八、书面表达
生活中有很多的精彩片段,请以“A Wonderful
要点:
1. 请把标题补充完整,如 party、picnic、trip、lesson 等;
2. 做了什么事情;
3. 你的感受如何。
要求:
1. 包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整。
A Wonderful
生活中有很多的精彩片段,请以“A Wonderful
Birthday Party
”为题,并按以下要点和要求写一篇80词左右的短文分享你的一次经历。要点:
1. 请把标题补充完整,如 party、picnic、trip、lesson 等;
2. 做了什么事情;
3. 你的感受如何。
要求:
1. 包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整。
A Wonderful
Birthday Party
答案
One possible version:
A Wonderful Birthday Party
Last Sunday was my 14th birthday. I had a great time with my family and friends. They had a wonderful party for me at home. In the morning, my father bought a beautiful birthday cake and there were 14 candles on it. My mother went shopping and bought lots of food and drinks. My friends brought some presents, such as a book, a football, a pen and some toys. I liked them very much. At noon, we all sat around the birthday cake and I made a wish. Then we blew the candles out together. My friends sang a song to me. My mother cooked delicious lunch for us. The party was wonderful and I was very happy. I will never forget it.
A Wonderful Birthday Party
Last Sunday was my 14th birthday. I had a great time with my family and friends. They had a wonderful party for me at home. In the morning, my father bought a beautiful birthday cake and there were 14 candles on it. My mother went shopping and bought lots of food and drinks. My friends brought some presents, such as a book, a football, a pen and some toys. I liked them very much. At noon, we all sat around the birthday cake and I made a wish. Then we blew the candles out together. My friends sang a song to me. My mother cooked delicious lunch for us. The party was wonderful and I was very happy. I will never forget it.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,解题思路如下:① 先补全标题,结合自身生活经历选择具体场景(如生日派对);② 围绕所选场景,按时间顺序梳理内容,涵盖“做了什么”“感受如何”两个核心要点;③ 控制词数在80左右,确保语句通顺、逻辑连贯,符合写作要求。
【解析】
补全标题为“A Wonderful Birthday Party”,写作时:1. 开篇点明时间(上周日是14岁生日),引出派对背景;2. 描述家人与朋友为派对做的准备(父亲买蛋糕、母亲备食物、朋友带礼物);3. 叙述派对中的具体活动(许愿、吹蜡烛、唱歌、吃午餐);4. 表达派对的感受(很棒、开心、难忘),确保内容完整,符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:A Wonderful Birthday PartyLast Sunday was my 14th birthday. I had a great time with my family and friends. They had a wonderful party for me at home. In the morning, my father bought a beautiful birthday cake and there were 14 candles on it. My mother went shopping and bought lots of food and drinks. My friends brought some presents, such as a book, a football, a pen and some toys. I liked them very much. At noon, we all sat around the birthday cake and I made a wish. Then we blew the candles out together. My friends sang a song to me. My mother cooked delicious lunch for us. The party was wonderful and I was very happy. I will never forget it.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作、生活类话题写作
【点评】
本题贴近学生日常,考查英语写作的基本能力,要求补全标题并围绕生活经历展开,涵盖指定要点,注重语言的连贯性与准确性,难度适中,适合学生发挥。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题,解题思路如下:① 先补全标题,结合自身生活经历选择具体场景(如生日派对);② 围绕所选场景,按时间顺序梳理内容,涵盖“做了什么”“感受如何”两个核心要点;③ 控制词数在80左右,确保语句通顺、逻辑连贯,符合写作要求。
【解析】
补全标题为“A Wonderful Birthday Party”,写作时:1. 开篇点明时间(上周日是14岁生日),引出派对背景;2. 描述家人与朋友为派对做的准备(父亲买蛋糕、母亲备食物、朋友带礼物);3. 叙述派对中的具体活动(许愿、吹蜡烛、唱歌、吃午餐);4. 表达派对的感受(很棒、开心、难忘),确保内容完整,符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:A Wonderful Birthday PartyLast Sunday was my 14th birthday. I had a great time with my family and friends. They had a wonderful party for me at home. In the morning, my father bought a beautiful birthday cake and there were 14 candles on it. My mother went shopping and bought lots of food and drinks. My friends brought some presents, such as a book, a football, a pen and some toys. I liked them very much. At noon, we all sat around the birthday cake and I made a wish. Then we blew the candles out together. My friends sang a song to me. My mother cooked delicious lunch for us. The party was wonderful and I was very happy. I will never forget it.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作、生活类话题写作
【点评】
本题贴近学生日常,考查英语写作的基本能力,要求补全标题并围绕生活经历展开,涵盖指定要点,注重语言的连贯性与准确性,难度适中,适合学生发挥。
【难度系数】
0.6
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