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海洋是大自然馈赠给人类的特殊礼物。从某种意义上来说，海洋是生命之源。保护海洋就是保护人类自己。然而，如今海洋正遭受人类的肆意破坏。全人类应当立即行动起来，采取有效措施保护海洋。
作为中学生，你理应承担起这份责任。为此，请你写一篇英语短文发表在学校英语报上，呼吁全体同学行动起来，共同守护海洋生态。
写作要点：
• What problems is the ocean facing nowadays?
(overfish; dump plastic waste; pollute it with chemicals...)
• What should we do to protect the ocean?
(stop throwing rubbish; learn more about the ocean; educate others to protect the ocean; ...)
• What difference will it make?
要求:1. 包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;2. 词数 80 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The sea is a special gift from nature. In a sense, it is the source of life. Protecting the sea is protecting ourselves. However,
海洋是大自然馈赠给人类的特殊礼物。从某种意义上来说，海洋是生命之源。保护海洋就是保护人类自己。然而，如今海洋正遭受人类的肆意破坏。全人类应当立即行动起来，采取有效措施保护海洋。
作为中学生，你理应承担起这份责任。为此，请你写一篇英语短文发表在学校英语报上，呼吁全体同学行动起来，共同守护海洋生态。
写作要点：
• What problems is the ocean facing nowadays?
(overfish; dump plastic waste; pollute it with chemicals...)
• What should we do to protect the ocean?
(stop throwing rubbish; learn more about the ocean; educate others to protect the ocean; ...)
• What difference will it make?
要求:1. 包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;2. 词数 80 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The sea is a special gift from nature. In a sense, it is the source of life. Protecting the sea is protecting ourselves. However,
the ocean is facing serious problems nowadays. Many people overfish, which reduces the number of marine creatures greatly.
Besides, people often dump plastic waste into the sea and pollute it with harmful chemicals, making the marine environment worse.
As middle school students, we have a duty to protect it. First, we must stop throwing any rubbish into the sea.
Second, we should learn more about the ocean to know its importance.
What's more, we can educate our family and friends to join in the marine protection.
Taking action will make a great difference. It can protect marine creatures, keep the ocean clean and healthy,
and help humans live in harmony with the sea forever.
答案
标准提分版：
The sea is a special gift from nature. In a sense, it is the source of life. Protecting the sea is protecting ourselves. However, the ocean is facing serious problems nowadays. Many people overfish, which reduces the number of marine creatures greatly. Besides, people often dump plastic waste into the sea and pollute it with harmful chemicals, making the marine environment worse.
As middle school students, we have a duty to protect it. First, we must stop throwing any rubbish into the sea. Second, we should learn more about the ocean to know its importance. What's more, we can educate our family and friends to join in the marine protection.
Taking action will make a great difference. It can protect marine creatures, keep the ocean clean and healthy, and help humans live in harmony with the sea forever.
进阶优化版：
The sea is a special gift from nature. In a sense, it is the source of life. Protecting the sea is protecting ourselves. However, our ocean is in great danger today.
First, overfishing is making many fish species disappear. Second, we dump tons of plastic waste into the sea every year, which kills many sea animals. Also, factories pour chemical waste directly into the ocean, polluting the water badly.
As middle school students, we can also help protect the ocean. Firstly, we should never throw rubbish into rivers or seas. Secondly, we can learn more about the ocean through books and the internet. Most importantly, we can educate our family and friends to protect the ocean.
If we take action, many positive changes will happen. More fish will survive and sea animals will live safely. The water will become cleaner. Together, our small actions can make a big difference to the ocean's health. Let's start protecting our blue planet now!
The sea is a special gift from nature. In a sense, it is the source of life. Protecting the sea is protecting ourselves. However, the ocean is facing serious problems nowadays. Many people overfish, which reduces the number of marine creatures greatly. Besides, people often dump plastic waste into the sea and pollute it with harmful chemicals, making the marine environment worse.
As middle school students, we have a duty to protect it. First, we must stop throwing any rubbish into the sea. Second, we should learn more about the ocean to know its importance. What's more, we can educate our family and friends to join in the marine protection.
