五、书面表达
请你以“My fashion design”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍自己参加学校服装设计比赛的作品。
内容要点: 1. T恤衫是棉质的、白色,…;
2. 牛仔裤…,所以我的设计包括一条蓝色牛仔裤;
3. 运动鞋是由皮革制成的,…;
4. 所有学生都认为…
注意事项: 1. 短文须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 须展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
3. 词数70左右,短文首句已给出,不计入总词数。
My fashion design
Here’s my design for a T-shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of trainers.
请你以“My fashion design”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍自己参加学校服装设计比赛的作品。
内容要点: 1. T恤衫是棉质的、白色,…;
2. 牛仔裤…,所以我的设计包括一条蓝色牛仔裤;
3. 运动鞋是由皮革制成的,…;
4. 所有学生都认为…
注意事项: 1. 短文须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 须展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
3. 词数70左右,短文首句已给出,不计入总词数。
My fashion design
Here’s my design for a T-shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of trainers.
答案
One possible version:
Here’s my design for a T-shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of trainers. The T-shirt is made of cotton. It’s white. Cotton T-shirts are comfortable to wear and white matches any other colour. Jeans are popular among young people, so I also design a pair of blue jeans. The trainers are made of leather. They’re light and comfortable. They are fit for playing sports or a long walk.
All the students think my design is cool and is suitable for a young man.
(70 words)
Here’s my design for a T-shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of trainers. The T-shirt is made of cotton. It’s white. Cotton T-shirts are comfortable to wear and white matches any other colour. Jeans are popular among young people, so I also design a pair of blue jeans. The trainers are made of leather. They’re light and comfortable. They are fit for playing sports or a long walk.
All the students think my design is cool and is suitable for a young man.
(70 words)
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,要求以“My fashion design”为题介绍服装设计比赛作品,需涵盖四个内容要点:T恤的材质与特点、牛仔裤的设计原因、运动鞋的材质与特点、学生对设计的评价。解题时需结合已给首句衔接内容,适当添加合理细节(如材质对应的优势),确保语句通顺、意思连贯,词数控制在70左右,符合写作规范。
【解析】需围绕三个服装及学生评价展开:1. T恤:由棉质制成,白色,棉质舒适且白色百搭;2. 牛仔裤:受年轻人欢迎,故设计蓝色牛仔裤;3. 运动鞋:皮革制成,轻便舒适,适合运动或长距离行走;4. 学生评价:认为设计酷,适合年轻人。
【答案】One possible version:
Here’s my design for a T-shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of trainers. The T-shirt is made of cotton. It’s white. Cotton T-shirts are comfortable to wear and white matches any other colour. Jeans are popular among young people, so I also design a pair of blue jeans. The trainers are made of leather. They’re light and comfortable. They are fit for playing sports or a long walk.
All the students think my design is cool and is suitable for a young man.
【知识点】英语书面表达、服装类英语表达、句子连贯写作
【点评】该范文全面覆盖题目要求的所有内容要点,合理添加了材质对应的优势等细节,语句通顺连贯,词数符合要求,结构清晰,是符合标准的优秀参考范文,能帮助学生掌握此类话题的写作技巧。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】需围绕三个服装及学生评价展开:1. T恤:由棉质制成,白色,棉质舒适且白色百搭;2. 牛仔裤:受年轻人欢迎,故设计蓝色牛仔裤;3. 运动鞋:皮革制成,轻便舒适,适合运动或长距离行走;4. 学生评价:认为设计酷,适合年轻人。
【答案】One possible version:
Here’s my design for a T-shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of trainers. The T-shirt is made of cotton. It’s white. Cotton T-shirts are comfortable to wear and white matches any other colour. Jeans are popular among young people, so I also design a pair of blue jeans. The trainers are made of leather. They’re light and comfortable. They are fit for playing sports or a long walk.
All the students think my design is cool and is suitable for a young man.
【知识点】英语书面表达、服装类英语表达、句子连贯写作
【点评】该范文全面覆盖题目要求的所有内容要点,合理添加了材质对应的优势等细节,语句通顺连贯,词数符合要求,结构清晰,是符合标准的优秀参考范文,能帮助学生掌握此类话题的写作技巧。
【难度系数】0.6
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