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Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
为缓解学习压力,放松心情,本月底学校将举办一次户外活动。为了更好地开展这次活动,校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是李华,请根据以下内容写一篇短文(先介绍你喜欢的户外活动,再说明理由,最后就活动安排提出合理的建议),向社团投稿。
内容包括:1. What outdoor activity do you like?
2. Why do you like it?
3. How do you arrange(安排) it? (when, where, what to do,how to get there...)
写作要求:1.文章内容必须包括所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3.不少于120词。
为缓解学习压力,放松心情,本月底学校将举办一次户外活动。为了更好地开展这次活动,校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是李华,请根据以下内容写一篇短文(先介绍你喜欢的户外活动,再说明理由,最后就活动安排提出合理的建议),向社团投稿。
内容包括:1. What outdoor activity do you like?
2. Why do you like it?
3. How do you arrange(安排) it? (when, where, what to do,how to get there...)
写作要求:1.文章内容必须包括所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3.不少于120词。
答案
One possible version:
Dear Sir,
I'm happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month. I like climbing mountains with my classmates. We can enjoy the beauty of nature. We can also make friends and help each other on the way.
To make the activity more interesting,I hope to go to East Mountain on June 25th. Since it's a little far,we'd better meet at the school gate at 7:30 a. m. and go there by bus. We can collect some historical stories about the famous mountain so that we can share them together. It'll be nice if we can try some local food for lunch there. In the afternoon,we can pick up the rubbish to protect the environment. Then we can go home at 4:30 p. m. We're sure to have great fun.
Hope my suggestions help.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Sir,
I'm happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month. I like climbing mountains with my classmates. We can enjoy the beauty of nature. We can also make friends and help each other on the way.
To make the activity more interesting,I hope to go to East Mountain on June 25th. Since it's a little far,we'd better meet at the school gate at 7:30 a. m. and go there by bus. We can collect some historical stories about the famous mountain so that we can share them together. It'll be nice if we can try some local food for lunch there. In the afternoon,we can pick up the rubbish to protect the environment. Then we can go home at 4:30 p. m. We're sure to have great fun.
Hope my suggestions help.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】首先明确写作身份为李华，需以书信形式向校英语社团投稿，需覆盖三个核心要求：1.说明喜欢的户外活动及理由；2.规划具体活动安排（含时间、地点、交通、内容等）；3.确保内容连贯、符合词数要求，无真实人名校名。解题思路：先确定合适的户外活动，再阐述理由，接着细化活动安排，最后以礼貌语气收尾，严格遵循书信格式。
【解析】写作步骤：1.开头点明投稿背景，引出自己喜欢的户外活动；2.说明喜欢该活动的理由（如欣赏自然、交友互助）；3.具体规划活动：明确时间、地点、交通方式，设计活动内容（如分享山的历史故事、品尝当地美食、环保行动）及返程时间；4.结尾礼貌表达期望。注意使用规范书信用语，保证词数达标，不出现真实信息。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sir,
I'm happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month. I like climbing mountains with my classmates. We can enjoy the beauty of nature. We can also make friends and help each other on the way.
To make the activity more interesting,I hope to go to East Mountain on June 25th. Since it's a little far,we'd better meet at the school gate at 7:30 a. m. and go there by bus. We can collect some historical stories about the famous mountain so that we can share them together. It'll be nice if we can try some local food for lunch there. In the afternoon,we can pick up the rubbish to protect the environment. Then we can go home at 4:30 p. m. We're sure to have great fun.
Hope my suggestions help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点式书面表达
【点评】该范文符合投稿书信格式，完整覆盖所有要求要点，理由合理充分，活动安排具体清晰，细节丰富，语言连贯自然，符合词数要求，是一篇合格的投稿短文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1.开头点明投稿背景，引出自己喜欢的户外活动；2.说明喜欢该活动的理由（如欣赏自然、交友互助）；3.具体规划活动：明确时间、地点、交通方式，设计活动内容（如分享山的历史故事、品尝当地美食、环保行动）及返程时间；4.结尾礼貌表达期望。注意使用规范书信用语，保证词数达标，不出现真实信息。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sir,
I'm happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month. I like climbing mountains with my classmates. We can enjoy the beauty of nature. We can also make friends and help each other on the way.
To make the activity more interesting,I hope to go to East Mountain on June 25th. Since it's a little far,we'd better meet at the school gate at 7:30 a. m. and go there by bus. We can collect some historical stories about the famous mountain so that we can share them together. It'll be nice if we can try some local food for lunch there. In the afternoon,we can pick up the rubbish to protect the environment. Then we can go home at 4:30 p. m. We're sure to have great fun.
Hope my suggestions help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点式书面表达
【点评】该范文符合投稿书信格式，完整覆盖所有要求要点，理由合理充分，活动安排具体清晰，细节丰富，语言连贯自然，符合词数要求，是一篇合格的投稿短文。
【难度系数】0.6
