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八、书面表达(满分25分)
在繁忙的学习之余，我们的生活应是丰富多彩的。如何才能使我们的课余生活更有意义呢？学校英文校刊Sunshine for Teens向全体学生征稿，请根据以下提示，从中选择至少三个方面，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法并说明理由。
要求：
1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，语句通顺，意思连贯，可作适当发挥；
2. 90词左右；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Make Our Free Time Meaningful
As students，we're busy with study，but our free time can be colourful. Here's how to make it meaningful.
在繁忙的学习之余，我们的生活应是丰富多彩的。如何才能使我们的课余生活更有意义呢？学校英文校刊Sunshine for Teens向全体学生征稿，请根据以下提示，从中选择至少三个方面，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法并说明理由。
要求：
1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，语句通顺，意思连贯，可作适当发挥；
2. 90词左右；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Make Our Free Time Meaningful
As students，we're busy with study，but our free time can be colourful. Here's how to make it meaningful.
答案
One possible version:
Make Our Free Time Meaningful
As students, we're busy with study, but our free time can be colourful. Here's how to make it meaningful.
First, getting close to nature is great. It makes us relaxed and helps us understand the beauty of the world. Second, loving reading opens up a new world to us. Also, we can learn a lot by reading. Besides, we should try our best to help others. Helping others teaches us how to be kind. At the same time, we also feel happy by giving a helping hand. Finally, it is important to know manners. Simple acts like greeting teachers politely or listening patiently in class can make the class full of happiness.
These activities enrich our lives, and they make us find true joy in our free time.
Make Our Free Time Meaningful
As students, we're busy with study, but our free time can be colourful. Here's how to make it meaningful.
First, getting close to nature is great. It makes us relaxed and helps us understand the beauty of the world. Second, loving reading opens up a new world to us. Also, we can learn a lot by reading. Besides, we should try our best to help others. Helping others teaches us how to be kind. At the same time, we also feel happy by giving a helping hand. Finally, it is important to know manners. Simple acts like greeting teachers politely or listening patiently in class can make the class full of happiness.
These activities enrich our lives, and they make us find true joy in our free time.
解析
【分析】本题要求围绕“让课余时间有意义”的主题写英语短文，需从图示的四个要点（亲自然、乐奉献、知礼节、爱阅读）中选至少三个，结合理由阐述，语句通顺、意思连贯，字数90左右。解题思路：先确定选取的要点，再为每个要点补充合理的理由，最后总结这些活动的意义，衔接开头内容，确保符合写作要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 明确写作主题，围绕“make free time meaningful”展开；2. 选取至少三个图示要点，如亲自然、爱阅读、乐奉献，分别说明理由：亲近自然可放松身心、感受世界之美；阅读能开阔视野；帮助他人可培养善良品质；3. 适当补充细节，使内容连贯，控制字数在90左右，符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Make Our Free Time Meaningful
As students, we're busy with study, but our free time can be colourful. Here's how to make it meaningful.
First, getting close to nature is great. It makes us relaxed and helps us understand the beauty of the world. Second, loving reading opens up a new world to us. Also, we can learn a lot by reading. Besides, we should try our best to help others. Helping others teaches us how to be kind. At the same time, we also feel happy by giving a helping hand. Finally, it is important to know manners. Simple acts like greeting teachers politely or listening patiently in class can make the class full of happiness.
These activities enrich our lives, and they make us find true joy in our free time.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作、要点阐述
【点评】本文紧扣主题，选取了多个符合要求的要点，每个要点都配有合理的理由，语句通顺、逻辑清晰，符合字数要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：1. 明确写作主题，围绕“make free time meaningful”展开；2. 选取至少三个图示要点，如亲自然、爱阅读、乐奉献，分别说明理由：亲近自然可放松身心、感受世界之美；阅读能开阔视野；帮助他人可培养善良品质；3. 适当补充细节，使内容连贯，控制字数在90左右，符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Make Our Free Time Meaningful
As students, we're busy with study, but our free time can be colourful. Here's how to make it meaningful.
First, getting close to nature is great. It makes us relaxed and helps us understand the beauty of the world. Second, loving reading opens up a new world to us. Also, we can learn a lot by reading. Besides, we should try our best to help others. Helping others teaches us how to be kind. At the same time, we also feel happy by giving a helping hand. Finally, it is important to know manners. Simple acts like greeting teachers politely or listening patiently in class can make the class full of happiness.
These activities enrich our lives, and they make us find true joy in our free time.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作、要点阐述
【点评】本文紧扣主题，选取了多个符合要求的要点，每个要点都配有合理的理由，语句通顺、逻辑清晰，符合字数要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.5
