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暑假快到了，实验小学六(1)班的老师和同学们正在谈论自己的暑假计划。来自英国的 Jack 将乘飞机回到伦敦，他将在那儿待一个月。Lucy 和 Lily 将要去北京看望她们的爷爷奶奶，她们还将参观天安门广场和颐和园。Mrs Black 将带她的儿子 John 去香港的迪士尼乐园和海洋公园。他们的计划很精彩吧！请根据以上提示，介绍他们的计划吧！
暑假快到了，实验小学六(1)班的老师和同学们正在谈论自己的暑假计划。来自英国的 Jack 将乘飞机回到伦敦，他将在那儿待一个月。Lucy 和 Lily 将要去北京看望她们的爷爷奶奶，她们还将参观天安门广场和颐和园。Mrs Black 将带她的儿子 John 去香港的迪士尼乐园和海洋公园。他们的计划很精彩吧！请根据以上提示，介绍他们的计划吧！
素养主题写作
One possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. The teacher and students are talking about their plans for the summer holiday.
Jack will go back to London by plane. He will stay there for a month. Lucy and Lily will go to Beijing and visit their grandparents. They will also visit Tian'anmen Square and the Summer Palace. Mrs Black will take her son John to Disneyland and Ocean Park in Hong Kong.
They will have a wonderful holiday.
答案
素养主题写作
One possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. The teacher and students are talking about their plans for the summer holiday.
Jack will go back to London by plane. He will stay there for a month. Lucy and Lily will go to Beijing and visit their grandparents. They will also visit Tian'anmen Square and the Summer Palace. Mrs Black will take her son John to Disneyland and Ocean Park in Hong Kong.
They will have a wonderful holiday.
One possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. The teacher and students are talking about their plans for the summer holiday.
Jack will go back to London by plane. He will stay there for a month. Lucy and Lily will go to Beijing and visit their grandparents. They will also visit Tian'anmen Square and the Summer Palace. Mrs Black will take her son John to Disneyland and Ocean Park in Hong Kong.
They will have a wonderful holiday.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道写作题，第一步先明确写作主题是介绍师生们的暑假计划，梳理清晰写作逻辑：1. 开篇先交代背景，点明暑假即将到来，大家正在讨论暑假计划，引出下文内容；2. 按照题干给出的人物顺序，依次把每个人的计划要点全部转化为通顺的英文表达，注意不要遗漏任何给定信息；3. 最后收尾总结，点明大家的假期都会很精彩，让文章结构完整。全程要注意描述未来的计划需要用一般将来时，保证时态统一，专有名词的拼写要符合英文书写规范。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：先点明核心背景，写出"The summer holiday is coming. The teacher and students are talking about their plans for the summer holiday."，开门见山引出主题。
2. 分人物介绍计划：
① 先写Jack的安排：对应题干“乘飞机回到伦敦，在那儿待一个月”，组织句子为"Jack will go back to London by plane. He will stay there for a month."
② 再写Lucy和Lily的安排：对应题干“去北京看望爷爷奶奶，参观天安门广场和颐和园”，组织句子为"Lucy and Lily will go to Beijing and visit their grandparents. They will also visit Tian'anmen Square and the Summer Palace."
③ 接着写Mrs Black和John的安排：对应题干“带儿子John去香港的迪士尼乐园和海洋公园”，组织句子为"Mrs Black will take her son John to Disneyland and Ocean Park in Hong Kong."
3. 收尾总结：用"They will have a wonderful holiday."收尾，呼应题干提到的“计划很精彩”，让文章结构完整。
全文统一使用一般将来时描述未来计划，所有题干给出的信息点全部覆盖，语句通顺符合表达规范。
【答案】
One possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. The teacher and students are talking about their plans for the summer holiday.
Jack will go back to London by plane. He will stay there for a month. Lucy and Lily will go to Beijing and visit their grandparents. They will also visit Tian'anmen Square and the Summer Palace. Mrs Black will take her son John to Disneyland and Ocean Park in Hong Kong.
They will have a wonderful holiday.
【知识点】
一般将来时用法
专有名词拼写
假期计划类写作
【点评】
本题是小学英语基础话题写作题，不需要学生进行复杂的创意拓展，只需要完整提取题干给出的所有计划信息，用通顺的英文语句串联即可完成写作，核心考察学生对一般将来时的掌握程度，以及信息整合输出的能力，只要不遗漏要点、时态统一、专有名词拼写正确就可以拿到满分。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道写作题，第一步先明确写作主题是介绍师生们的暑假计划，梳理清晰写作逻辑：1. 开篇先交代背景，点明暑假即将到来，大家正在讨论暑假计划，引出下文内容；2. 按照题干给出的人物顺序，依次把每个人的计划要点全部转化为通顺的英文表达，注意不要遗漏任何给定信息；3. 最后收尾总结，点明大家的假期都会很精彩，让文章结构完整。全程要注意描述未来的计划需要用一般将来时，保证时态统一，专有名词的拼写要符合英文书写规范。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：先点明核心背景，写出"The summer holiday is coming. The teacher and students are talking about their plans for the summer holiday."，开门见山引出主题。
2. 分人物介绍计划：
① 先写Jack的安排：对应题干“乘飞机回到伦敦，在那儿待一个月”，组织句子为"Jack will go back to London by plane. He will stay there for a month."
② 再写Lucy和Lily的安排：对应题干“去北京看望爷爷奶奶，参观天安门广场和颐和园”，组织句子为"Lucy and Lily will go to Beijing and visit their grandparents. They will also visit Tian'anmen Square and the Summer Palace."
③ 接着写Mrs Black和John的安排：对应题干“带儿子John去香港的迪士尼乐园和海洋公园”，组织句子为"Mrs Black will take her son John to Disneyland and Ocean Park in Hong Kong."
3. 收尾总结：用"They will have a wonderful holiday."收尾，呼应题干提到的“计划很精彩”，让文章结构完整。
全文统一使用一般将来时描述未来计划，所有题干给出的信息点全部覆盖，语句通顺符合表达规范。
【答案】
One possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. The teacher and students are talking about their plans for the summer holiday.
Jack will go back to London by plane. He will stay there for a month. Lucy and Lily will go to Beijing and visit their grandparents. They will also visit Tian'anmen Square and the Summer Palace. Mrs Black will take her son John to Disneyland and Ocean Park in Hong Kong.
They will have a wonderful holiday.
【知识点】
一般将来时用法
专有名词拼写
假期计划类写作
【点评】
本题是小学英语基础话题写作题，不需要学生进行复杂的创意拓展，只需要完整提取题干给出的所有计划信息，用通顺的英文语句串联即可完成写作，核心考察学生对一般将来时的掌握程度，以及信息整合输出的能力，只要不遗漏要点、时态统一、专有名词拼写正确就可以拿到满分。
【难度系数】
0.7
