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假如你是李华，请你根据杂志 TEENS TODAY 的 TEEN VOICE 栏目的征稿启事，用英语写一篇短文给该杂志社投稿。
Hi! I'm Sigmund Friend, the editor of the magazine TEENS TODAY. Art is the guiding light of the world. You are welcome to share your ideas about art with us.
1. Present your opinion on the importance of art.
2. Introduce your favourite art form.
3. Share your experience and feeling.
We're looking forward to your sharing.
【要求】（1）须包含上文所有要点，可适当发挥；（2）不得出现与你相关的真实信息；（3）100词左右。
Dear editor,
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，请你根据杂志 TEENS TODAY 的 TEEN VOICE 栏目的征稿启事，用英语写一篇短文给该杂志社投稿。
Hi! I'm Sigmund Friend, the editor of the magazine TEENS TODAY. Art is the guiding light of the world. You are welcome to share your ideas about art with us.
1. Present your opinion on the importance of art.
2. Introduce your favourite art form.
3. Share your experience and feeling.
We're looking forward to your sharing.
【要求】（1）须包含上文所有要点，可适当发挥；（2）不得出现与你相关的真实信息；（3）100词左右。
Dear editor,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear editor,
I totally agree with you.For me,it is not just a hobby,but a way to slow down and see the beauty around me.My favourite art form is Chinese painting,which uses simple lines and soft colours to show the beauty of nature.I was first drawn to it when I saw a painting of bamboo at a museum.Later,I decided to learn it.The teacher told me that Chinese painting is not just about skills,but about feeling.I learned to observe the world more carefully.Every time I paint,I feel calm and peaceful just like having a quiet conversation with nature.
Chinese painting has taught me to appreciate small,beautiful moments in life.It is a treasure of our culture,so I hope more people will come to love it.(共136词)
Yours,
Li Hua
I totally agree with you.For me,it is not just a hobby,but a way to slow down and see the beauty around me.My favourite art form is Chinese painting,which uses simple lines and soft colours to show the beauty of nature.I was first drawn to it when I saw a painting of bamboo at a museum.Later,I decided to learn it.The teacher told me that Chinese painting is not just about skills,but about feeling.I learned to observe the world more carefully.Every time I paint,I feel calm and peaceful just like having a quiet conversation with nature.
Chinese painting has taught me to appreciate small,beautiful moments in life.It is a treasure of our culture,so I hope more people will come to love it.(共136词)
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作任务，要求以李华的身份给杂志《TEENS TODAY》的“TEEN VOICE”栏目投稿，需完成三个核心要点：一是阐述艺术的重要性，二是介绍自己喜爱的艺术形式，三是分享相关经历与感受。写作时需注意：语气符合青少年身份，避免真实个人信息，控制字数在100词左右，确保所有要点覆盖，语言表达流畅自然。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇回应编辑，点明艺术对自己的意义——不仅是爱好，更是放慢节奏、发现生活美好的方式，体现艺术的重要性；
2. 介绍最喜欢的艺术形式为中国画，说明其用简单线条和柔和色彩展现自然之美的特点；
3. 分享接触中国画的经历：在博物馆看到竹子画被吸引，随后学习中国画，领悟到中国画不仅是技巧，更是对世界的细致观察，每次创作都感到平静；
4. 收尾升华，表达中国画作为文化瑰宝的价值，希望更多人喜爱，完成投稿内容，符合字数要求。
【答案】
Dear editor,
I totally agree with you.For me,it is not just a hobby,but a way to slow down and see the beauty around me.My favourite art form is Chinese painting,which uses simple lines and soft colours to show the beauty of nature.I was first drawn to it when I saw a painting of bamboo at a museum.Later,I decided to learn it.The teacher told me that Chinese painting is not just about skills,but about feeling.I learned to observe the world more carefully.Every time I paint,I feel calm and peaceful just like having a quiet conversation with nature.
Chinese painting has taught me to appreciate small,beautiful moments in life.It is a treasure of our culture,so I hope more people will come to love it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点覆盖写作、英语情感表达
【点评】
该投稿信紧扣征稿要求，完整覆盖所有指定要点，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合李华的身份设定，既清晰表达了对艺术的理解，又结合个人经历增强了内容的感染力，是一篇符合要求的优秀投稿。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作任务，要求以李华的身份给杂志《TEENS TODAY》的“TEEN VOICE”栏目投稿，需完成三个核心要点：一是阐述艺术的重要性，二是介绍自己喜爱的艺术形式，三是分享相关经历与感受。写作时需注意：语气符合青少年身份，避免真实个人信息，控制字数在100词左右，确保所有要点覆盖，语言表达流畅自然。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇回应编辑，点明艺术对自己的意义——不仅是爱好，更是放慢节奏、发现生活美好的方式，体现艺术的重要性；
2. 介绍最喜欢的艺术形式为中国画，说明其用简单线条和柔和色彩展现自然之美的特点；
3. 分享接触中国画的经历：在博物馆看到竹子画被吸引，随后学习中国画，领悟到中国画不仅是技巧，更是对世界的细致观察，每次创作都感到平静；
4. 收尾升华，表达中国画作为文化瑰宝的价值，希望更多人喜爱，完成投稿内容，符合字数要求。
【答案】
Dear editor,
I totally agree with you.For me,it is not just a hobby,but a way to slow down and see the beauty around me.My favourite art form is Chinese painting,which uses simple lines and soft colours to show the beauty of nature.I was first drawn to it when I saw a painting of bamboo at a museum.Later,I decided to learn it.The teacher told me that Chinese painting is not just about skills,but about feeling.I learned to observe the world more carefully.Every time I paint,I feel calm and peaceful just like having a quiet conversation with nature.
Chinese painting has taught me to appreciate small,beautiful moments in life.It is a treasure of our culture,so I hope more people will come to love it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点覆盖写作、英语情感表达
【点评】
该投稿信紧扣征稿要求，完整覆盖所有指定要点，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合李华的身份设定，既清晰表达了对艺术的理解，又结合个人经历增强了内容的感染力，是一篇符合要求的优秀投稿。
【难度系数】
0.5
