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五、阅读表达。〔人与社会——健康旅游〕
Recently，“cloud tourism” has attracted millions of people in China. “Cloud tourism” refers to a new form of travel that depends on high technology such as 5G and virtual reality(虚拟现实).
During the May Day holiday in 2022，millions of people took an online tour on the short video app. Taishan Juanjie，a popular channel，livestreamed the sunrise at the top of Mount Tai on May 1st and attracted thousands of views.
China Youth Daily made a survey of about 2,000 people on cloud tourism. According to the survey results，74.8% of them said they were willing to take an online tour and 59.7% said they had a good online travelling experience.
“I hate large crowds and long queues(队列)，which make me angry when visiting museums in person，” said Wang Bo，a museum lover in Beijing. “What's more，‘cloud tourism’ helps cut travelling cost and offers more tourist attractions.”
“Cloud tourism” has made big contributions to the local development and a rise in sales of cultural products after livestreaming shows，according to Xinhua News Agency.
1. What did the popular channel Taishan Juanjie livestream on May 1st?
2. How many people said they had a good online travelling experience according to the survey?
3. What do you think of “cloud tourism”? Why?
Recently，“cloud tourism” has attracted millions of people in China. “Cloud tourism” refers to a new form of travel that depends on high technology such as 5G and virtual reality(虚拟现实).
During the May Day holiday in 2022，millions of people took an online tour on the short video app. Taishan Juanjie，a popular channel，livestreamed the sunrise at the top of Mount Tai on May 1st and attracted thousands of views.
China Youth Daily made a survey of about 2,000 people on cloud tourism. According to the survey results，74.8% of them said they were willing to take an online tour and 59.7% said they had a good online travelling experience.
“I hate large crowds and long queues(队列)，which make me angry when visiting museums in person，” said Wang Bo，a museum lover in Beijing. “What's more，‘cloud tourism’ helps cut travelling cost and offers more tourist attractions.”
“Cloud tourism” has made big contributions to the local development and a rise in sales of cultural products after livestreaming shows，according to Xinhua News Agency.
1. What did the popular channel Taishan Juanjie livestream on May 1st?
It livestreamed the sunrise at the top of Mount Tai on May 1st.
2. How many people said they had a good online travelling experience according to the survey?
About 1,200.
3. What do you think of “cloud tourism”? Why?
I think it is a good experience, because "cloud tourism" has made big contributions to the local development. (言之有理即可)
答案
五、1. It livestreamed the sunrise at the top of Mount Tai on May 1st. 2. About 1,200. 3. I think it is a good experience, because "cloud tourism" has made big contributions to the local development. (言之有理即可)
解析
【分析】
这是一篇介绍云旅游主题的阅读表达题，解题思路清晰易懂：前两道是细节类题目，我们可以直接抓取题干里的专属关键词，回到原文对应段落定位，直接提取对应信息或者结合简单计算就能得到答案；第三道是开放性主观题，只需要结合原文提到的云旅游的优势，给出逻辑通顺、言之有理的表述即可。第一题先锁定关键词"Taishan Juanjie、livestream、May 1st"，去原文第二段找对应内容；第二题锁定关键词"survey、good online travelling experience"，去第三段找到调查总人数和对应占比，计算出对应人数即可。
【解析】
1. 回到原文第二段第二句，明确给出了热门频道"泰山娟姐"在5月1日直播的内容是泰山山顶的日出，直接提取原文信息即可作答。
2. 定位到原文第三段，本次调查的总人数约为2000人，其中表示有良好线上旅游体验的人占比为59.7%，计算可得2000×59.7%≈1200，因此对应人数约为1200人。
