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十、（2024·常州市武进区期中改编）书面表达。（13分）
“身体和心灵总要有一个在路上。”你们学校正在组织一次主题为“Body and soul(心灵) on the way”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，谈谈自己曾经去过的地方，读过的好书以及你的收获。
注意:1. 短文应包括表格中所有的信息,并作适当发挥;
2. 90词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 短文不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Body and soul on the way
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and soul must be on the way.
“身体和心灵总要有一个在路上。”你们学校正在组织一次主题为“Body and soul(心灵) on the way”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，谈谈自己曾经去过的地方，读过的好书以及你的收获。
注意:1. 短文应包括表格中所有的信息,并作适当发挥;
2. 90词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 短文不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Body and soul on the way
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and soul must be on the way.
答案
One possible version:
Body and soul on the way
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and soul must be on the way.
Last summer I visited the Palace Museum. I was amazed by the wonderful palaces and those famous works of art. I learnt much about China's history. Travelling is really a fantastic experience. Reading is also great fun. When I read my favourite books, I feel relaxed. I am interested in geography books because I can learn more about nature. Last week I read a magazine Chinese National Geography. I learnt a lot about places of interest from it.
I think both travelling and reading help us gain more knowledge. Moreover, they can open up a whole new world to us.
Body and soul on the way
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and soul must be on the way.
Last summer I visited the Palace Museum. I was amazed by the wonderful palaces and those famous works of art. I learnt much about China's history. Travelling is really a fantastic experience. Reading is also great fun. When I read my favourite books, I feel relaxed. I am interested in geography books because I can learn more about nature. Last week I read a magazine Chinese National Geography. I learnt a lot about places of interest from it.
I think both travelling and reading help us gain more knowledge. Moreover, they can open up a whole new world to us.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书面表达题，要求完成主题为“Body and soul on the way”的演讲稿。解题思路：1. 明确写作结构，开头已给出，需补充主体和结尾；2. 主体部分要涵盖三个要点：①描述自己去过的有趣地方，说明旅行的收获；②描述自己读过的好书，说明读书的收获；③最后总结旅行和读书带来的共同益处，紧扣主题，注意用词准确，控制字数在90词左右，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头，写自己的旅行经历：去年夏天参观故宫，被宫殿和艺术品震撼，学到中国历史，体会旅行的乐趣；接着写读书经历：喜欢地理类书籍，读了《中国国家地理》杂志，了解更多名胜；最后总结：旅行和读书能增长知识，开阔视野，符合主题要求，语言简洁流畅，符合字数要求。
【答案】
Body and soul on the way
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and soul must be on the way.
Last summer I visited the Palace Museum. I was amazed by the wonderful palaces and those famous works of art. I learnt much about China's history. Travelling is really a fantastic experience. Reading is also great fun. When I read my favourite books, I feel relaxed. I am interested in geography books because I can learn more about nature. Last week I read a magazine Chinese National Geography. I learnt a lot about places of interest from it.
I think both travelling and reading help us gain more knowledge. Moreover, they can open up a whole new world to us.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有内容，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁流畅，符合字数要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语书面表达题，要求完成主题为“Body and soul on the way”的演讲稿。解题思路：1. 明确写作结构，开头已给出，需补充主体和结尾；2. 主体部分要涵盖三个要点：①描述自己去过的有趣地方，说明旅行的收获；②描述自己读过的好书，说明读书的收获；③最后总结旅行和读书带来的共同益处，紧扣主题，注意用词准确，控制字数在90词左右，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头，写自己的旅行经历：去年夏天参观故宫，被宫殿和艺术品震撼，学到中国历史，体会旅行的乐趣；接着写读书经历：喜欢地理类书籍，读了《中国国家地理》杂志，了解更多名胜；最后总结：旅行和读书能增长知识，开阔视野，符合主题要求，语言简洁流畅，符合字数要求。
【答案】
Body and soul on the way
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and soul must be on the way.
Last summer I visited the Palace Museum. I was amazed by the wonderful palaces and those famous works of art. I learnt much about China's history. Travelling is really a fantastic experience. Reading is also great fun. When I read my favourite books, I feel relaxed. I am interested in geography books because I can learn more about nature. Last week I read a magazine Chinese National Geography. I learnt a lot about places of interest from it.
I think both travelling and reading help us gain more knowledge. Moreover, they can open up a whole new world to us.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有内容，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁流畅，符合字数要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
