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你校官网正在开展以“The Power of Kindness”为题的征文活动，你有意投稿。请根据以下要点，写一篇英文文章。
内容包括:1. 善良是中国的传统美德;2. 善良的力量是巨大的,对每个人产生影响;3. 善良也是相互的,与人为善就是与己为善;4. 在校善待同学和老师,在家要关爱家人;5. 对有困难的人伸出援手,让社会充满善意。
要求:1. 文章需包含上述所有要点,可适当发挥;2. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:美德 virtue
·思维框架
·自我创作
The Power of Kindness
As we all know,
I do believe each of us should contribute to the power of kindness.
·43·
你校官网正在开展以“The Power of Kindness”为题的征文活动，你有意投稿。请根据以下要点，写一篇英文文章。
内容包括:1. 善良是中国的传统美德;2. 善良的力量是巨大的,对每个人产生影响;3. 善良也是相互的,与人为善就是与己为善;4. 在校善待同学和老师,在家要关爱家人;5. 对有困难的人伸出援手,让社会充满善意。
要求:1. 文章需包含上述所有要点,可适当发挥;2. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:美德 virtue
·思维框架
·自我创作
The Power of Kindness
As we all know,
kindness is a traditional Chinese virtue.
Kindness is so powerful that it can influence everyone.
Kindness is also mutual.
Being kind to others is being kind to ourselves.
So we are expected to carry out acts of kindness in our daily life.
For example, we should treat our classmates and teachers kindly and care about our family at home.
Helping people in need is also important, which fills our society with kindness.
I do believe each of us should contribute to the power of kindness.
·43·
答案
Possible Version 1：
The Power of Kindness
As we all know, kindness is a traditional Chinese virtue. Kindness is so powerful that it can influence everyone. Kindness is also mutual. Being kind to others is being kind to ourselves. So we are expected to carry out acts of kindness in our daily life. For example, we should treat our classmates and teachers kindly and care about our family at home. Helping people in need is also important, which fills our society with kindness.
I do believe each of us should contribute to the power of kindness.
Possible Version 2：
The Power of Kindness
As we all know, kindness is a traditional virtue in China. It has been passed down from generation to generation, shaping our culture and values.
The power of kindness is enormous. A simple act of kindness, like a smile or a helping hand, can brighten someone's day and even change their life. At the same time, kindness is mutual. When we treat others with kindness, we also bring happiness to ourselves.
In school, we should be kind to our classmates and teachers, creating a warm and friendly environment. At home, we should care for our family members, showing love and respect. Moreover, we ought to help those in need, making our society full of warmth and kindness.
I do believe each of us should contribute to the power of kindness.
The Power of Kindness
As we all know, kindness is a traditional Chinese virtue. Kindness is so powerful that it can influence everyone. Kindness is also mutual. Being kind to others is being kind to ourselves. So we are expected to carry out acts of kindness in our daily life. For example, we should treat our classmates and teachers kindly and care about our family at home. Helping people in need is also important, which fills our society with kindness.
I do believe each of us should contribute to the power of kindness.
Possible Version 2：
The Power of Kindness
As we all know, kindness is a traditional virtue in China. It has been passed down from generation to generation, shaping our culture and values.
The power of kindness is enormous. A simple act of kindness, like a smile or a helping hand, can brighten someone's day and even change their life. At the same time, kindness is mutual. When we treat others with kindness, we also bring happiness to ourselves.
In school, we should be kind to our classmates and teachers, creating a warm and friendly environment. At home, we should care for our family members, showing love and respect. Moreover, we ought to help those in need, making our society full of warmth and kindness.
I do believe each of us should contribute to the power of kindness.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语提纲式征文写作，需紧扣题目要求的所有要点完成创作。解题思路如下：① 开篇点题，明确善良是中国传统美德且具有相互性，呼应主题；② 中间围绕“善良的力量”，结合要求的在校善待师生、在家关爱家人、帮助困难人群三个具体场景展开，体现善良对个人和社会的影响；③ 结尾发出呼吁，号召大家贡献力量，确保覆盖所有给定要点，语言简洁符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作时按以下步骤进行：
1. 补全开头：直接点明核心要点“善良是中国传统美德，善良是相互的，力量巨大”；
2. 中间段落：分场景举例，在校对同学老师友善，在家关爱家人，帮助有困难的人，说明善良的实际体现；
3. 衔接结尾：确保所有要求的要点（传统美德、善良的力量、相互性、在校在家行为、帮助困难者）都被覆盖，语言通顺，词数控制在80左右。
【答案】
The Power of Kindness
As we all know, kindness is a traditional Chinese virtue. Kindness is so powerful that it can influence everyone. Kindness is also mutual. Being kind to others is being kind to ourselves. So we are expected to carry out acts of kindness in our daily life. For example, we should treat our classmates and teachers kindly and care about our family at home. Helping people in need is also important, which fills our society with kindness.
I do believe each of us should contribute to the power of kindness.
【知识点】
英语写作、提纲式作文、要点表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，全面覆盖所有要求要点，结构清晰（开篇点题-举例阐述-结尾呼吁），语言简洁通顺，符合征文的格式和词数要求，适合投稿。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语提纲式征文写作，需紧扣题目要求的所有要点完成创作。解题思路如下：① 开篇点题，明确善良是中国传统美德且具有相互性，呼应主题；② 中间围绕“善良的力量”，结合要求的在校善待师生、在家关爱家人、帮助困难人群三个具体场景展开，体现善良对个人和社会的影响；③ 结尾发出呼吁，号召大家贡献力量，确保覆盖所有给定要点，语言简洁符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作时按以下步骤进行：
1. 补全开头：直接点明核心要点“善良是中国传统美德，善良是相互的，力量巨大”；
2. 中间段落：分场景举例，在校对同学老师友善，在家关爱家人，帮助有困难的人，说明善良的实际体现；
3. 衔接结尾：确保所有要求的要点（传统美德、善良的力量、相互性、在校在家行为、帮助困难者）都被覆盖，语言通顺，词数控制在80左右。
【答案】
The Power of Kindness
As we all know, kindness is a traditional Chinese virtue. Kindness is so powerful that it can influence everyone. Kindness is also mutual. Being kind to others is being kind to ourselves. So we are expected to carry out acts of kindness in our daily life. For example, we should treat our classmates and teachers kindly and care about our family at home. Helping people in need is also important, which fills our society with kindness.
I do believe each of us should contribute to the power of kindness.
【知识点】
英语写作、提纲式作文、要点表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，全面覆盖所有要求要点，结构清晰（开篇点题-举例阐述-结尾呼吁），语言简洁通顺，符合征文的格式和词数要求，适合投稿。
【难度系数】
0.6