3. 本题为开放性试题，可结合原文提到的云旅游无需拥挤排队、降低旅行成本、带动地方文旅发展等优势作答，表述通顺、理由合理即可。
【答案】
1. It livestreamed the sunrise at the top of Mount Tai on May 1st.
2. About 1,200.
3. I think it is a good experience, because "cloud tourism" has made big contributions to the local development. (言之有理即可)
【知识点】
阅读理解细节定位；文本信息计算；观点表达输出
【点评】
本题贴合当下云旅游的热点话题，前两道题属于基础细节考查，难度较低，主要锻炼学生快速从文本中检索关键信息的能力，第二题还融入了简单的数学计算，提升了题目的灵活性，最后一道开放题引导学生结合文本内容自主表达观点，兼顾了信息提取能力和语言运用能力的考查。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是一篇介绍云旅游主题的阅读表达题，解题思路清晰易懂：前两道是细节类题目，我们可以直接抓取题干里的专属关键词，回到原文对应段落定位，直接提取对应信息或者结合简单计算就能得到答案；第三道是开放性主观题，只需要结合原文提到的云旅游的优势，给出逻辑通顺、言之有理的表述即可。第一题先锁定关键词"Taishan Juanjie、livestream、May 1st"，去原文第二段找对应内容；第二题锁定关键词"survey、good online travelling experience"，去第三段找到调查总人数和对应占比，计算出对应人数即可。
【解析】
1. 回到原文第二段第二句，明确给出了热门频道"泰山娟姐"在5月1日直播的内容是泰山山顶的日出，直接提取原文信息即可作答。
2. 定位到原文第三段，本次调查的总人数约为2000人，其中表示有良好线上旅游体验的人占比为59.7%，计算可得2000×59.7%≈1200，因此对应人数约为1200人。
3. 本题为开放性试题，可结合原文提到的云旅游无需拥挤排队、降低旅行成本、带动地方文旅发展等优势作答，表述通顺、理由合理即可。
【答案】
1. It livestreamed the sunrise at the top of Mount Tai on May 1st.
2. About 1,200.
3. I think it is a good experience, because "cloud tourism" has made big contributions to the local development. (言之有理即可)
【知识点】
阅读理解细节定位；文本信息计算；观点表达输出
【点评】
本题贴合当下云旅游的热点话题，前两道题属于基础细节考查，难度较低，主要锻炼学生快速从文本中检索关键信息的能力，第二题还融入了简单的数学计算，提升了题目的灵活性，最后一道开放题引导学生结合文本内容自主表达观点，兼顾了信息提取能力和语言运用能力的考查。
【难度系数】
0.8
六、书面表达。
请选择一座你向往的城市(如巴黎、北京、苏州等)，以“An online trip to —my dream city”为题，描述一次“线上旅行”的经历，介绍该城市的著名景点、特色文化，并分享你的感受。词数90左右。
参考词汇：embroidery 刺绣
An online trip to —my dream city
请选择一座你向往的城市(如巴黎、北京、苏州等)，以“An online trip to —my dream city”为题，描述一次“线上旅行”的经历，介绍该城市的著名景点、特色文化，并分享你的感受。词数90左右。
参考词汇：embroidery 刺绣
An online trip to —my dream city
答案
六、One possible version:
An online trip to Suzhou—my dream city
Have you ever taken an online trip to a city full of gardens and water towns? Let me share my online trip to Suzhou, my dream city.
First, I visited Zhuozheng Garden online. It's one of the most famous classical gardens in China. I learned that it was built in the Ming Dynasty and has a history of over 500 years. Then, I "walked" along Pingjiang Road, a historic street with canals, old houses, and cute shops. I saw people rowing boats on the water and eating snacks.
Suzhou is also known for its silk and embroidery. I watched videos of artists making silk scarves and embroidery works. The colorful patterns and delicate skills were amazing.
This online trip to Suzhou was fantastic. It not only showed me the city's beauty but also made me want to visit it in person one day. The Internet really makes the world at one click, and Suzhou is a city I'll never forget!
An online trip to Suzhou—my dream city
Have you ever taken an online trip to a city full of gardens and water towns? Let me share my online trip to Suzhou, my dream city.
First, I visited Zhuozheng Garden online. It's one of the most famous classical gardens in China. I learned that it was built in the Ming Dynasty and has a history of over 500 years. Then, I "walked" along Pingjiang Road, a historic street with canals, old houses, and cute shops. I saw people rowing boats on the water and eating snacks.
Suzhou is also known for its silk and embroidery. I watched videos of artists making silk scarves and embroidery works. The colorful patterns and delicate skills were amazing.
This online trip to Suzhou was fantastic. It not only showed me the city's beauty but also made me want to visit it in person one day. The Internet really makes the world at one click, and Suzhou is a city I'll never forget!
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道书面表达题，第一步先确定你要写的向往的城市，优先选自己熟悉、有足够相关素材的城市，比如题干提示的苏州，刚好能用上题目给出的参考词汇embroidery，降低写作难度。接下来梳理行文逻辑：开头先开门见山，点明本次线上旅行的主题和目的地；中间部分分两个模块，先介绍该城市的代表性著名景点，再介绍当地独有的特色文化，两个部分都要贴合城市真实特点，内容充实；最后收尾分享这次线上旅行的个人感受，表达对这座城市的向往，全程控制词数在要求范围内，注意描述线上旅行经历用一般过去时，介绍城市客观属性用一般现在时，用合适的连接词让行文更连贯。
【解析】
写作可按照以下规范步骤完成：
1. 补全标题：选定写作对象苏州，将标题补充为An online trip to Suzhou —my dream city
2. 开篇引入：用设问句引出话题，直接点明本次线上旅行的目的地是自己的梦想城市苏州，快速点题
3. 景点介绍部分：选取拙政园、平江路两个苏州标志性景点，分别介绍拙政园的历史地位、平江路的水乡风貌，还原线上游览的真实体验
4. 特色文化部分：紧扣题目给出的参考词汇，介绍苏州丝绸与刺绣的独特魅力，体现当地文化特色
5. 结尾抒怀：总结本次线上旅行的收获，表达自己未来想要实地游览的愿望，点明互联网带来的便利，完成全文，整体行文流畅，要点无遗漏，词数符合要求。
【答案】
An online trip to Suzhou—my dream city
Have you ever taken an online trip to a city full of gardens and water towns? Let me share my online trip to Suzhou, my dream city.
