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Ⅳ. 书面表达。
假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Tom来信询问你如何管理和使用压岁钱。请结合图表写一封回信,介绍你如何管理和使用压岁钱以及个人感悟。
要求:
1. 补全图表信息,可适当拓展;
2. 词数:100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter. You want to know how I manage my lucky money. Now let me share my plan with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Tom来信询问你如何管理和使用压岁钱。请结合图表写一封回信,介绍你如何管理和使用压岁钱以及个人感悟。
要求:
1. 补全图表信息,可适当拓展;
2. 词数:100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter. You want to know how I manage my lucky money. Now let me share my plan with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter. You want to know how I manage my lucky money. Now let me share my plan with you.
First, I try hard to save 60% of my lucky money to achieve my dream of buying a new laptop. When I take online lessons, it can help me improve my learning efficiency. Besides, I've decided to help people in need. That's why I will donate 20% of the money to them. I believe this small action can make a big difference to them. Finally, the other 20% is for my family and friends. I will use it to buy some gifts to show my deep love and bring warmth to them.
Managing lucky money well helps me know its true value. I also hope you can learn to manage your money wisely.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter. You want to know how I manage my lucky money. Now let me share my plan with you.
First, I try hard to save 60% of my lucky money to achieve my dream of buying a new laptop. When I take online lessons, it can help me improve my learning efficiency. Besides, I've decided to help people in need. That's why I will donate 20% of the money to them. I believe this small action can make a big difference to them. Finally, the other 20% is for my family and friends. I will use it to buy some gifts to show my deep love and bring warmth to them.
Managing lucky money well helps me know its true value. I also hope you can learn to manage your money wisely.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】这是一道英语书信写作题，需结合给定的压岁钱管理图表完成回信。解题思路：1. 明确图表的四个模块：储蓄（用于特定目标）、捐赠、消费（如礼物等）及其他；2. 确定各模块的合理比例与具体用途，结合示例拓展；3. 按照书信格式，在已给开头后，依次介绍压岁钱的分配情况，最后加入个人感悟，确保词数符合要求。
【解析】首先确定压岁钱的分配：60%储蓄用于购买笔记本电脑（助力线上学习），20%捐赠给有需要的人，20%用于给家人朋友买礼物；接着组织语言，按逻辑顺序说明各部分用途，最后表达对管理压岁钱的感悟，完成书信写作。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter. You want to know how I manage my lucky money. Now let me share my plan with you.
First, I try hard to save 60% of my lucky money to achieve my dream of buying a new laptop. When I take online lessons, it can help me improve my learning efficiency. Besides, I've decided to help people in need. That's why I will donate 20% of the money to them. I believe this small action can make a big difference to them. Finally, the other 20% is for my family and friends. I will use it to buy some gifts to show my deep love and bring warmth to them.
Managing lucky money well helps me know its true value. I also hope you can learn to manage your money wisely.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、图表信息转换、词汇运用
【点评】本题紧密结合生活实际，考查学生运用英语进行书面表达的能力，要求学生能清晰传递信息，同时融入积极的价值观，是一道贴近学生生活的写作题。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先确定压岁钱的分配：60%储蓄用于购买笔记本电脑（助力线上学习），20%捐赠给有需要的人，20%用于给家人朋友买礼物；接着组织语言，按逻辑顺序说明各部分用途，最后表达对管理压岁钱的感悟，完成书信写作。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter. You want to know how I manage my lucky money. Now let me share my plan with you.
First, I try hard to save 60% of my lucky money to achieve my dream of buying a new laptop. When I take online lessons, it can help me improve my learning efficiency. Besides, I've decided to help people in need. That's why I will donate 20% of the money to them. I believe this small action can make a big difference to them. Finally, the other 20% is for my family and friends. I will use it to buy some gifts to show my deep love and bring warmth to them.
Managing lucky money well helps me know its true value. I also hope you can learn to manage your money wisely.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、图表信息转换、词汇运用
【点评】本题紧密结合生活实际，考查学生运用英语进行书面表达的能力，要求学生能清晰传递信息，同时融入积极的价值观，是一道贴近学生生活的写作题。
【难度系数】0.6
