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正确看待成长过程中遇到的挫折与失败，是青少年认识自我和世界的必经之路。
请你根据以下要点，描述一次自己失败的经历并分享感悟。
【要点】(1) What happened to you? (2) What did you do to get through it? (3) What did you learn from it?
【审题要领】
| 主题 | 人称 | 时态 |
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
|
|
【写作框架】
列提纲
├─1. 开篇点题 → They say failure is...
├─2. 详述失败经历和解决方式 → (1) Last year, I...
(2) With my teacher’s encouragement...
└─3. 分享感悟和收获 → This experience taught me that...
【素材积累】
重点短语
1. 钦佩
2. 旨在做某事
3. 擅长做某事
重点句子
开头句：Success and failure are two sides of the same coin; both are essential parts of life’s journey. 成功和失败是一枚硬币的两面；两者都是人生旅程中必不可少的部分。
中间句：Despite facing countless failures and difficulties, he never gave up on his research. 尽管面对了无数失败与困难，他仍不放弃他的研究。
结尾句：Remember, success is sweet but failure is not bitter;it’s the mixture of both that makes life interesting and worth living. 记住，成功是甜蜜的，但失败并不痛苦；正是这两者的结合让生活变得有趣和有价值。
谚语积累：Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。
【美文欣赏】
They say failure is the mother of success, and I truly understood its meaning after an unforgettable experience in Grade 8.
Last year, I took part in the school English speech contest. Overconfident in my oral skills, I hardly practised. When I stepped onto the stage, I froze. My mind went blank, and I couldn’t remember what I've said at all. I left the stage with tears in my eyes, feeling deeply disappointed.
With my teacher’s encouragement, I decided to start over. I practised daily, recorded myself, and asked for feedback. When the next competition came, I walked onto the stage calmly and delivered my speech smoothly. I won second prize, and more importantly, I regained my confidence.
This experience taught me that failure is not the end, but a chance to grow. It taught me to be humble and hard-working. Every setback brings us closer to success if we learn from it.
正确看待成长过程中遇到的挫折与失败，是青少年认识自我和世界的必经之路。
请你根据以下要点，描述一次自己失败的经历并分享感悟。
【要点】(1) What happened to you? (2) What did you do to get through it? (3) What did you learn from it?
【审题要领】
| 主题 | 人称 | 时态 |
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
|
失败感悟
| | 第一人称；一般过去时和一般现在时
|【写作框架】
列提纲
├─1. 开篇点题 → They say failure is...
├─2. 详述失败经历和解决方式 → (1) Last year, I...
(2) With my teacher’s encouragement...└─3. 分享感悟和收获 → This experience taught me that...
【素材积累】
重点短语
1. 钦佩
look up to
2. 旨在做某事
aim to do sth
3. 擅长做某事
be skilled/good at doing sth
重点句子
开头句：Success and failure are two sides of the same coin; both are essential parts of life’s journey. 成功和失败是一枚硬币的两面；两者都是人生旅程中必不可少的部分。
中间句：Despite facing countless failures and difficulties, he never gave up on his research. 尽管面对了无数失败与困难，他仍不放弃他的研究。
结尾句：Remember, success is sweet but failure is not bitter;it’s the mixture of both that makes life interesting and worth living. 记住，成功是甜蜜的，但失败并不痛苦；正是这两者的结合让生活变得有趣和有价值。
谚语积累：Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。
【美文欣赏】
They say failure is the mother of success, and I truly understood its meaning after an unforgettable experience in Grade 8.
Last year, I took part in the school English speech contest. Overconfident in my oral skills, I hardly practised. When I stepped onto the stage, I froze. My mind went blank, and I couldn’t remember what I've said at all. I left the stage with tears in my eyes, feeling deeply disappointed.
With my teacher’s encouragement, I decided to start over. I practised daily, recorded myself, and asked for feedback. When the next competition came, I walked onto the stage calmly and delivered my speech smoothly. I won second prize, and more importantly, I regained my confidence.
This experience taught me that failure is not the end, but a chance to grow. It taught me to be humble and hard-working. Every setback brings us closer to success if we learn from it.
答案
【审题要领】
失败感悟;第一人称;一般过去时和一般现在时
【素材积累】
1.look up to 2.aim to do sth
3.be skilled/good at doing sth
失败感悟;第一人称;一般过去时和一般现在时
【素材积累】
1.look up to 2.aim to do sth
3.be skilled/good at doing sth
解析
【分析】首先审题确定核心：主题为失败感悟，人称用第一人称，时态结合一般过去时（叙述经历）和一般现在时（表达感悟）；接着按照给定的写作框架，先开篇点题引出失败与成功的关系，再依次详述失败经历、应对方法，最后分享感悟；同时需运用积累的重点短语，确保覆盖所有要点要求。
【解析】1. 审题：明确主题为“失败感悟”，人称采用第一人称，时态结合一般过去时（描述过去发生的经历）和一般现在时（表达当下的感悟）；2. 写作结构：开篇用给定的开头句点题，中间按要求写：发生的具体失败事件、应对措施、感悟收获；3. 素材运用：正确使用积累的重点短语，结合相关表达优化内容。
【答案】【审题要领】失败感悟;第一人称;一般过去时和一般现在时
【素材积累】1.look up to 2.aim to do sth 3.be skilled/good at doing sth
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、英语短语运用、英语时态运用
【点评】本题为结合自身经历的英语写作题，要点清晰、框架明确，能考查学生的叙事能力、感悟能力及英语语言运用能力，配套素材和提示降低了写作难度，适合学生巩固相关写作技能。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 审题：明确主题为“失败感悟”，人称采用第一人称，时态结合一般过去时（描述过去发生的经历）和一般现在时（表达当下的感悟）；2. 写作结构：开篇用给定的开头句点题，中间按要求写：发生的具体失败事件、应对措施、感悟收获；3. 素材运用：正确使用积累的重点短语，结合相关表达优化内容。
【答案】【审题要领】失败感悟;第一人称;一般过去时和一般现在时
【素材积累】1.look up to 2.aim to do sth 3.be skilled/good at doing sth
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、英语短语运用、英语时态运用
【点评】本题为结合自身经历的英语写作题，要点清晰、框架明确，能考查学生的叙事能力、感悟能力及英语语言运用能力，配套素材和提示降低了写作难度，适合学生巩固相关写作技能。
【难度系数】0.6
