写作 练兵
奥运会作为国际赛事，一直受到人们密切的关注。体育项目丰富多样，赛场上的运动健儿教会我们拼搏、奋斗、团结……请你根据下列写作要点，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的体育项目及运动员。
写作要点：
1. What's your favourite sports event? 2. Who is your favourite athlete? 3. Why do you like them?

Nowadays, more and more people have realized the importance of sports. Among all sports, I like skating best.
When I was a child, I showed great curiosity and love for skating. My father always taught me many skating skills. Whenever I was skating, I felt so relaxed and enjoyable. In addition, I often watched the Olympic Games because skating is seen as an important event in it. My favourite player is Yang Jingru. She won the short track gold medal. She and her partner were so clever because they used a method to successfully overcome the difficulty. My dream is also to be an Olympic athlete that makes my country proud. And I believe that I will make it come true one day.
All in all, skating brings me not only great happiness but also sweet memories. So what's your favourite sport?

【分析】
本题要求写一篇100词左右的英语短文，需涵盖三个核心写作要点：1. 最喜欢的体育项目；2. 最喜欢的运动员；3. 喜欢该项目/运动员的原因。解题思路：先开篇点明喜爱的体育项目，再说明喜爱该项目的缘由，接着引出最喜欢的运动员并阐述喜欢的理由，最后收尾升华情感，确保内容紧扣要点、语言通顺、词数符合要求。
【解析】
按照写作要点组织内容：开篇点出最喜欢的体育项目为滑冰，说明喜爱滑冰的个人体验，再介绍最喜欢的运动员杨静茹的成就与闪光点，最后表达自身梦想，结构清晰且符合要求，具体内容如下：
Nowadays, more and more people have realized the importance of sports. Among all sports, I like skating best.
When I was a child, I showed great curiosity and love for skating. My father always taught me many skating skills. Whenever I was skating, I felt so relaxed and enjoyable. In addition, I often watched the Olympic Games because skating is seen as an important event in it. My favourite player is Yang Jingru. She won the short track gold medal. She and her partner were so clever because they used a method to successfully overcome the difficulty. My dream is also to be an Olympic athlete that makes my country proud. And I believe that I will make it come true one day.
All in all, skating brings me not only great happiness but also sweet memories. So what's your favourite sport?
【答案】
Nowadays, more and more people have realized the importance of sports. Among all sports, I like skating best.
When I was a child, I showed great curiosity and love for skating. My father always taught me many skating skills. Whenever I was skating, I felt so relaxed and enjoyable. In addition, I often watched the Olympic Games because skating is seen as an important event in it. My favourite player is Yang Jingru. She won the short track gold medal. She and her partner were so clever because they used a method to successfully overcome the difficulty. My dream is also to be an Olympic athlete that makes my country proud. And I believe that I will make it come true one day.
All in all, skating brings me not only great happiness but also sweet memories. So what's your favourite sport?
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；要点式短文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣写作要求，完整覆盖三个核心要点，内容充实且情感真挚，语言通顺、结构完整，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的英语写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.6