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六、书面表达。
本周校报的主题是 Asian Countries。请根据下面的提示，写一篇短文介绍一下韩国。
【要求】1. 内容充实，覆盖要点。
2. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The Republic of Korea lies in the south of the Korean Peninsula，next to North Korea.
本周校报的主题是 Asian Countries。请根据下面的提示，写一篇短文介绍一下韩国。
【要求】1. 内容充实，覆盖要点。
2. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The Republic of Korea lies in the south of the Korean Peninsula，next to North Korea.
答案
One possible version
The Republic of Korea lies in the south of the Korean Peninsula, next to North Korea. Its capital city is Seoul.
There are over 50 million people living in the Republic of Korea. People in the Republic of Korea speak mainly Korean, but many of them can also understand English. In the Republic of Korea, the most popular foods are sushi and pickles.
The Republic of Korea is famous for its electronic products like TVs and computers. There are lots of famous attractions in the Republic of Korea such as Olympic Park, Gyeongbokgung Palace and Lotte World. Lotte World is one of the most famous theme parks in the world. It is an exciting theme park.
I think the Republic of Korea is well worth a visit. You will have fun there.
The Republic of Korea lies in the south of the Korean Peninsula, next to North Korea. Its capital city is Seoul.
There are over 50 million people living in the Republic of Korea. People in the Republic of Korea speak mainly Korean, but many of them can also understand English. In the Republic of Korea, the most popular foods are sushi and pickles.
The Republic of Korea is famous for its electronic products like TVs and computers. There are lots of famous attractions in the Republic of Korea such as Olympic Park, Gyeongbokgung Palace and Lotte World. Lotte World is one of the most famous theme parks in the world. It is an exciting theme park.
I think the Republic of Korea is well worth a visit. You will have fun there.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇要点提示类的国家介绍书面表达，解题时首先要理清写作逻辑：先承接题目已经给出的地理位置相关开头，按照从基础国情到人文特色、产业、旅游的顺序，把表格里的所有信息点全部覆盖：首先点明首都，之后介绍人口数量、当地使用的语言，接着介绍特色美食，再说明该国的主要支柱产业，之后列举当地知名景点，最后补充简短的收尾推荐让文章结构完整。写作时注意语句衔接自然，控制总词数在100左右，符合校报友好正式的表达风格即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接给定开头，第一句直接点明韩国的首都是首尔，对应表格Capital City的信息。
2. 接下来依次介绍人口总量超过5000万，当地民众主要使用韩语，很多人也通晓英语，覆盖Population和Languages两个要点。
3. 之后介绍当地的特色美食寿司和泡菜，对应Foods项的信息。
4. 再说明韩国以电视、电脑这类电子产品闻名，覆盖Main industries的要点。
5. 随后列举当地的知名景点奥林匹克公园、景福宫、乐天世界，可适当补充乐天世界的小特点让内容更生动，覆盖Attractions的全部信息。
6. 最后收尾表达韩国值得游览的推荐，让文章逻辑连贯，符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version
The Republic of Korea lies in the south of the Korean Peninsula, next to North Korea. Its capital city is Seoul.
There are over 50 million people living in the Republic of Korea. People in the Republic of Korea speak mainly Korean, but many of them can also understand English. In the Republic of Korea, the most popular foods are sushi and pickles.
The Republic of Korea is famous for its electronic products like TVs and computers. There are lots of famous attractions in the Republic of Korea such as Olympic Park, Gyeongbokgung Palace and Lotte World. Lotte World is one of the most famous theme parks in the world. It is an exciting theme park.
I think the Republic of Korea is well worth a visit. You will have fun there.
【知识点】
国家介绍类写作
英语写作语句衔接
专有名词规范书写
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干表格给出的全部信息点，行文逻辑清晰，从基础国情到人文特色、支柱产业、旅游景点逐层展开，衔接自然流畅，补充的少量细节让内容更生动饱满，总词数符合要求，没有语法错误，完全契合校报Asian Countries主题的写作场景，是非常规范的介绍类短文范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇要点提示类的国家介绍书面表达，解题时首先要理清写作逻辑：先承接题目已经给出的地理位置相关开头，按照从基础国情到人文特色、产业、旅游的顺序，把表格里的所有信息点全部覆盖：首先点明首都，之后介绍人口数量、当地使用的语言，接着介绍特色美食，再说明该国的主要支柱产业，之后列举当地知名景点，最后补充简短的收尾推荐让文章结构完整。写作时注意语句衔接自然，控制总词数在100左右，符合校报友好正式的表达风格即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接给定开头，第一句直接点明韩国的首都是首尔，对应表格Capital City的信息。
2. 接下来依次介绍人口总量超过5000万，当地民众主要使用韩语，很多人也通晓英语，覆盖Population和Languages两个要点。
3. 之后介绍当地的特色美食寿司和泡菜，对应Foods项的信息。
4. 再说明韩国以电视、电脑这类电子产品闻名，覆盖Main industries的要点。
5. 随后列举当地的知名景点奥林匹克公园、景福宫、乐天世界，可适当补充乐天世界的小特点让内容更生动，覆盖Attractions的全部信息。
6. 最后收尾表达韩国值得游览的推荐，让文章逻辑连贯，符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version
The Republic of Korea lies in the south of the Korean Peninsula, next to North Korea. Its capital city is Seoul.
There are over 50 million people living in the Republic of Korea. People in the Republic of Korea speak mainly Korean, but many of them can also understand English. In the Republic of Korea, the most popular foods are sushi and pickles.
The Republic of Korea is famous for its electronic products like TVs and computers. There are lots of famous attractions in the Republic of Korea such as Olympic Park, Gyeongbokgung Palace and Lotte World. Lotte World is one of the most famous theme parks in the world. It is an exciting theme park.
I think the Republic of Korea is well worth a visit. You will have fun there.
【知识点】
国家介绍类写作
英语写作语句衔接
专有名词规范书写
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干表格给出的全部信息点，行文逻辑清晰，从基础国情到人文特色、支柱产业、旅游景点逐层展开，衔接自然流畅，补充的少量细节让内容更生动饱满，总词数符合要求，没有语法错误，完全契合校报Asian Countries主题的写作场景，是非常规范的介绍类短文范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
