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Ⅶ. 书面表达。
假设你叫林洋,收到了你的笔友Susan的一封信。请你给她写一封回信,在信中回答她的问题,提出你的建议,并就此事谈谈你的看法。
Dear Lin Yang,
I have a problem these days. My mother doesn't allow me to watch TV even on weekends. She says as a middle school student, my job is to study. After I finish my homework, she says, I should read books and watching TV is bad for me. But I think I need a rest and watching TV helps me learn a lot too.
Do you have the same problem? What do you think of my mother's decision? What should I do?
Yours,
Susan
假设你叫林洋,收到了你的笔友Susan的一封信。请你给她写一封回信,在信中回答她的问题,提出你的建议,并就此事谈谈你的看法。
Dear Lin Yang,
I have a problem these days. My mother doesn't allow me to watch TV even on weekends. She says as a middle school student, my job is to study. After I finish my homework, she says, I should read books and watching TV is bad for me. But I think I need a rest and watching TV helps me learn a lot too.
Do you have the same problem? What do you think of my mother's decision? What should I do?
Yours,
Susan
答案
One possible version:
Dear Susan,
I don't have this problem. My mother allows me to watch TV after I have finished my
homework.
I think your mother shouldn't do like this. As a student, study is our main job, but it
is not all of our life. We also need a rest and enjoy ourselves. Watching TV is a good way
for us to relax. Besides, some TV programmes are good for our study.
I think you should talk about it with your mum. Look for some information on the
Internet to help you. You can also ask your father for help.
Yours,
Lin Yang
Dear Susan,
I don't have this problem. My mother allows me to watch TV after I have finished my
homework.
I think your mother shouldn't do like this. As a student, study is our main job, but it
is not all of our life. We also need a rest and enjoy ourselves. Watching TV is a good way
for us to relax. Besides, some TV programmes are good for our study.
I think you should talk about it with your mum. Look for some information on the
Internet to help you. You can also ask your father for help.
Yours,
Lin Yang
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语书面表达题，要求以林洋的身份给笔友Susan写回信。解题思路为：1. 遵循英文书信格式，包含称呼、正文、署名；2. 依次回应Susan提出的三个问题：是否有同样的问题、对其母亲决定的看法、给出具体可行的建议；3. 表达观点时需兼顾学习的重要性与适当放松的必要性，逻辑清晰、语言通顺。
【解析】
按照书信结构分三段写作：
第一段：回应Susan的第一个问题，说明自己没有同样的问题，举例母亲允许自己完成作业后看电视；
第二段：表达对Susan母亲决定的看法，指出学习是主要任务但并非全部，适当放松（如看电视）有助于学习和休息；
第三段：给出具体建议，如和母亲沟通、查找相关资料、请父亲帮忙等。
【答案】
Dear Susan,
I don't have this problem. My mother allows me to watch TV after I have finished my homework.
I think your mother shouldn't do like this. As a student, study is our main job, but it is not all of our life. We also need a rest and enjoy ourselves. Watching TV is a good way for us to relax. Besides, some TV programmes are good for our study.
I think you should talk about it with your mum. Look for some information on the Internet to help you. You can also ask your father for help.
Yours,
Lin Yang
【知识点】
英语书信写作、观点表达、建议类句型
【点评】
本题考查初中英语书面表达能力，要求学生掌握书信格式，能清晰回应问题、表达合理观点并给出可行建议，注重语言的实用性与交际性，是常见的书信类写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一道英语书面表达题，要求以林洋的身份给笔友Susan写回信。解题思路为：1. 遵循英文书信格式，包含称呼、正文、署名；2. 依次回应Susan提出的三个问题：是否有同样的问题、对其母亲决定的看法、给出具体可行的建议；3. 表达观点时需兼顾学习的重要性与适当放松的必要性，逻辑清晰、语言通顺。
【解析】
按照书信结构分三段写作：
第一段：回应Susan的第一个问题，说明自己没有同样的问题，举例母亲允许自己完成作业后看电视；
第二段：表达对Susan母亲决定的看法，指出学习是主要任务但并非全部，适当放松（如看电视）有助于学习和休息；
第三段：给出具体建议，如和母亲沟通、查找相关资料、请父亲帮忙等。
【答案】
Dear Susan,
I don't have this problem. My mother allows me to watch TV after I have finished my homework.
I think your mother shouldn't do like this. As a student, study is our main job, but it is not all of our life. We also need a rest and enjoy ourselves. Watching TV is a good way for us to relax. Besides, some TV programmes are good for our study.
I think you should talk about it with your mum. Look for some information on the Internet to help you. You can also ask your father for help.
Yours,
Lin Yang
【知识点】
英语书信写作、观点表达、建议类句型
【点评】
本题考查初中英语书面表达能力，要求学生掌握书信格式，能清晰回应问题、表达合理观点并给出可行建议，注重语言的实用性与交际性，是常见的书信类写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