First, I visited Zhuozheng Garden online. It's one of the most famous classical gardens in China. I learned that it was built in the Ming Dynasty and has a history of over 500 years. Then, I "walked" along Pingjiang Road, a historic street with canals, old houses, and cute shops. I saw people rowing boats on the water and eating snacks.
Suzhou is also known for its silk and embroidery. I watched videos of artists making silk scarves and embroidery works. The colorful patterns and delicate skills were amazing.
This online trip to Suzhou was fantastic. It not only showed me the city's beauty but also made me want to visit it in person one day. The Internet really makes the world at one click, and Suzhou is a city I'll never forget!
【知识点】
英语话题写作
一般过去时运用
文化类场景表达
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干要求的所有写作要点，行文逻辑清晰，按照引入-景点介绍-文化特色-感受抒发的顺承结构展开，自然用到了题目给出的参考词汇，同时灵活运用了"not only...but also..."等亮点句式，内容贴合苏州的实际城市特点，语言地道流畅，词数符合题干要求，学生写作时可以参考该结构，替换为自己熟悉的城市的对应景点、文化内容即可完成写作。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先拿到这道书面表达题，第一步先确定你要写的向往的城市，优先选自己熟悉、有足够相关素材的城市，比如题干提示的苏州，刚好能用上题目给出的参考词汇embroidery，降低写作难度。接下来梳理行文逻辑：开头先开门见山，点明本次线上旅行的主题和目的地；中间部分分两个模块，先介绍该城市的代表性著名景点，再介绍当地独有的特色文化，两个部分都要贴合城市真实特点，内容充实；最后收尾分享这次线上旅行的个人感受，表达对这座城市的向往，全程控制词数在要求范围内，注意描述线上旅行经历用一般过去时，介绍城市客观属性用一般现在时，用合适的连接词让行文更连贯。
【解析】
写作可按照以下规范步骤完成：
1. 补全标题：选定写作对象苏州，将标题补充为An online trip to Suzhou —my dream city
2. 开篇引入：用设问句引出话题，直接点明本次线上旅行的目的地是自己的梦想城市苏州，快速点题
3. 景点介绍部分：选取拙政园、平江路两个苏州标志性景点，分别介绍拙政园的历史地位、平江路的水乡风貌，还原线上游览的真实体验
4. 特色文化部分：紧扣题目给出的参考词汇，介绍苏州丝绸与刺绣的独特魅力，体现当地文化特色
5. 结尾抒怀：总结本次线上旅行的收获，表达自己未来想要实地游览的愿望，点明互联网带来的便利，完成全文，整体行文流畅，要点无遗漏，词数符合要求。
【答案】
An online trip to Suzhou—my dream city
Have you ever taken an online trip to a city full of gardens and water towns? Let me share my online trip to Suzhou, my dream city.
First, I visited Zhuozheng Garden online. It's one of the most famous classical gardens in China. I learned that it was built in the Ming Dynasty and has a history of over 500 years. Then, I "walked" along Pingjiang Road, a historic street with canals, old houses, and cute shops. I saw people rowing boats on the water and eating snacks.
Suzhou is also known for its silk and embroidery. I watched videos of artists making silk scarves and embroidery works. The colorful patterns and delicate skills were amazing.
This online trip to Suzhou was fantastic. It not only showed me the city's beauty but also made me want to visit it in person one day. The Internet really makes the world at one click, and Suzhou is a city I'll never forget!
【知识点】
英语话题写作
一般过去时运用
文化类场景表达
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干要求的所有写作要点，行文逻辑清晰，按照引入-景点介绍-文化特色-感受抒发的顺承结构展开，自然用到了题目给出的参考词汇，同时灵活运用了"not only...but also..."等亮点句式，内容贴合苏州的实际城市特点，语言地道流畅，词数符合题干要求，学生写作时可以参考该结构，替换为自己熟悉的城市的对应景点、文化内容即可完成写作。
【难度系数】
0.6
