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Ⅳ. 书面表达。
假设你是李华，学校即将举办以“Support(支持) and love from my family”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请选择一位或两位家人，结合自身经历，根据以下思维导图提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。
要求：
1. 须包含以上思维导图中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。
3. 词数80左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
Support and love from my family
Hello, I'm Li Hua. Today I'll talk about
假设你是李华，学校即将举办以“Support(支持) and love from my family”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请选择一位或两位家人，结合自身经历，根据以下思维导图提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。
要求：
1. 须包含以上思维导图中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。
3. 词数80左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
Support and love from my family
Hello, I'm Li Hua. Today I'll talk about
答案
Possible version 1:
Hello, I'm Li Hua. Today I'll talk about my mum. My mum is kind and caring, and we are close to each other. Every morning, she makes delicious breakfasts for me. When I feel tired after school, she always prepares hot milk. When I have small problems with my schoolwork, she stays with me and helps me. Her love makes me feel warm every day. I want to hug her and say, "Thanks for your love, Mum. I love you!"
Possible version 2:
Hello, I'm Li Hua. Today I'll talk about my grandpa. He is kind and helpful. When I don't get on well with my classmates and feel sad, he sits with me and listens to my worries carefully. Then, he finds a way to help me. He tells me how to talk to my friend. He also teaches me to understand others. His care helps us become good friends again. I want to hug him and say, "Thanks for your help. I love you, Grandpa!"
Hello, I'm Li Hua. Today I'll talk about my mum. My mum is kind and caring, and we are close to each other. Every morning, she makes delicious breakfasts for me. When I feel tired after school, she always prepares hot milk. When I have small problems with my schoolwork, she stays with me and helps me. Her love makes me feel warm every day. I want to hug her and say, "Thanks for your love, Mum. I love you!"
Possible version 2:
Hello, I'm Li Hua. Today I'll talk about my grandpa. He is kind and helpful. When I don't get on well with my classmates and feel sad, he sits with me and listens to my worries carefully. Then, he finds a way to help me. He tells me how to talk to my friend. He also teaches me to understand others. His care helps us become good friends again. I want to hug him and say, "Thanks for your help. I love you, Grandpa!"
解析
【分析】这是一道英语书面表达题，要求以“Support and love from my family”为主题写演讲稿，需结合思维导图的三个核心要点：介绍家人、描述家人的支持与关爱、表达自身感受与感谢。解题思路为：首先确定写作对象（如妈妈、爷爷等）；其次按思维导图顺序展开内容，先介绍家人的基本情况，再通过具体事例体现家人的支持与关爱，最后抒发对家人的感激之情；同时需注意词数要求（80左右），语句通顺，符合演讲的语气。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 衔接给定开头，明确写作对象；2. 介绍家人：说明家人的性格特点及与自己的亲密关系；3. 列举具体事例：如家人为自己做早餐、解决学业问题等，体现家人的支持与关爱；4. 表达感受与感谢：抒发对家人的感激，符合演讲的情感表达要求，确保覆盖所有要点，语句连贯。
【答案】Hello, I'm Li Hua. Today I'll talk about my mum. My mum is kind and caring, and we are close to each other. Every morning, she makes delicious breakfasts for me. When I feel tired after school, she always prepares hot milk. When I have small problems with my schoolwork, she stays with me and helps me. Her love makes me feel warm every day. I want to hug her and say, "Thanks for your love, Mum. I love you!"
【知识点】英语书面表达；英语演讲稿写作；要点式写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖思维导图的所有要点，通过具体事例展现家人的支持与关爱，情感真挚自然，语句通顺流畅，符合演讲的语境，词数符合要求，是一篇符合标准的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 衔接给定开头，明确写作对象；2. 介绍家人：说明家人的性格特点及与自己的亲密关系；3. 列举具体事例：如家人为自己做早餐、解决学业问题等，体现家人的支持与关爱；4. 表达感受与感谢：抒发对家人的感激，符合演讲的情感表达要求，确保覆盖所有要点，语句连贯。
【答案】Hello, I'm Li Hua. Today I'll talk about my mum. My mum is kind and caring, and we are close to each other. Every morning, she makes delicious breakfasts for me. When I feel tired after school, she always prepares hot milk. When I have small problems with my schoolwork, she stays with me and helps me. Her love makes me feel warm every day. I want to hug her and say, "Thanks for your love, Mum. I love you!"
【知识点】英语书面表达；英语演讲稿写作；要点式写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖思维导图的所有要点，通过具体事例展现家人的支持与关爱，情感真挚自然，语句通顺流畅，符合演讲的语境，词数符合要求，是一篇符合标准的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.6
