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六、阅读表达。〔人与自然——自然生态〕
Red Beach in Liaoning Province is a truly amazing place. It is famous for its breathtaking red scenery.
The name "Red Beach" comes from the special plant called Suaeda salsa(盐地碱蓬). These plants cover a large area of the beach. As the seasons change，they turn bright red，making it look like a sea of red plants. It's such a beautiful sight.
There are also many different kinds of birds living in and around Red Beach. You can often see them fly in the sky or look for food. This makes the area a perfect place for bird lovers.
Visitors can walk on the wooden boardwalks that wind through the beach. From there，they can enjoy the wonderful view and take beautiful pictures. It's a great place to relax and to be with nature.
Red Beach is not only a place of beauty but also an important ecological(生态)area. It helps protect the environment and provides a home for many plants and animals. Red Beach is a must-see place if you visit Liaoning.
1. What's Red Beach famous for?
2. What can visitors do there?
3. Would you like to visit Red Beach if you go to Liaoning? Why or why not?
Red Beach in Liaoning Province is a truly amazing place. It is famous for its breathtaking red scenery.
The name "Red Beach" comes from the special plant called Suaeda salsa(盐地碱蓬). These plants cover a large area of the beach. As the seasons change，they turn bright red，making it look like a sea of red plants. It's such a beautiful sight.
There are also many different kinds of birds living in and around Red Beach. You can often see them fly in the sky or look for food. This makes the area a perfect place for bird lovers.
Visitors can walk on the wooden boardwalks that wind through the beach. From there，they can enjoy the wonderful view and take beautiful pictures. It's a great place to relax and to be with nature.
Red Beach is not only a place of beauty but also an important ecological(生态)area. It helps protect the environment and provides a home for many plants and animals. Red Beach is a must-see place if you visit Liaoning.
1. What's Red Beach famous for?
It is famous for its breathtaking red scenery.
2. What can visitors do there?
They can walk on the wooden boardwalks and take photos.
3. Would you like to visit Red Beach if you go to Liaoning? Why or why not?
Yes. Because it is not only a place of beauty but also an important ecological area.（答案不唯一）
答案
1. It is famous for its breathtaking red scenery. 2. They can walk on the wooden boardwalks and take photos. 3. Yes. Because it is not only a place of beauty but also an important ecological area.（答案不唯一）
解析
【分析】
这是一篇介绍辽宁红海滩的阅读表达题，解题时可以根据每道题的题干关键词回到原文对应段落定位信息：第1题抓住关键词"famous for"直接在第一段找到对应表述即可；第2题抓住关键词"visitors"定位到第四段，提取游客可进行的活动整理作答即可；第3题是开放性问题，结合文章介绍的红海滩的美景、生态价值等内容，给出符合逻辑的观点和对应理由即可，不需要完全拘泥于原文，言之有理就能得分。
【解析】
1. 回到原文第一段定位到句子"It is famous for its breathtaking red scenery."，直接提取对应内容即可得到答案。
2. 回到原文第四段定位游客相关的描述，文中提到游客可以在蜿蜒穿过海滩的木板步道上行走，欣赏美景、拍摄好看的照片，整合这些信息即可得到答案。
3. 本题为开放性试题，可选择肯定回答，结合原文最后一段提到的红海滩兼具美景和重要生态价值的内容说明理由，也可以给出其他合理回答，比如说明想去看独特的红色景观、观察鸟类等，理由通顺即可。
【答案】
1. It is famous for its breathtaking red scenery.
2. They can walk on the wooden boardwalks and take photos.
3. Yes. Because it is not only a place of beauty but also an important ecological area.（答案不唯一）
【知识点】
阅读理解细节定位，文本信息提取，开放性书面表达
【点评】
本题整体难度偏低，前两道小题均为直接信息提取类题目，重点考察学生快速在阅读文本中定位关键信息的能力，第三道开放题引导学生结合文本内容输出自己的观点，同时渗透了自然生态保护的相关主题，帮助学生了解国内特色自然景观，建立对生态保护区的认知。
【难度系数】
0.9
这是一篇介绍辽宁红海滩的阅读表达题，解题时可以根据每道题的题干关键词回到原文对应段落定位信息：第1题抓住关键词"famous for"直接在第一段找到对应表述即可；第2题抓住关键词"visitors"定位到第四段，提取游客可进行的活动整理作答即可；第3题是开放性问题，结合文章介绍的红海滩的美景、生态价值等内容，给出符合逻辑的观点和对应理由即可，不需要完全拘泥于原文，言之有理就能得分。
【解析】
1. 回到原文第一段定位到句子"It is famous for its breathtaking red scenery."，直接提取对应内容即可得到答案。
2. 回到原文第四段定位游客相关的描述，文中提到游客可以在蜿蜒穿过海滩的木板步道上行走，欣赏美景、拍摄好看的照片，整合这些信息即可得到答案。
3. 本题为开放性试题，可选择肯定回答，结合原文最后一段提到的红海滩兼具美景和重要生态价值的内容说明理由，也可以给出其他合理回答，比如说明想去看独特的红色景观、观察鸟类等，理由通顺即可。