Taking action will make a great difference. It can protect marine creatures, keep the ocean clean and healthy, and help humans live in harmony with the sea forever.
进阶优化版：
The sea is a special gift from nature. In a sense, it is the source of life. Protecting the sea is protecting ourselves. However, our ocean is in great danger today.
First, overfishing is making many fish species disappear. Second, we dump tons of plastic waste into the sea every year, which kills many sea animals. Also, factories pour chemical waste directly into the ocean, polluting the water badly.
As middle school students, we can also help protect the ocean. Firstly, we should never throw rubbish into rivers or seas. Secondly, we can learn more about the ocean through books and the internet. Most importantly, we can educate our family and friends to protect the ocean.
If we take action, many positive changes will happen. More fish will survive and sea animals will live safely. The water will become cleaner. Together, our small actions can make a big difference to the ocean's health. Let's start protecting our blue planet now!
解析
【分析】
首先承接给定开头，先明确海洋当前面临的问题，需覆盖题目要求的过度捕捞、塑料垃圾倾倒、化学污染等要点；接着作为中学生，提出具体可行的保护措施，包括停止乱扔垃圾、学习海洋知识、宣传保护理念；最后说明行动带来的积极改变，确保所有写作要点都涵盖，词数符合要求，语言贴合中学生身份。
【解析】
按照写作要点依次展开：1. 海洋面临的问题：过度捕捞减少海洋生物数量，倾倒塑料垃圾、排放化学物质污染海洋；2. 中学生的做法：停止乱扔垃圾，学习海洋知识，教育他人；3. 行动的意义：保护海洋生物，保持海洋清洁，实现人与自然和谐。组织语言时注意衔接自然，符合英语表达习惯，控制词数80左右。
【答案】
The sea is a special gift from nature. In a sense, it is the source of life. Protecting the sea is protecting ourselves. However, the ocean is facing serious problems nowadays. Many people overfish, which reduces the number of marine creatures greatly. Besides, people often dump plastic waste into the sea and pollute it with harmful chemicals, making the marine environment worse.
As middle school students, we have a duty to protect it. First, we must stop throwing any rubbish into the sea. Second, we should learn more about the ocean to know its importance. What's more, we can educate our family and friends to join in the marine protection.
Taking action will make a great difference. It can protect marine creatures, keep the ocean clean and healthy, and help humans live in harmony with the sea forever.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题作文
【点评】
本文紧扣写作要求，涵盖所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁明了，符合中学生写作水平，呼吁性强，适合发表在学校英语报上。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先承接给定开头，先明确海洋当前面临的问题，需覆盖题目要求的过度捕捞、塑料垃圾倾倒、化学污染等要点；接着作为中学生，提出具体可行的保护措施，包括停止乱扔垃圾、学习海洋知识、宣传保护理念；最后说明行动带来的积极改变，确保所有写作要点都涵盖，词数符合要求，语言贴合中学生身份。
【解析】
按照写作要点依次展开：1. 海洋面临的问题：过度捕捞减少海洋生物数量，倾倒塑料垃圾、排放化学物质污染海洋；2. 中学生的做法：停止乱扔垃圾，学习海洋知识，教育他人；3. 行动的意义：保护海洋生物，保持海洋清洁，实现人与自然和谐。组织语言时注意衔接自然，符合英语表达习惯，控制词数80左右。
【答案】
The sea is a special gift from nature. In a sense, it is the source of life. Protecting the sea is protecting ourselves. However, the ocean is facing serious problems nowadays. Many people overfish, which reduces the number of marine creatures greatly. Besides, people often dump plastic waste into the sea and pollute it with harmful chemicals, making the marine environment worse.
As middle school students, we have a duty to protect it. First, we must stop throwing any rubbish into the sea. Second, we should learn more about the ocean to know its importance. What's more, we can educate our family and friends to join in the marine protection.
Taking action will make a great difference. It can protect marine creatures, keep the ocean clean and healthy, and help humans live in harmony with the sea forever.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题作文
【点评】
本文紧扣写作要求，涵盖所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁明了，符合中学生写作水平，呼吁性强，适合发表在学校英语报上。
【难度系数】
0.6
