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第三节 书面表达。(满分10分)
假设你是约翰(John)，你的哥哥戴尔(Dale)开了几家网店(online store)，其中一家是服装店(clothing store)。请以“Dale's Clothing Store”为题，根据下面的提示，用英文写一则不少于60个单词的广告(题目已给出，不计入总词数)，为戴尔的网店做推广。
提示:
1. What's the online store's name?
2. What can people buy in the store?
3. What are the prices of the clothes?
4. Is there a big sale?
Dale's Clothing Store
假设你是约翰(John)，你的哥哥戴尔(Dale)开了几家网店(online store)，其中一家是服装店(clothing store)。请以“Dale's Clothing Store”为题，根据下面的提示，用英文写一则不少于60个单词的广告(题目已给出，不计入总词数)，为戴尔的网店做推广。
提示:
1. What's the online store's name?
2. What can people buy in the store?
3. What are the prices of the clothes?
4. Is there a big sale?
Dale's Clothing Store
Do you want to become beautiful? Do you
like cool clothes? Come and buy your clothes at
Dale's Clothing Store. Here, you can buy all
kinds of clothes you need. We sell all our
clothes at very good prices. For boys and girls,
we have trousers for only 32 yuan. We have
very cool shoes in many colors. They're only 34
yuan. Do you need to buy clothes for your
parents, too? There are sweaters for them, only
20 yuan. On weekends, we have a big sale.
Come to our online store now!
like cool clothes? Come and buy your clothes at
Dale's Clothing Store. Here, you can buy all
kinds of clothes you need. We sell all our
clothes at very good prices. For boys and girls,
we have trousers for only 32 yuan. We have
very cool shoes in many colors. They're only 34
yuan. Do you need to buy clothes for your
parents, too? There are sweaters for them, only
20 yuan. On weekends, we have a big sale.
Come to our online store now!
答案
Dale's Clothing Store
Do you want to become beautiful? Do you
like cool clothes? Come and buy your clothes at
Dale's Clothing Store. Here, you can buy all
kinds of clothes you need. We sell all our
clothes at very good prices. For boys and girls,
we have trousers for only 32 yuan. We have
very cool shoes in many colors. They're only 34
yuan. Do you need to buy clothes for your
parents, too? There are sweaters for them, only
20 yuan. On weekends, we have a big sale.
Come to our online store now!
Do you want to become beautiful? Do you
like cool clothes? Come and buy your clothes at
Dale's Clothing Store. Here, you can buy all
kinds of clothes you need. We sell all our
clothes at very good prices. For boys and girls,
we have trousers for only 32 yuan. We have
very cool shoes in many colors. They're only 34
yuan. Do you need to buy clothes for your
parents, too? There are sweaters for them, only
20 yuan. On weekends, we have a big sale.
Come to our online store now!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达中的广告写作题，解题思路如下：首先明确写作任务：以约翰的身份为哥哥戴尔的服装店网店写推广广告，需覆盖4个提示要点（店名、售卖商品、服装价格、是否有大促销），且英文词数不少于60。写作时，先以问句吸引读者注意，再依次点明店名、列举不同人群的服装品类、给出具体价格，最后说明周末大促销并发出行动号召，确保所有提示要点都包含，语言符合广告的活泼性与吸引力。
【解析】
1. 开头用问句吸引目标顾客：Do you want to become beautiful? Do you like cool clothes?
2. 点明主题与店名：Come and buy your clothes at Dale's Clothing Store.
3. 说明售卖的服装品类：Here, you can buy all kinds of clothes you need, including trousers for boys and girls, cool shoes in many colors, sweaters for parents.
4. 给出具体价格：Trousers are only 32 yuan, shoes are only 34 yuan, sweaters are only 20 yuan.
5. 说明促销信息：On weekends, we have a big sale.
6. 结尾号召行动：Come to our online store now!
将上述内容连贯成通顺的英文短文，确保词数达标。
【答案】
Dale's Clothing Store
Do you want to become beautiful? Do you
like cool clothes? Come and buy your clothes at
Dale's Clothing Store. Here, you can buy all
kinds of clothes you need. We sell all our
clothes at very good prices. For boys and girls,
we have trousers for only 32 yuan. We have
very cool shoes in many colors. They're only 34
yuan. Do you need to buy clothes for your
parents, too? There are sweaters for them, only
20 yuan. On weekends, we have a big sale.
Come to our online store now!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、广告写作、英语书面表达
【点评】
本题考查学生对英语广告类应用文的写作能力，要求紧扣提示要点，语言通顺自然，符合广告的文体特点，难度适中，能有效考查学生的英语综合应用与表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达中的广告写作题，解题思路如下：首先明确写作任务：以约翰的身份为哥哥戴尔的服装店网店写推广广告，需覆盖4个提示要点（店名、售卖商品、服装价格、是否有大促销），且英文词数不少于60。写作时，先以问句吸引读者注意，再依次点明店名、列举不同人群的服装品类、给出具体价格，最后说明周末大促销并发出行动号召，确保所有提示要点都包含，语言符合广告的活泼性与吸引力。
【解析】
1. 开头用问句吸引目标顾客：Do you want to become beautiful? Do you like cool clothes?
2. 点明主题与店名：Come and buy your clothes at Dale's Clothing Store.
3. 说明售卖的服装品类：Here, you can buy all kinds of clothes you need, including trousers for boys and girls, cool shoes in many colors, sweaters for parents.
4. 给出具体价格：Trousers are only 32 yuan, shoes are only 34 yuan, sweaters are only 20 yuan.
5. 说明促销信息：On weekends, we have a big sale.
6. 结尾号召行动：Come to our online store now!
将上述内容连贯成通顺的英文短文，确保词数达标。
【答案】
Dale's Clothing Store
Do you want to become beautiful? Do you
like cool clothes? Come and buy your clothes at
Dale's Clothing Store. Here, you can buy all
kinds of clothes you need. We sell all our
clothes at very good prices. For boys and girls,
we have trousers for only 32 yuan. We have
very cool shoes in many colors. They're only 34
yuan. Do you need to buy clothes for your
parents, too? There are sweaters for them, only
20 yuan. On weekends, we have a big sale.
Come to our online store now!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、广告写作、英语书面表达
【点评】
本题考查学生对英语广告类应用文的写作能力，要求紧扣提示要点，语言通顺自然，符合广告的文体特点，难度适中，能有效考查学生的英语综合应用与表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
