写作指导
思路点拨
时态 一般现在时
人称 以第一人称为主
段落布局 开头 介绍自己和自己最喜欢的
季节
中间 描述该季节的天气和活动
结尾 抒发感情
参考词汇
季节 spring, summer, autumn, winter
天气 warm, hot, cool, cold, sunny, rainy, windy, snowy...
活动 fly a kite,
trees, go boating, go swimming, eat ice cream, go climbing, pick fruit, go skating, play in the snow...
参考句型
开头 1. I am ... /My name is ...
2. I like ... best.
中间 1. In ... , it is
2. I ... in ...
3. I ... too.
结尾 I have fun in ...
佳作赏析
英语俱乐部的成员们正在讨论自己最喜欢的季节,请帮助西蒙(Simon)向大家介绍他最喜欢的季节和在该季节进行的活动。
Spring
I am Simon. I like spring best. In spring, it is rainy and warm. I can plant trees with my father and mother. I can fly kites with my friends in the park too. I have fun in spring.
思路点拨
时态 一般现在时
人称 以第一人称为主
段落布局 开头 介绍自己和自己最喜欢的
中间 描述该季节的天气和活动
结尾 抒发感情
参考词汇
季节 spring, summer, autumn, winter
天气 warm, hot, cool, cold, sunny, rainy, windy, snowy...
活动 fly a kite,
参考句型
开头 1. I am ... /My name is ...
2. I like ... best.
中间 1. In ... , it is
2. I ... in ...
3. I ... too.
结尾 I have fun in ...
佳作赏析
英语俱乐部的成员们正在讨论自己最喜欢的季节,请帮助西蒙(Simon)向大家介绍他最喜欢的季节和在该季节进行的活动。
Spring
I am Simon. I like spring best. In spring, it is rainy and warm. I can plant trees with my father and mother. I can fly kites with my friends in the park too. I have fun in spring.
答案
Spring
I am Simon. I like spring best. In spring, it is rainy and warm. I can plant trees with my father and mother. I can fly kites with my friends in the park too. I have fun in spring.
I am Simon. I like spring best. In spring, it is rainy and warm. I can plant trees with my father and mother. I can fly kites with my friends in the park too. I have fun in spring.
解析
这是小学四年级英语主题写作题,写作要求明确:① 时态统一使用一般现在时,以第一人称进行表述;② 按照指定结构行文:开头介绍自己的身份,直接点明自己最喜欢的季节;中间部分描述所选季节的天气特征,再列举2-3项该季节常参与的活动,可直接使用题目给出的参考词汇、参考句型搭建内容,无需使用超纲词汇;结尾用指定表达抒发自己在该季节游玩的愉悦心情,内容贴合日常即可。
小试身手
请仿照西蒙(Simon)的范例,帮助杰克(Jack)描述他最喜欢的季节。

Autumn
请仿照西蒙(Simon)的范例,帮助杰克(Jack)描述他最喜欢的季节。
Autumn
I am Jack. I like autumn best.
In autumn, it is windy and cool.
I can go climbing.
I can pick fruit on the farm too.
I have fun in autumn.
答案
One possible version:
Autumn
I am Jack. I like autumn best. In autumn, it is windy and cool. I can go climbing. I can pick fruit on the farm too. I have fun in autumn.
Autumn
I am Jack. I like autumn best. In autumn, it is windy and cool. I can go climbing. I can pick fruit on the farm too. I have fun in autumn.
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