写作指导
在你成长的历程中,有些日子会让你开心快乐,经久难忘。请以“My Happy Trip”为题,用英语写一篇60词左右的短文(开头已给出,不计入总词数),并根据提示记述你那天的活动和感受。

My Happy Trip
I had a happy trip last Sunday. In the morning,
写作佳句
1. 早上,我参观了一个农场,并和那里的一位农民交谈。
In the morning, I
2. 市场里人太多了。
3. 然后我在一家餐馆吃了午饭。
Then I
4. 下午,我去爬山并拍了一些照片。
In the afternoon, I climbed the mountain and
5. 那天我很累,但我非常开心。
I was tired that day, but I
思路导引
1. 人称:第
2. 时态:
3. 体裁:
4. 列提纲

在你成长的历程中,有些日子会让你开心快乐,经久难忘。请以“My Happy Trip”为题,用英语写一篇60词左右的短文(开头已给出,不计入总词数),并根据提示记述你那天的活动和感受。
My Happy Trip
I had a happy trip last Sunday. In the morning,
visited a farm
写作佳句
1. 早上,我参观了一个农场,并和那里的一位农民交谈。
In the morning, I
visited a farm
and talked with a farmer there.2. 市场里人太多了。
There were
too many people in the market.3. 然后我在一家餐馆吃了午饭。
Then I
had lunch
in a restaurant.4. 下午,我去爬山并拍了一些照片。
In the afternoon, I climbed the mountain and
took some photos
.5. 那天我很累,但我非常开心。
I was tired that day, but I
was very happy
.思路导引
1. 人称:第
一
人称2. 时态:
一般过去时
3. 体裁:
记叙文
4. 列提纲
答案
【写作佳句】
1. visited a farm 2. There were 3. had lunch
4. took some photos 5. was very happy
【思路导引】
1. 一 2. 一般过去时 3. 记叙文
写作范例
My Happy Trip
I had a happy trip last Sunday. In the morning, I visited a farm and talked with a farmer there. At noon, I went to a market. There were too many people in the market. I bought some gifts for my friends. Then I had lunch in a restaurant. In the afternoon, I climbed the mountain and took some photos.
I was tired that day, but I was very happy.
1. visited a farm 2. There were 3. had lunch
4. took some photos 5. was very happy
【思路导引】
1. 一 2. 一般过去时 3. 记叙文
写作范例
My Happy Trip
I had a happy trip last Sunday. In the morning, I visited a farm and talked with a farmer there. At noon, I went to a market. There were too many people in the market. I bought some gifts for my friends. Then I had lunch in a restaurant. In the afternoon, I climbed the mountain and took some photos.
I was tired that day, but I was very happy.
解析
【解析】
这是一道英语写作与句型补全结合的题目。首先需根据语境用一般过去时补全写作佳句,再以第一人称、一般过去时的记叙文形式,按时间顺序(早上、中午、下午)记述旅行活动,最后表达个人感受,完成60词左右的短文。补全句子要结合固定搭配和时态变化,写作需紧扣主题、语句通顺。
【答案】
【写作佳句】
1. visited a farm
2. There were
3. had lunch
4. took some photos
5. was very happy
【思路导引】
1. 一
2. 一般过去时
3. 记叙文
【写作范例】
My Happy Trip
I had a happy trip last Sunday. In the morning, I visited a farm and talked with a farmer there. At noon, I went to a market. There were too many people in the market. I bought some gifts for my friends. Then I had lunch in a restaurant. In the afternoon, I climbed the mountain and took some photos.
I was tired that day, but I was very happy.
【知识点】
一般过去时用法、记叙文写作、固定句型运用
【点评】
本题围绕“开心的旅行”这一贴近生活的主题,将句型补全与短文写作结合,既考查学生对一般过去时的掌握,又锻炼其英语叙事能力,有助于提升学生的语言综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一道英语写作与句型补全结合的题目。首先需根据语境用一般过去时补全写作佳句,再以第一人称、一般过去时的记叙文形式,按时间顺序(早上、中午、下午)记述旅行活动,最后表达个人感受,完成60词左右的短文。补全句子要结合固定搭配和时态变化,写作需紧扣主题、语句通顺。
【答案】
【写作佳句】
1. visited a farm
2. There were
3. had lunch
4. took some photos
5. was very happy
【思路导引】
1. 一
2. 一般过去时
3. 记叙文
【写作范例】
My Happy Trip
I had a happy trip last Sunday. In the morning, I visited a farm and talked with a farmer there. At noon, I went to a market. There were too many people in the market. I bought some gifts for my friends. Then I had lunch in a restaurant. In the afternoon, I climbed the mountain and took some photos.
I was tired that day, but I was very happy.
【知识点】
一般过去时用法、记叙文写作、固定句型运用
【点评】
本题围绕“开心的旅行”这一贴近生活的主题,将句型补全与短文写作结合,既考查学生对一般过去时的掌握,又锻炼其英语叙事能力,有助于提升学生的语言综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
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