【答案】
1. It is famous for its breathtaking red scenery.
2. They can walk on the wooden boardwalks and take photos.
3. Yes. Because it is not only a place of beauty but also an important ecological area.（答案不唯一）
【知识点】
阅读理解细节定位，文本信息提取，开放性书面表达
【点评】
本题整体难度偏低，前两道小题均为直接信息提取类题目，重点考察学生快速在阅读文本中定位关键信息的能力，第三道开放题引导学生结合文本内容输出自己的观点，同时渗透了自然生态保护的相关主题，帮助学生了解国内特色自然景观，建立对生态保护区的认知。
【难度系数】
0.9
七、书面表达。
玛丽是一位来自英国的交换生，她将在你们学校待半个月，你打算趁“五一”假期带她参观一下苏州。请根据下面所给的要点介绍苏州。
要点：1. 苏州占地8 000多平方千米，离上海不远，乘火车需要一个小时左右；
2. 这里空气新鲜，能闻到花香，听到鸟鸣；
3. 在这里你可以参观园林，吃到美味的食物，还能欣赏精彩的昆曲(Kunqu opera)；
4. 人们喜欢生活在这里，我觉得……
要求：1. 文章内容要包括所有要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 对第4要点的省略号部分作1～2句话的合理发挥；
3. 词数80左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
I am very glad to tell you something about Suzhou.
玛丽是一位来自英国的交换生，她将在你们学校待半个月，你打算趁“五一”假期带她参观一下苏州。请根据下面所给的要点介绍苏州。
要点：1. 苏州占地8 000多平方千米，离上海不远，乘火车需要一个小时左右；
2. 这里空气新鲜，能闻到花香，听到鸟鸣；
3. 在这里你可以参观园林，吃到美味的食物，还能欣赏精彩的昆曲(Kunqu opera)；
4. 人们喜欢生活在这里，我觉得……
要求：1. 文章内容要包括所有要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 对第4要点的省略号部分作1～2句话的合理发挥；
3. 词数80左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
I am very glad to tell you something about Suzhou.
Suzhou is an old city. It covers an area of more than 8,000 square kilometres and is not far from Shanghai. It only takes about an hour to go to Shanghai by train.
There're a lot of gardens in Suzhou. The air here is fresh, and you can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. A lot of visitors come to visit Suzhou every year and they have great fun here. You can visit the gardens. You can enjoy all kinds of delicious food. You can also enjoy wonderful Kunqu opera.
People all enjoy living here. I think you will like staying here too. I hope Suzhou will get more and more beautiful.
答案
One possible version:
I am very glad to tell you something about Suzhou.
Suzhou is an old city. It covers an area of more than 8,000 square kilometres and is not far from Shanghai. It only takes about an hour to go to Shanghai by train.
There're a lot of gardens in Suzhou. The air here is fresh, and you can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. A lot of visitors come to visit Suzhou every year and they have great fun here. You can visit the gardens. You can enjoy all kinds of delicious food. You can also enjoy wonderful Kunqu opera.
People all enjoy living here. I think you will like staying here too. I hope Suzhou will get more and more beautiful.
I am very glad to tell you something about Suzhou.
Suzhou is an old city. It covers an area of more than 8,000 square kilometres and is not far from Shanghai. It only takes about an hour to go to Shanghai by train.
There're a lot of gardens in Suzhou. The air here is fresh, and you can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. A lot of visitors come to visit Suzhou every year and they have great fun here. You can visit the gardens. You can enjoy all kinds of delicious food. You can also enjoy wonderful Kunqu opera.
