素养提升
【写作背景】
本单元主要谈论了生活中一些意外的事情，通过本单元的学习，要求能用英语描述自己生活中的事情以及谈谈自己的感受，并学会用过去完成时来正确表述事情发生的时间。
【写作要求】
假如你是刘宁，请根据下面的内容提示，给你的笔友 Kevin 写一封电子邮件，向他倾诉你的烦恼。
内容提示：你现在很担心昨天的英语考试。因为昨天早晨你睡过头，考试迟到了。又因为时间紧张，做题过程中犯了不少错误，更糟糕的是没能完全理解书面表达的主题，所以你担心自己不能通过这次考试。
要求:80 词左右，电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Kevin，
We had an English exam yesterday.


Yours，
Liu Ning
【思路点拨】
审题:本文要求写一封电子邮件。
定要点:1. 睡过头并迟到；
2. 犯了不少错误；
3. 担心不能通过考试。
定人称:第一人称
定时态:一般过去时
句式结构:
1. 描述迟到原因(因果句式)
Due to oversleeping yesterday morning, I arrived late for the exam.
2. 时间紧张导致的错误(让步状语从句)
Although I tried to focus, the limited time made me..., leading to...
3. 对书面表达的理解问题(自我反思句式)
I regret that..., which might have affected. . .
4. 改进决心(未来时态+建议句式)
Next time, I'll carefully...
【我的作文】
Dear Kevin，
We had an English exam yesterday.



Yours，
Liu Ning

【我的作文】
Dear Kevin,
We had an English exam yesterday. Now I feel very worried because I don't think I did well in it.
Firstly, due to oversleeping yesterday morning, I arrived late for the exam. When I got to the classroom, the exam had been on for half an hour. So I hurried to do the exam. Although I tried to focus, the limited time made me nervous, leading to a lot of mistakes in it. Terribly, I regret that I did the exam too fast, which might have affected me fully understanding the writing part.
Now I'm afraid I can't pass the exam. I'm really upset. Next time, I'll carefully check my alarm clock. Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Liu Ning

【分析】
本次写作任务是作为刘宁给笔友Kevin写电子邮件，倾诉英语考试的烦恼。需紧扣三个核心要点：一是早晨睡过头导致考试迟到；二是因时间紧张做题出错，且未完全理解书面表达主题；三是担心无法通过考试。写作时采用第一人称，主要时态为一般过去时，可运用因果、让步等句式让表达流畅自然，控制词数符合要求，遵循邮件格式。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，直接点明担忧心情，引出下文对考试情况的叙述；
2. 用因果句式说明迟到原因，补充“考试已开始半小时”的细节，丰富内容；
3. 用让步状语从句连接时间紧张与出错的结果，再用反思句式说明书面表达的理解问题；
4. 表达无法通过考试的担忧，同时提出改进措施，符合倾诉烦恼的语境，也契合邮件结尾的表达习惯。
【答案】
Dear Kevin,
We had an English exam yesterday. Now I feel very worried because I don't think I did well in it.
Firstly, due to oversleeping yesterday morning, I arrived late for the exam. When I got to the classroom, the exam had been on for half an hour. So I hurried to do the exam. Although I tried to focus, the limited time made me nervous, leading to a lot of mistakes in it. Terribly, I regret that I did the exam too fast, which might have affected me fully understanding the writing part.
Now I'm afraid I can't pass the exam. I'm really upset. Next time, I'll carefully check my alarm clock. Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Liu Ning
【知识点】
英语电子邮件写作、一般过去时运用、过去完成时
【点评】
本文紧扣写作要求，清晰传递了考试失利的烦恼，运用了指定句式，时态准确，细节充实，符合邮件格式，是一篇合格的单元写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.6