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五、书面表达。
学校英文报举办主题为“宿迁的变化”的征文活动。请根据下表的提示，以“The changes in Suqian”为主题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下它的变化。
要求：1. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；3. 90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The changes in Suqian
Many changes have taken place in Suqian over the years.
学校英文报举办主题为“宿迁的变化”的征文活动。请根据下表的提示，以“The changes in Suqian”为主题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下它的变化。
要求：1. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；3. 90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The changes in Suqian
Many changes have taken place in Suqian over the years.
答案
五、One possible version:
The changes in Suqian
Many changes have taken place in Suqian over the years.
In the past, Suqian was full of natural beauty. There were green mountains and clear rivers, with fresh air everywhere. But the roads were narrow. People lived in old houses, and watching TV was their main way to relax. For transportation, they usually rode bikes or walked.
Now, great changes can be seen. Tall buildings stand everywhere, and wide streets make travel easier. People live in new apartments. They use mobile phones to chat and computers to work or study. When going out, many take buses, and some even have their own cars.
These changes make people's lives more convenient and more comfortable. I love new Suqian and believe it will become better.
The changes in Suqian
Many changes have taken place in Suqian over the years.
In the past, Suqian was full of natural beauty. There were green mountains and clear rivers, with fresh air everywhere. But the roads were narrow. People lived in old houses, and watching TV was their main way to relax. For transportation, they usually rode bikes or walked.
Now, great changes can be seen. Tall buildings stand everywhere, and wide streets make travel easier. People live in new apartments. They use mobile phones to chat and computers to work or study. When going out, many take buses, and some even have their own cars.
These changes make people's lives more convenient and more comfortable. I love new Suqian and believe it will become better.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题是“宿迁的变化”，需以给定开头为基础，结合表格中过去、现在的环境、生活、交通信息组织短文。第一步，用一般过去时描述过去宿迁的情况，对应表格里的青山绿水、清新空气、狭窄道路，老房子、看电视，骑自行车或步行；第二步，用一般现在时描述现在的变化，对应表格里的高楼、宽阔街道，新公寓，使用手机和电脑，乘公交或私家车；第三步，结合信息适当发挥感想，表达对变化的感受，同时注意词数要求，不出现真实人名校名。
【解析】
1. 衔接开头写过去内容：用一般过去时，将表格中过去的环境、生活、交通信息转化为连贯的英语句子，如“In the past, Suqian was full of natural beauty. There were green mountains and clear rivers, with fresh air everywhere. But the roads were narrow. People lived in old houses, and watching TV was their main way to relax. For transportation, they usually rode bikes or walked.”
2. 写现在的变化：用一般现在时，对应表格里的现状信息组织句子，如“Now, great changes can be seen. Tall buildings stand everywhere, and wide streets make travel easier. People live in new apartments. They use mobile phones to chat and computers to work or study. When going out, many take buses, and some even have their own cars.”
3. 补充感想：适当发挥，表达对变化的感受，如“These changes make people's lives more convenient and more comfortable. I love new Suqian and believe it will become better.”，确保总词数符合要求，信息完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
The changes in Suqian
Many changes have taken place in Suqian over the years.
In the past, Suqian was full of natural beauty. There were green mountains and clear rivers, with fresh air everywhere. But the roads were narrow. People lived in old houses, and watching TV was their main way to relax. For transportation, they usually rode bikes or walked.
Now, great changes can be seen. Tall buildings stand everywhere, and wide streets make travel easier. People live in new apartments. They use mobile phones to chat and computers to work or study. When going out, many take buses, and some even have their own cars.
These changes make people's lives more convenient and more comfortable. I love new Suqian and believe it will become better.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、时态运用、话题词汇
【点评】
本题是结合表格信息的英语书面表达题，考查学生整合信息、用英语描述事物变化的能力，要求准确运用时态，适当发挥，贴近生活实际，学生易上手完成。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作主题是“宿迁的变化”，需以给定开头为基础，结合表格中过去、现在的环境、生活、交通信息组织短文。第一步，用一般过去时描述过去宿迁的情况，对应表格里的青山绿水、清新空气、狭窄道路，老房子、看电视，骑自行车或步行；第二步，用一般现在时描述现在的变化，对应表格里的高楼、宽阔街道，新公寓，使用手机和电脑，乘公交或私家车；第三步，结合信息适当发挥感想，表达对变化的感受，同时注意词数要求，不出现真实人名校名。
【解析】
1. 衔接开头写过去内容：用一般过去时，将表格中过去的环境、生活、交通信息转化为连贯的英语句子，如“In the past, Suqian was full of natural beauty. There were green mountains and clear rivers, with fresh air everywhere. But the roads were narrow. People lived in old houses, and watching TV was their main way to relax. For transportation, they usually rode bikes or walked.”
2. 写现在的变化：用一般现在时，对应表格里的现状信息组织句子，如“Now, great changes can be seen. Tall buildings stand everywhere, and wide streets make travel easier. People live in new apartments. They use mobile phones to chat and computers to work or study. When going out, many take buses, and some even have their own cars.”
3. 补充感想：适当发挥，表达对变化的感受，如“These changes make people's lives more convenient and more comfortable. I love new Suqian and believe it will become better.”，确保总词数符合要求，信息完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
The changes in Suqian
Many changes have taken place in Suqian over the years.
In the past, Suqian was full of natural beauty. There were green mountains and clear rivers, with fresh air everywhere. But the roads were narrow. People lived in old houses, and watching TV was their main way to relax. For transportation, they usually rode bikes or walked.
Now, great changes can be seen. Tall buildings stand everywhere, and wide streets make travel easier. People live in new apartments. They use mobile phones to chat and computers to work or study. When going out, many take buses, and some even have their own cars.
These changes make people's lives more convenient and more comfortable. I love new Suqian and believe it will become better.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、时态运用、话题词汇
【点评】
本题是结合表格信息的英语书面表达题，考查学生整合信息、用英语描述事物变化的能力，要求准确运用时态，适当发挥，贴近生活实际，学生易上手完成。
【难度系数】
0.5
