“比……好”用well的比较级better than,故填Both; and; better than;
6. “在乎”用care,宾语从句用if/whether引导,“与……相同”是the same as,“不同”用形容词different,故填care if/whether; the same as; different;
7. “做某事最好的方法”是the best way to do sth,不定式作表语,故填The best way to; to smile;
8. 情态动词should表示“应该”,固定短语care about表示“关心”,故填should; care about。
【答案】
1. different from
2. care if/whether; better than
3. it's; for; to make
4. as well as
5. Both; and; better than
6. care if/whether; the same as; different
7. The best way to; to smile
8. should; care about
【知识点】
固定搭配、形容词比较级、固定句型
【点评】
本题是英语写作的基础积累题,围绕单元交友话题考察核心表达,帮助学生掌握比较级的运用,为主题写作打基础,难度较低。
【难度系数】
0.8
【写作任务】
假设你是李明。你有一个无话不说的好朋友,请你写一封电子邮件向交换生 Peter 介绍一下你最好的朋友,要点如下:
(1)简要介绍你们之间外貌和性格上的异同;
(2)分享一件发生在你们之间的事;
(3)表达自己对友谊的看法,并邀请 Peter 介绍他的好朋友。
注意:(1)不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数70左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
审题思路
1.体裁:应用文 2.人称:第一人称、第三人称 3.时态:一般现在时、一般过去时
谋篇布局

习作演练
Dear Peter,
I have a best friend. His name is Wang Fan. I'd like to introduce him to you.
Could you introduce your best friend? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
假设你是李明。你有一个无话不说的好朋友,请你写一封电子邮件向交换生 Peter 介绍一下你最好的朋友,要点如下:
(1)简要介绍你们之间外貌和性格上的异同;
(2)分享一件发生在你们之间的事;
(3)表达自己对友谊的看法,并邀请 Peter 介绍他的好朋友。
注意:(1)不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数70左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
审题思路
1.体裁:应用文 2.人称:第一人称、第三人称 3.时态:一般现在时、一般过去时
谋篇布局
习作演练
Dear Peter,
I have a best friend. His name is Wang Fan. I'd like to introduce him to you.
He is taller and heavier than me. He is more outgoing than me. But we are both hard-working. Let me tell you a story between us.
Last year, I came to a new school. I felt very lonely. One day, my classmates were playing with their friends, but I was afraid to make friends. Suddenly, Wang Fan asked me to join them. It made me happy and warm. After that, we became good friends.
A person without a friend is like the world without the sun.
Could you introduce your best friend? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
答案
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I have a best friend. His name is Wang Fan. I'd like to introduce him to you. He is taller and heavier than me. He is more outgoing than me. But we are both hard-working. Let me tell you a story between us.
Last year, I came to a new school. I felt very lonely. One day, my classmates were playing with their friends, but I was afraid to make friends. Suddenly, Wang Fan asked me to join them. It made me happy and warm. After that, we became good friends.
A person without a friend is like the world without the sun.
Could you introduce your best friend? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
Dear Peter,
I have a best friend. His name is Wang Fan. I'd like to introduce him to you. He is taller and heavier than me. He is more outgoing than me. But we are both hard-working. Let me tell you a story between us.
Last year, I came to a new school. I felt very lonely. One day, my classmates were playing with their friends, but I was afraid to make friends. Suddenly, Wang Fan asked me to join them. It made me happy and warm. After that, we became good friends.
A person without a friend is like the world without the sun.
Could you introduce your best friend? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务是给交换生Peter写邮件介绍自己最好的朋友,需覆盖三个核心要点:一是朋友与自己外貌、性格的异同;二是分享一件和朋友相处的事;三是表达对友谊的看法并邀请Peter介绍他的好朋友。结合给定的思维导图结构,开头和结尾已给出,需按逻辑补写内容:先说明外貌性格的差异与相同点,再用一般过去时讲述相处的经历,最后表达友谊观点并完成邀请,确保语句连贯、符合邮件格式,不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 衔接开篇:承接开头,先写朋友的外貌(比我高、重)和性格(更外向)的差异,再点明两人都勤奋的相同点,对应第一个要点;
2. 叙事正文:用一般过去时,讲述转学后感到孤独、不敢交朋友,朋友主动邀请自己加入的经历,对应第二个要点;
3. 结尾表达:引用谚语说明友谊的重要性,再邀请Peter介绍他的好朋友,对应第三个要点;
4. 全程注意时态(现状用一般现在时,事件用一般过去时),保证语句连贯,词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I have a best friend. His name is Wang Fan. I'd like to introduce him to you. He is taller and heavier than me. He is more outgoing than me. But we are both hard-working. Let me tell you a story between us.
Last year, I came to a new school. I felt very lonely. One day, my classmates were playing with their friends, but I was afraid to make friends. Suddenly, Wang Fan asked me to join them. It made me happy and warm. After that, we became good friends.
A person without a friend is like the world without the sun.
Could you introduce your best friend? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英语应用文写作;形容词比较级;一般过去时
【点评】
本文完全覆盖题目要求的所有要点,结构清晰,符合邮件格式,时态运用准确,语句连贯自然,用词恰当,是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本次写作任务是给交换生Peter写邮件介绍自己最好的朋友,需覆盖三个核心要点:一是朋友与自己外貌、性格的异同;二是分享一件和朋友相处的事;三是表达对友谊的看法并邀请Peter介绍他的好朋友。结合给定的思维导图结构,开头和结尾已给出,需按逻辑补写内容:先说明外貌性格的差异与相同点,再用一般过去时讲述相处的经历,最后表达友谊观点并完成邀请,确保语句连贯、符合邮件格式,不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 衔接开篇:承接开头,先写朋友的外貌(比我高、重)和性格(更外向)的差异,再点明两人都勤奋的相同点,对应第一个要点;
2. 叙事正文:用一般过去时,讲述转学后感到孤独、不敢交朋友,朋友主动邀请自己加入的经历,对应第二个要点;
3. 结尾表达:引用谚语说明友谊的重要性,再邀请Peter介绍他的好朋友,对应第三个要点;
4. 全程注意时态(现状用一般现在时,事件用一般过去时),保证语句连贯,词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I have a best friend. His name is Wang Fan. I'd like to introduce him to you. He is taller and heavier than me. He is more outgoing than me. But we are both hard-working. Let me tell you a story between us.
Last year, I came to a new school. I felt very lonely. One day, my classmates were playing with their friends, but I was afraid to make friends. Suddenly, Wang Fan asked me to join them. It made me happy and warm. After that, we became good friends.
A person without a friend is like the world without the sun.
Could you introduce your best friend? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英语应用文写作;形容词比较级;一般过去时
【点评】
本文完全覆盖题目要求的所有要点,结构清晰,符合邮件格式,时态运用准确,语句连贯自然,用词恰当,是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
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