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八、VIII. 书面表达。
假如你是李华，是新华中学的一名中学生。本月为你校的“阳光体育”运动月，你校英语校报正在征集相关英文稿件，鼓励同学们分享自己的锻炼习惯。请写一篇英文短文投稿，内容包括：
What exercise or sports do you usually do?
· How often do you exercise?
· Why do you exercise?
要求：
1. 信息内容完整，语句连贯；
2. 70词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Exercise Habits
My name is Li Hua. I’m very happy to share my exercise habits. ___
In a word, it's very important to exercise and keep fit.
假如你是李华，是新华中学的一名中学生。本月为你校的“阳光体育”运动月，你校英语校报正在征集相关英文稿件，鼓励同学们分享自己的锻炼习惯。请写一篇英文短文投稿，内容包括：
What exercise or sports do you usually do?
· How often do you exercise?
· Why do you exercise?
要求：
1. 信息内容完整，语句连贯；
2. 70词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Exercise Habits
My name is Li Hua. I’m very happy to share my exercise habits. ___
In a word, it's very important to exercise and keep fit.
答案
Ⅷ. One possible version:
My Exercise Habits
My name is Li Hua. I'm very happy to share my exercise habits. I love sports very
much.
I usually do some sports such as swimming, running and playing basketball. I go
swimming once a week at weekends. I run every day in the morning with my classmates on
school days. I play basketball with my classmates three times a week. I exercise a lot
because it is good for my health. It also makes me happy and helps me study better.
In a word, it's very important to exercise and keep fit.
My Exercise Habits
My name is Li Hua. I'm very happy to share my exercise habits. I love sports very
much.
I usually do some sports such as swimming, running and playing basketball. I go
swimming once a week at weekends. I run every day in the morning with my classmates on
school days. I play basketball with my classmates three times a week. I exercise a lot
because it is good for my health. It also makes me happy and helps me study better.
In a word, it's very important to exercise and keep fit.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先明确核心要求：身份是李华，要给校报投稿分享自己的锻炼习惯，必须覆盖题干给出的三个指定问题。首先第一步先梳理写作逻辑：承接题目给出的开头，先自然引出自己热爱运动，先回答第一个问题，列举自己日常常做的几项符合中学生身份的运动；接着回答第二个问题，对应说明每项运动的锻炼频率，贴合真实的校园作息即可；最后回答第三个问题，从健康、情绪、学习效率的角度说明自己坚持锻炼的原因，最后自然衔接题目给出的结尾，调整语句让表达连贯，控制中间内容的词数在70左右，避免遗漏要点。
【解析】
写作按照以下步骤完成：
1. 承接给定开头，补充过渡句"I love sports very much"，自然引出下文对运动习惯的介绍；
2. 回应第一个要点，列举日常常做的运动：游泳、跑步、打篮球，清晰说明自己常参与的运动项目；
3. 回应第二个要点，结合中学生作息说明各项运动的频率：周末每周游一次泳，上学日每天晨跑，每周打三次篮球，内容真实合理；
4. 回应第三个要点，说明锻炼的原因：对健康有益，能让人心情愉悦，还能帮助提升学习状态，逻辑通顺，最后自然衔接题目给出的结尾，检查语句没有语法错误，词数符合要求。
【答案】
My Exercise Habits
My name is Li Hua. I'm very happy to share my exercise habits. I love sports very much.
I usually do some sports such as swimming, running and playing basketball. I go swimming once a week at weekends. I run every day in the morning with my classmates on school days. I play basketball with my classmates three times a week. I exercise a lot because it is good for my health. It also makes me happy and helps me study better.
In a word, it's very important to exercise and keep fit.
【知识点】
提纲类书面表达；运动话题词汇；一般现在时应用
【点评】
本题是半限定式的话题作文，已经给出了首尾段落，同时明确列出了三个必须覆盖的内容要点，大幅降低了写作门槛，学生只需要紧扣提示要点，使用描述日常习惯的一般现在时，选用贴合自身生活的运动相关表达，保证内容完整、语句通顺，就可以拿到合格以上的分数，注意不要遗漏任意一个指定要点，避免出现基础语法错误即可。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先明确核心要求：身份是李华，要给校报投稿分享自己的锻炼习惯，必须覆盖题干给出的三个指定问题。首先第一步先梳理写作逻辑：承接题目给出的开头，先自然引出自己热爱运动，先回答第一个问题，列举自己日常常做的几项符合中学生身份的运动；接着回答第二个问题，对应说明每项运动的锻炼频率，贴合真实的校园作息即可；最后回答第三个问题，从健康、情绪、学习效率的角度说明自己坚持锻炼的原因，最后自然衔接题目给出的结尾，调整语句让表达连贯，控制中间内容的词数在70左右，避免遗漏要点。
【解析】
写作按照以下步骤完成：
1. 承接给定开头，补充过渡句"I love sports very much"，自然引出下文对运动习惯的介绍；
2. 回应第一个要点，列举日常常做的运动：游泳、跑步、打篮球，清晰说明自己常参与的运动项目；
3. 回应第二个要点，结合中学生作息说明各项运动的频率：周末每周游一次泳，上学日每天晨跑，每周打三次篮球，内容真实合理；
4. 回应第三个要点，说明锻炼的原因：对健康有益，能让人心情愉悦，还能帮助提升学习状态，逻辑通顺，最后自然衔接题目给出的结尾，检查语句没有语法错误，词数符合要求。
【答案】
My Exercise Habits
My name is Li Hua. I'm very happy to share my exercise habits. I love sports very much.
I usually do some sports such as swimming, running and playing basketball. I go swimming once a week at weekends. I run every day in the morning with my classmates on school days. I play basketball with my classmates three times a week. I exercise a lot because it is good for my health. It also makes me happy and helps me study better.
In a word, it's very important to exercise and keep fit.
【知识点】
提纲类书面表达；运动话题词汇；一般现在时应用
【点评】
本题是半限定式的话题作文，已经给出了首尾段落，同时明确列出了三个必须覆盖的内容要点，大幅降低了写作门槛，学生只需要紧扣提示要点，使用描述日常习惯的一般现在时，选用贴合自身生活的运动相关表达，保证内容完整、语句通顺，就可以拿到合格以上的分数，注意不要遗漏任意一个指定要点，避免出现基础语法错误即可。
【难度系数】
0.7
省以察己
答案
我还能够用所学相关句型向身边的朋友科普运动的益处，邀约同伴一起制定日常锻炼计划。