People all enjoy living here. I think you will like staying here too. I hope Suzhou will get more and more beautiful.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道写作题先明确写作场景：要向交换生玛丽介绍苏州，用于五一出行规划，第一步先把题干给出的4个核心要点逐一标记，避免遗漏：①苏州面积、距上海的距离和通勤时长；②当地生态环境优势；③可体验的三类特色活动；④补充1-2句符合语境的内容。接下来按照逻辑顺序排布内容：先介绍城市基本区位信息，再讲环境特点，之后介绍游玩项目，最后收尾表达对玛丽游玩的期待，全程注意语句通顺，控制总词数在要求范围内，符合初中英语写作的表达规范即可。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，先引入苏州的基础属性，准确套用固定搭配cover an area of表达占地面积，用it takes sb some time to do sth的常用句型说明乘火车到上海的时长，完成要点1的全部内容。
2. 接下来描述苏州的生态环境，用并列结构写出空气清新、可闻花香、可听鸟鸣的内容，自然完成要点2的表述。
3. 随后介绍苏州的特色游玩项目，依次罗列参观园林、品尝美食、欣赏昆曲三个内容，逻辑清晰，覆盖要点3。
4. 最后完成要点4的拓展，补充1-2句贴合场景的内容，比如表达相信玛丽会喜欢待在这里、祝愿苏州越来越美，符合要求，最后通读全文检查所有要点无遗漏，无语法错误，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I am very glad to tell you something about Suzhou.
Suzhou is an old city. It covers an area of more than 8,000 square kilometres and is not far from Shanghai. It only takes about an hour to go to Shanghai by train.
There're a lot of gardens in Suzhou. The air here is fresh, and you can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. A lot of visitors come to visit Suzhou every year and they have great fun here. You can visit the gardens. You can enjoy all kinds of delicious food. You can also enjoy wonderful Kunqu opera.
People all enjoy living here. I think you will like staying here too. I hope Suzhou will get more and more beautiful.
【知识点】
地点介绍类写作、英语固定句型、语篇衔接表达
【点评】
本题属于初中英语基础写作题，题干给出的提示要点非常明确，不需要学生进行大量的自主创作，只需要将给出的中文信息用通顺正确的英文串联，补充的拓展内容贴合邀请外地友人游玩的场景即可，写作时注意避免搭配错误、主谓不一致等低级问题，保证所有提示信息全部覆盖就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.8
首先拿到这道写作题先明确写作场景：要向交换生玛丽介绍苏州，用于五一出行规划，第一步先把题干给出的4个核心要点逐一标记，避免遗漏：①苏州面积、距上海的距离和通勤时长；②当地生态环境优势；③可体验的三类特色活动；④补充1-2句符合语境的内容。接下来按照逻辑顺序排布内容：先介绍城市基本区位信息，再讲环境特点，之后介绍游玩项目，最后收尾表达对玛丽游玩的期待，全程注意语句通顺，控制总词数在要求范围内，符合初中英语写作的表达规范即可。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，先引入苏州的基础属性，准确套用固定搭配cover an area of表达占地面积，用it takes sb some time to do sth的常用句型说明乘火车到上海的时长，完成要点1的全部内容。
2. 接下来描述苏州的生态环境，用并列结构写出空气清新、可闻花香、可听鸟鸣的内容，自然完成要点2的表述。
3. 随后介绍苏州的特色游玩项目，依次罗列参观园林、品尝美食、欣赏昆曲三个内容，逻辑清晰，覆盖要点3。
4. 最后完成要点4的拓展，补充1-2句贴合场景的内容，比如表达相信玛丽会喜欢待在这里、祝愿苏州越来越美，符合要求，最后通读全文检查所有要点无遗漏，无语法错误，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I am very glad to tell you something about Suzhou.
Suzhou is an old city. It covers an area of more than 8,000 square kilometres and is not far from Shanghai. It only takes about an hour to go to Shanghai by train.
There're a lot of gardens in Suzhou. The air here is fresh, and you can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. A lot of visitors come to visit Suzhou every year and they have great fun here. You can visit the gardens. You can enjoy all kinds of delicious food. You can also enjoy wonderful Kunqu opera.
People all enjoy living here. I think you will like staying here too. I hope Suzhou will get more and more beautiful.
【知识点】
地点介绍类写作、英语固定句型、语篇衔接表达
【点评】
本题属于初中英语基础写作题，题干给出的提示要点非常明确，不需要学生进行大量的自主创作，只需要将给出的中文信息用通顺正确的英文串联，补充的拓展内容贴合邀请外地友人游玩的场景即可，写作时注意避免搭配错误、主谓不一致等低级问题，保证所有提示信息全部覆盖就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.8
