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三、提升题书面表达。
我们该如何把自己的想法变成真正的发明?请你大胆畅想一种实用的发明，先说说你想创造它的原因和灵感，再介绍它的用途。
写作要点：
1. What do you want to invent?
2. Why do you want to invent it?
3. What can your invention do?
要求：
1.短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3.词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good ideas are everywhere, and weshould try to turn them into reality.
我们该如何把自己的想法变成真正的发明?请你大胆畅想一种实用的发明，先说说你想创造它的原因和灵感，再介绍它的用途。
写作要点：
1. What do you want to invent?
2. Why do you want to invent it?
3. What can your invention do?
要求：
1.短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3.词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good ideas are everywhere, and weshould try to turn them into reality.
答案
I want to invent a smart cleaning robot to make our lives easier.
I want to invent it because students are busy with their studies and parents are tired after work. They don't have much time to do housework. My invention can save them a lot of time and energy.
The robot is very useful. It can help people do all kinds of housework, like sweeping the floor, cleaning windows, and washing the dishes. It can be controlled by a mobile phone, so people can start or stop it even when they are not at home.
I believe my robot will be loved by many people. If we work hard, our ideas can be turned into great inventions.
I want to invent it because students are busy with their studies and parents are tired after work. They don't have much time to do housework. My invention can save them a lot of time and energy.
The robot is very useful. It can help people do all kinds of housework, like sweeping the floor, cleaning windows, and washing the dishes. It can be controlled by a mobile phone, so people can start or stop it even when they are not at home.
I believe my robot will be loved by many people. If we work hard, our ideas can be turned into great inventions.
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇关于畅想实用发明的英语短文，需包含三个核心要点：明确发明的物品、说明发明的原因、介绍发明的用途，且开头已给出，需承接开头完成写作。解题思路为：1. 确定具体的发明对象，结合生活实际选择实用的发明；2. 从身边人群的需求出发，阐述发明的原因；3. 详细说明发明的功能用途，确保覆盖所有写作要点；4. 结尾呼应主题，保证行文连贯、符合词数要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接给定开头，直接点明要发明的物品（智能清洁机器人）；2. 从学生学业繁忙、家长工作疲惫，无暇做家务的实际情况，说明发明的原因；3. 具体介绍发明的用途：可完成扫地、擦窗、洗碗等家务，支持手机远程控制，不在家也能操作；4. 结尾表达对发明的信心，呼应“想法变现实”的主题，确保词数在80-120之间，无真实人名、校名等信息。
【答案】
I want to invent a smart cleaning robot to make our lives easier.
I want to invent it because students are busy with their studies and parents are tired after work. They don't have much time to do housework. My invention can save them a lot of time and energy.
The robot is very useful. It can help people do all kinds of housework, like sweeping the floor, cleaning windows, and washing the dishes. It can be controlled by a mobile phone, so people can start or stop it even when they are not at home.
I believe my robot will be loved by many people. If we work hard, our ideas can be turned into great inventions.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题作文（发明畅想）、要点式写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目所有写作要点，内容贴合生活实际，逻辑清晰，语言连贯流畅，符合词数要求，未出现真实信息，很好地完成了书面表达任务，体现了对“想法变发明”的合理畅想。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一篇关于畅想实用发明的英语短文，需包含三个核心要点：明确发明的物品、说明发明的原因、介绍发明的用途，且开头已给出，需承接开头完成写作。解题思路为：1. 确定具体的发明对象，结合生活实际选择实用的发明；2. 从身边人群的需求出发，阐述发明的原因；3. 详细说明发明的功能用途，确保覆盖所有写作要点；4. 结尾呼应主题，保证行文连贯、符合词数要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接给定开头，直接点明要发明的物品（智能清洁机器人）；2. 从学生学业繁忙、家长工作疲惫，无暇做家务的实际情况，说明发明的原因；3. 具体介绍发明的用途：可完成扫地、擦窗、洗碗等家务，支持手机远程控制，不在家也能操作；4. 结尾表达对发明的信心，呼应“想法变现实”的主题，确保词数在80-120之间，无真实人名、校名等信息。
【答案】
I want to invent a smart cleaning robot to make our lives easier.
I want to invent it because students are busy with their studies and parents are tired after work. They don't have much time to do housework. My invention can save them a lot of time and energy.
The robot is very useful. It can help people do all kinds of housework, like sweeping the floor, cleaning windows, and washing the dishes. It can be controlled by a mobile phone, so people can start or stop it even when they are not at home.
I believe my robot will be loved by many people. If we work hard, our ideas can be turned into great inventions.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题作文（发明畅想）、要点式写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目所有写作要点，内容贴合生活实际，逻辑清晰，语言连贯流畅，符合词数要求，未出现真实信息，很好地完成了书面表达任务，体现了对“想法变发明”的合理畅想。
【难度系数】
0.6
