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五、V. 书面表达。
假如你是李琳，以下是你澳大利亚朋友Cindy发给你的邮件，请阅读后根据邮件内容进行回复。
要求：1. 请回答邮件中所提及的问题，并适当发挥；
2. 词数：70左右。
Dear Cindy,
I’m so glad to hear that you’re coming to visit me in July. ___
假如你是李琳，以下是你澳大利亚朋友Cindy发给你的邮件，请阅读后根据邮件内容进行回复。
要求：1. 请回答邮件中所提及的问题，并适当发挥；
2. 词数：70左右。
Dear Cindy,
I’m so glad to hear that you’re coming to visit me in July. ___
答案
One possible version:
Dear Cindy,
I'm so glad to hear that you're coming to visit me in July. The weather in my city is
usually very hot in July. Sometimes it may rain a little, but it doesn't last long. We can
swim in the sea and play volleyball on the beach. There are lots of fun activities this month.
There is a big food festival in the city center. You can taste different kinds of delicious food
from all over the country. Also, there will be a traditional Chinese handicraft exhibition. You
can see and learn to make some beautiful handicrafts like paper cuttings and kites.
I can't wait to see you. We'll have a great time together.
Yours,
Li Lin
Dear Cindy,
I'm so glad to hear that you're coming to visit me in July. The weather in my city is
usually very hot in July. Sometimes it may rain a little, but it doesn't last long. We can
swim in the sea and play volleyball on the beach. There are lots of fun activities this month.
There is a big food festival in the city center. You can taste different kinds of delicious food
from all over the country. Also, there will be a traditional Chinese handicraft exhibition. You
can see and learn to make some beautiful handicrafts like paper cuttings and kites.
I can't wait to see you. We'll have a great time together.
Yours,
Li Lin
解析
【分析】
首先我们先梳理来信的核心信息，Cindy的邮件明确提出了两个需要回复的问题：一是你所在城市7月的天气情况，二是本月有什么有趣的活动。解题时首先要保证两个问题都完整回应不能漏答，先承接给定的开篇情绪，先介绍7月本地的天气特征，还可以适当补充小提示方便Cindy准备行李，之后再列举2-3个贴合生活、有特色的趣味活动，最后收尾表达期待相聚的心情，全程保持朋友间交流的友好语气，控制总词数符合要求，适当合理发挥即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接给定开头，首先回应天气相关问题：说明本地7月通常十分炎热，偶尔会下短时小雨，不会持续很久，同时可以提到适合安排海边游泳、沙滩排球这类消暑活动。
2. 接着回答趣味活动的问题：列举两个特色活动，第一个是市中心举办的大型美食节，可以品尝来自全国各地的特色美食；第二个是中国传统手工艺品展，可以参观还能体验剪纸、制作风筝这类传统手工项目，内容充实有亮点。
3. 最后收尾，表达自己迫不及待想要见面的心情，点明两人一定会玩得很愉快，最后补上规范的书信落款即可，整体逻辑通顺，所有来信的问题都完整覆盖。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Cindy,
I'm so glad to hear that you're coming to visit me in July. The weather in my city is usually very hot in July. Sometimes it may rain a little, but it doesn't last long. We can swim in the sea and play volleyball on the beach. There are lots of fun activities this month. There is a big food festival in the city center. You can taste different kinds of delicious food from all over the country. Also, there will be a traditional Chinese handicraft exhibition. You can see and learn to make some beautiful handicrafts like paper cuttings and kites.
I can't wait to see you. We'll have a great time together.
Yours,
Li Lin
【知识点】
英文书信写作，情景交际，话题英语写作
【点评】
本篇回复完整覆盖了来信提出的全部问题，没有遗漏要点，内容贴合日常交流的语境，加入了中国传统手工艺相关的特色内容，很有新意，语气自然亲切，符合好友之间邮件往来的风格，结构清晰流畅，词数符合题目要求，是一篇合格的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先我们先梳理来信的核心信息，Cindy的邮件明确提出了两个需要回复的问题：一是你所在城市7月的天气情况，二是本月有什么有趣的活动。解题时首先要保证两个问题都完整回应不能漏答，先承接给定的开篇情绪，先介绍7月本地的天气特征，还可以适当补充小提示方便Cindy准备行李，之后再列举2-3个贴合生活、有特色的趣味活动，最后收尾表达期待相聚的心情，全程保持朋友间交流的友好语气，控制总词数符合要求，适当合理发挥即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接给定开头，首先回应天气相关问题：说明本地7月通常十分炎热，偶尔会下短时小雨，不会持续很久，同时可以提到适合安排海边游泳、沙滩排球这类消暑活动。
2. 接着回答趣味活动的问题：列举两个特色活动，第一个是市中心举办的大型美食节，可以品尝来自全国各地的特色美食；第二个是中国传统手工艺品展，可以参观还能体验剪纸、制作风筝这类传统手工项目，内容充实有亮点。
3. 最后收尾，表达自己迫不及待想要见面的心情，点明两人一定会玩得很愉快，最后补上规范的书信落款即可，整体逻辑通顺，所有来信的问题都完整覆盖。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Cindy,
I'm so glad to hear that you're coming to visit me in July. The weather in my city is usually very hot in July. Sometimes it may rain a little, but it doesn't last long. We can swim in the sea and play volleyball on the beach. There are lots of fun activities this month. There is a big food festival in the city center. You can taste different kinds of delicious food from all over the country. Also, there will be a traditional Chinese handicraft exhibition. You can see and learn to make some beautiful handicrafts like paper cuttings and kites.
I can't wait to see you. We'll have a great time together.
Yours,
Li Lin
【知识点】
英文书信写作，情景交际，话题英语写作
【点评】
本篇回复完整覆盖了来信提出的全部问题，没有遗漏要点，内容贴合日常交流的语境，加入了中国传统手工艺相关的特色内容，很有新意，语气自然亲切，符合好友之间邮件往来的风格，结构清晰流畅，词数符合题目要求，是一篇合格的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
