保护大自然
【写作要求】
某网站正在开展以“保护动物”为主题的征文活动。假如你是林华，请以“Let’s protect South China Tigers!”为题，用英语写一篇不少于70词的短文投稿。
提示：
（1）华南虎数量很少。
（2）濒临灭绝的主要原因（too much hunting）。
（3）已设立保护区（protection zones）。
（4）你对保护动物的观点。
Let’s protect South China Tigers!

【思路分析】
1. 人称：第一人称和第三人称。
2. 时态：一般现在时。
3. 构思
①开头点明华南虎濒临灭绝。
②中间阐述濒临灭绝的原因和保护措施。
③结尾号召大家保护它们。
【写作步骤】
1. 如何写好开篇
直接说明华南虎现状，如：
South China Tigers are very few.
South China Tigers are in great danger.
There are not many of them.
2. 如何写好中间
①描述濒临灭绝的原因：
People hunted them too much in the past.
And they lost homes because people cut down trees.
In the past, people hunted them a lot and cut down many trees.
②描述保护措施：
There are protection zones for them.
Now there are protection zones.
3. 如何写好结尾
表明保护动物的态度，如：
Protecting animals is our duty.
We should protect animals. They are our friends.
Let’s all take action to protect them.
【范文借鉴】
Let’s protect South China Tigers!
South China Tigers are in great danger.（开头点明华南虎的现状）In the past, people hunted them a lot and cut down many trees. As a result, they lost their homes. There are only a few of them left. If we don’t protect them, they may disappear forever. Now there are protection zones to help them. They can live there safely.（中间阐述濒临灭绝的原因和保护措施）Animals are our friends. We should do more to protect South China Tigers. We can tell more people about their situation. Let’s all take action to protect them.（结尾号召大家保护它们）

Let’s protect South China Tigers!
South China Tigers are in great danger now. There are only a very small number of them living in the wild.
They are endangered mainly because people hunted them too much in the past. Also, people cut down lots of forests, so the tigers lost their natural homes. Luckily, we have built many special protection zones for them now. The tigers can live and breed safely in these areas.
Animals are our best friends. Protecting wild animals is our duty. We should try our best to make a difference to them. Let’s take action together to protect South China Tigers!

【分析】
本次写作任务是完成以“Let’s protect South China Tigers!”为题的英语征文，主题为保护动物。首先确定人称：第三人称描述华南虎的现状、原因与措施，第一人称表达观点；时态：一般现在时为主，涉及过去原因用一般过去时。结构分为三部分：开头点明华南虎濒危的现状，中间阐述濒危原因（过度捕猎、栖息地丧失）及已建保护区的保护措施，结尾表达保护观点并号召行动，需覆盖所有提示要点，词数不少于70词。
【解析】
1. 开篇：用一般现在时直接点明华南虎的濒危现状与数量，如“South China Tigers are in great danger now. There are only a very small number of them living in the wild.”；
2. 中间：先以一般过去时说明濒危原因（过去过度捕猎、砍伐森林导致栖息地消失），再以一般现在时说明保护措施（已建立保护区）；
3. 结尾：表达保护野生动物是责任，用一般现在时发出行动号召，确保语言准确规范，符合英语表达习惯，满足词数要求。
【答案】
Let’s protect South China Tigers!
South China Tigers are in great danger now. There are only a very small number of them living in the wild.
They are endangered mainly because people hunted them too much in the past. Also, people cut down lots of forests, so the tigers lost their natural homes. Luckily, we have built many special protection zones for them now. The tigers can live and breed safely in these areas.
Animals are our best friends. Protecting wild animals is our duty. We should try our best to make a difference to them. Let’s take action together to protect South China Tigers!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、保护动物主题表达、时态运用
【点评】
该作文紧扣主题，结构清晰，完整覆盖所有提示要点，语言规范准确，符合英语写作要求，能有效传递保护华南虎的呼吁，是一篇优秀的英语征文。
【难度系数】
0.6