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Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
在中国历史中,有许多伟大的科学家。假如你是李华,请给你的外国笔友Tony写一封邮件,介绍两位伟大的科学家。要求:字迹工整,语言流畅;80词左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示:1.万户,明代太空探索的先驱者。他对太空充满好奇,发明了一种“飞行椅”。他在测试这项发明时丧生。尽管失败了,但他的好奇心给了未来的探险家灵感。
2.张衡,中国科学家和发明家。他花了数年时间研究天空和地球。最后,他绘制了中国第一张星图,发明了第一台地震探测器。他的好奇心至今仍影响着科学家们。
Dear Tony,
Hello! I'd like to introduce two scientists to you today.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
在中国历史中,有许多伟大的科学家。假如你是李华,请给你的外国笔友Tony写一封邮件,介绍两位伟大的科学家。要求:字迹工整,语言流畅;80词左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示:1.万户,明代太空探索的先驱者。他对太空充满好奇,发明了一种“飞行椅”。他在测试这项发明时丧生。尽管失败了,但他的好奇心给了未来的探险家灵感。
2.张衡,中国科学家和发明家。他花了数年时间研究天空和地球。最后,他绘制了中国第一张星图,发明了第一台地震探测器。他的好奇心至今仍影响着科学家们。
Dear Tony,
Hello! I'd like to introduce two scientists to you today.
First,let me tell you about Wan Hu. He was the pioneer of space exploration in the Ming Dynasty. He was curious about space and made a "flying chair". He died while testing it,but his curiosity inspired later explorers.
Next is Zhang Heng. He studied the sky and Earth for many years. He drew China's first star map and created the earliest earthquake detector. His curiosity still encourages scientists today. Both of them show the wonderful spirit of Chinese scientists. I hope you like their stories.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Tony,
Hello! I'd like to introduce two scientists to you today. First,let me tell you about Wan Hu. He was the pioneer of space exploration in the Ming Dynasty. He was curious about space and made a "flying chair". He died while testing it,but his curiosity inspired later explorers.
Next is Zhang Heng. He studied the sky and Earth for many years. He drew China's first star map and created the earliest earthquake detector. His curiosity still encourages scientists today.
Both of them show the wonderful spirit of Chinese scientists. I hope you like their stories.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Dear Tony,
Hello! I'd like to introduce two scientists to you today. First,let me tell you about Wan Hu. He was the pioneer of space exploration in the Ming Dynasty. He was curious about space and made a "flying chair". He died while testing it,but his curiosity inspired later explorers.
Next is Zhang Heng. He studied the sky and Earth for many years. He drew China's first star map and created the earliest earthquake detector. His curiosity still encourages scientists today.
Both of them show the wonderful spirit of Chinese scientists. I hope you like their stories.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书面表达中的邮件写作任务，要求以李华的身份给外国笔友Tony介绍两位中国古代伟大科学家。解题思路：1. 明确邮件结构，开头已给出，需补充中间主体和结尾；2. 围绕提示要点，分别介绍万户（明代太空探索先驱、发明飞行椅、测试时牺牲、启发后人）和张衡（研究天地多年、绘首张星图、发明地震仪、影响至今）；3. 用准确流畅的英语组织内容，控制字数在要求范围内，确保要点齐全、逻辑连贯。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头，先介绍万户：将提示信息转化为英语，准确表达其身份、发明、经历及影响；2. 接着介绍张衡：对应提示内容，说明其研究成果和贡献；3. 添加总结句呼应主题，最后符合邮件格式完成写作。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tony,
Hello! I'd like to introduce two scientists to you today. First,let me tell you about Wan Hu. He was the pioneer of space exploration in the Ming Dynasty. He was curious about space and made a "flying chair". He died while testing it,but his curiosity inspired later explorers.
Next is Zhang Heng. He studied the sky and Earth for many years. He drew China's first star map and created the earliest earthquake detector. His curiosity still encourages scientists today.
Both of them show the wonderful spirit of Chinese scientists. I hope you like their stories.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、中国古代文化介绍、英语写作技巧
【点评】
本题为提示性英语书面表达，既考查学生的英语语言组织能力，又要求传播中国优秀传统文化，需准确提取给定要点，用规范邮件格式写作，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语书面表达中的邮件写作任务，要求以李华的身份给外国笔友Tony介绍两位中国古代伟大科学家。解题思路：1. 明确邮件结构，开头已给出，需补充中间主体和结尾；2. 围绕提示要点，分别介绍万户（明代太空探索先驱、发明飞行椅、测试时牺牲、启发后人）和张衡（研究天地多年、绘首张星图、发明地震仪、影响至今）；3. 用准确流畅的英语组织内容，控制字数在要求范围内，确保要点齐全、逻辑连贯。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头，先介绍万户：将提示信息转化为英语，准确表达其身份、发明、经历及影响；2. 接着介绍张衡：对应提示内容，说明其研究成果和贡献；3. 添加总结句呼应主题，最后符合邮件格式完成写作。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tony,
Hello! I'd like to introduce two scientists to you today. First,let me tell you about Wan Hu. He was the pioneer of space exploration in the Ming Dynasty. He was curious about space and made a "flying chair". He died while testing it,but his curiosity inspired later explorers.
Next is Zhang Heng. He studied the sky and Earth for many years. He drew China's first star map and created the earliest earthquake detector. His curiosity still encourages scientists today.
Both of them show the wonderful spirit of Chinese scientists. I hope you like their stories.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、中国古代文化介绍、英语写作技巧
【点评】
本题为提示性英语书面表达，既考查学生的英语语言组织能力，又要求传播中国优秀传统文化，需准确提取给定要点，用规范邮件格式写作，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
