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五、书面表达
友谊是一束温暖的阳光，是一份珍贵的宝藏。假如你校英文周刊正以“Friendship”为题向同学们征稿。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。词数100左右。
Friendship
In our life, everyone needs friends. They make our lives brighter and more colourful.
友谊是一束温暖的阳光，是一份珍贵的宝藏。假如你校英文周刊正以“Friendship”为题向同学们征稿。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。词数100左右。
Friendship
In our life, everyone needs friends. They make our lives brighter and more colourful.
答案
Friendship
In our life, everyone needs friends. They make our lives brighter and more colourful.
I have such a friend. Her name is Lily. She has a round face and always wears her hair in a ponytail. She is kinder and more humorous than anyone else I know. We share secrets and always help each other.
To get along with friends, I think the most important thing is to be honest. If you tell lies, your friends will not trust you. Also, we need to be patient. Listening to our friends can support them when they meet problems.
Friendship matters a lot in everyone's life. A true friend will make our lives much better and happier.
In our life, everyone needs friends. They make our lives brighter and more colourful.
I have such a friend. Her name is Lily. She has a round face and always wears her hair in a ponytail. She is kinder and more humorous than anyone else I know. We share secrets and always help each other.
To get along with friends, I think the most important thing is to be honest. If you tell lies, your friends will not trust you. Also, we need to be patient. Listening to our friends can support them when they meet problems.
Friendship matters a lot in everyone's life. A true friend will make our lives much better and happier.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“Friendship”为题写英语短文，需覆盖三个核心要点：介绍自己最好的朋友、给出与朋友相处的至少两条建议、阐述友谊的意义。解题思路为：1. 开篇点题，说明友谊的重要性；2. 介绍好友的基本情况（外貌、性格等）；3. 提出与朋友相处的具体建议；4. 总结友谊的意义，呼应主题，控制词数在100左右。
【解析】
1. 开篇：直接点明生活中人人需要朋友，友谊让生活更精彩；
2. 介绍好友：说明好友的名字、外貌、性格，以及两人的相处模式（分享秘密、互相帮助）；
3. 相处建议：提出两条核心建议——诚实（不撒谎，获得信任）、耐心（倾听朋友，支持他们）；
4. 结尾：总结友谊的重要性，强调真正的朋友让生活更美好。
【答案】
Friendship
In our life, everyone needs friends. They make our lives brighter and more colourful.
I have such a friend. Her name is Lily. She has a round face and always wears her hair in a ponytail. She is kinder and more humorous than anyone else I know. We share secrets and always help each other.
To get along with friends, I think the most important thing is to be honest. If you tell lies, your friends will not trust you. Also, we need to be patient. Listening to our friends can support them when they meet problems.
Friendship matters a lot in everyone's life. A true friend will make our lives much better and happier.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、友谊话题写作
【点评】
范文严格围绕题目要求展开，覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，语言准确流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇规范的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“Friendship”为题写英语短文，需覆盖三个核心要点：介绍自己最好的朋友、给出与朋友相处的至少两条建议、阐述友谊的意义。解题思路为：1. 开篇点题，说明友谊的重要性；2. 介绍好友的基本情况（外貌、性格等）；3. 提出与朋友相处的具体建议；4. 总结友谊的意义，呼应主题，控制词数在100左右。
【解析】
1. 开篇：直接点明生活中人人需要朋友，友谊让生活更精彩；
2. 介绍好友：说明好友的名字、外貌、性格，以及两人的相处模式（分享秘密、互相帮助）；
3. 相处建议：提出两条核心建议——诚实（不撒谎，获得信任）、耐心（倾听朋友，支持他们）；
4. 结尾：总结友谊的重要性，强调真正的朋友让生活更美好。
【答案】
Friendship
In our life, everyone needs friends. They make our lives brighter and more colourful.
I have such a friend. Her name is Lily. She has a round face and always wears her hair in a ponytail. She is kinder and more humorous than anyone else I know. We share secrets and always help each other.
To get along with friends, I think the most important thing is to be honest. If you tell lies, your friends will not trust you. Also, we need to be patient. Listening to our friends can support them when they meet problems.
Friendship matters a lot in everyone's life. A true friend will make our lives much better and happier.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、友谊话题写作
【点评】
范文严格围绕题目要求展开，覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，语言准确流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇规范的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.5
