九、书面表达。
假设你是六年级学生 Li Ming,你的英国笔友 Tom 在邮件中询问你的一次难忘的旅行。
请你写一封邮件介绍你的旅行经历。要求:简单描述旅行中的你喜爱的地方,按顺序说明你在旅行中做了什么,并分享你的感受。不少于 5 句话。
Dear Tom,








Yours,
Li Ming

Dear Tom,
How are you? I'd love to tell you about my unforgettable trip to Qingdao last summer. My favourite place there is the blue seaside, the sand is soft and the sea water is very clean. On the first day, I swam in the sea and picked lots of colourful shells with my parents. On the second day, we climbed Mount Lao and took many beautiful photos. On the last day of the trip, we ate a lot of fresh and tasty seafood. I felt so happy during this trip, and I will never forget this wonderful experience. Would you like to come to Qingdao for a trip with me someday?
Yours,
Li Ming

【分析】本题是六年级英语书面表达题，要求以Li Ming的身份给英国笔友Tom写邮件，介绍一次难忘的旅行。解题思路：①遵循邮件格式，开头问候并引出旅行主题；②描述旅行中喜爱的地方及其特点；③按时间顺序（如第一天、第二天、最后一天）列举旅行活动；④分享旅行感受，可适当发出邀请。需符合六年级英语水平，语句通顺，不少于5句话。
【解析】按照邮件写作规范，先写问候语引出要讲述的旅行；接着描述喜爱的海边（软沙、干净海水）；再按时间顺序写第一天游泳捡贝壳、第二天爬崂山拍照、最后一天吃海鲜；最后表达开心的感受并邀请Tom同游，确保内容连贯，满足要求。
【答案】Dear Tom,
How are you? I'd love to tell you about my unforgettable trip to Qingdao last summer. My favourite place there is the blue seaside, the sand is soft and the sea water is very clean. On the first day, I swam in the sea and picked lots of colourful shells with my parents. On the second day, we climbed Mount Lao and took many beautiful photos. On the last day of the trip, we ate a lot of fresh and tasty seafood. I felt so happy during this trip, and I will never forget this wonderful experience. Would you like to come to Qingdao for a trip with me someday?
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】英语邮件写作、旅行话题表达、一般过去时
【点评】本题贴近学生生活，考查学生的英语叙事与书面表达能力，要求清晰梳理旅行经历并组织成通顺邮件，难度适中，适合六年级学生练习。
【难度系数】0.6