【例文研析】
1. 写作任务
为增强对全球公益组织的认知，学校将开展以“国际公益力量”为主题的短文创作活动。请你结合本单元所学，用英语写一篇词数80～100的短文，介绍你最喜欢的慈善机构。
2. 思路点拨

3. 范文品鉴
My favourite charity is UNICEF. It was set up in 1946 by the UN. It helps make a better world for children. It provides clean water, food and education for poor children in many countries. It wants all children to be healthy and to go to school. People can support UNICEF by donating money or organizing other charity activities.
I think we should try our best to help all the children in need. It is meaningful work.

My favourite charity is UNICEF. It was set up in 1946 by the UN. It helps make a better world for children. It provides clean water, food and education for poor children in many countries, aiming to let all children grow up healthily and get educated. People can support UNICEF by donating money or organizing charity activities.
I think we should try our best to help children in need. It is really meaningful work.

本次写作需围绕“最喜欢的慈善机构”展开，采用“开篇点题-正文介绍-结尾感想”的结构。开篇直接点明慈善机构名称；正文要介绍机构的成立时间、帮扶对象与内容、人们支持该机构的方式，可运用本单元所学的“set up, provide...for..., support...by...”等核心短语与句式；结尾发表个人感想，呼吁参与公益，词数控制在80-100之间，保证语言准确流畅。

二、实战演练
上个月，你校开展了“献爱心，慈善行”的活动。在活动中你了解到世界上有许多慈善机构，有的是为了帮助儿童和贫困地区的人，有的是致力于保护动物或自然环境。因此，你也想创立一个小型慈善组织。请你根据下面英文提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：
1. What is the name of your charity?
2. Why do you want to set up your charity?
3. What can your classmates do to help your charity?
4. Ask your classmates to support you.
注意：
1. 演讲稿中须包含所有提示信息，请增加细节以使文章完整；
2. 演讲稿中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数：80～100。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
Dear classmates,
There are many charities around the world. Some help children and people in need, while others work to protect animals and the environment. I would also set up a small charity to
That's all. Thank you.

One possible version:
Dear classmates,
There are many charities around the world. Some
help children and people in need, while others work to
protect animals and the environment. I would also set up a
small charity to help the blind people.
The name of my charity is Read for the Blind.
The reason I set up this charity is that I want to help
these blind people enjoy the pleasure that books
bring. And I believe with our help, they can not only
get knowledge from books, but also enjoy
themselves. I hope you can donate your books to my
charity and take part in my charity to read books for
the blind every week.
Dear classmates, I believe that as long as you
take part in it, you will improve yourselves while
helping others.
That's all. Thank you.

【分析】
这是一篇给定首尾的英语演讲稿写作题，解题时首先要明确需要覆盖题干给出的全部4个核心要点，同时补充合理细节让内容饱满：第一步，先确定你创立的慈善组织的服务方向和名称，选择正向且容易展开的公益方向比如帮扶盲人阅读，确定慈善名称；第二步，阐述创立该慈善的原因，补充合理的动机细节，比如希望盲人也能享受阅读的乐趣、获取知识；第三步，说明同学们可以参与的具体行动，比如捐赠书籍、定期参与志愿朗读活动；第四步，发出呼吁号召大家支持，全程注意语气贴合面向同班同学演讲的亲切风格，控制总词数在80-100区间，不出现真实个人和学校信息即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接题干给出的开头句，点明自己创立的慈善的服务对象，随后直接给出慈善的名称Read for the Blind；
2. 展开说明创立该慈善的原因：说明初衷是希望帮助盲人感受书籍带来的快乐，借助大家的力量让盲人既能从书中获取知识，也能丰富日常的精神生活；
3. 明确写出同学们可以提供的帮助：可以捐赠闲置的书籍，每周抽出时间参与志愿活动为盲人朗读书籍；
4. 最后发出呼吁，说明参与活动既能帮助他人也能提升自我，号召大家支持自己的慈善项目，自然衔接题干给出的结尾句，调整语句让行文流畅自然，符合演讲稿的表达逻辑，核对所有要点均已覆盖，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear classmates,
There are many charities around the world. Some help children and people in need, while others work to protect animals and the environment. I would also set up a small charity to help the blind people.
The name of my charity is Read for the Blind. The reason I set up this charity is that I want to help these blind people enjoy the pleasure that books bring. And I believe with our help, they can not only get knowledge from books, but also enjoy themselves. I hope you can donate your books to my charity and take part in my charity to read books for the blind every week.
Dear classmates, I believe that as long as you take part in it, you will improve yourselves while helping others.
That's all. Thank you.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作
公益话题表达
应用文要点覆盖
【点评】
本题属于初中英语常见的应用文写作题型，限定了核心写作要点，既给学生明确的写作方向，也留出了补充细节的发挥空间，重点考察学生对演讲稿文体的表达特点的掌握，以及围绕指定话题组织语言、完整覆盖写作要点的能力，难度适中，学生只要紧扣题干要求展开就可以拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6