经典例题
假如你是林华,你的一位英国笔友Tom来信询问你学校的情况。请你根据下面的表格内容,给他回信,向他介绍你的近况。

【要求】1. 短文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
2. 短文须包括所有内容要点,语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。
3. 词数80左右,短文开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. I'm very glad to tell you more about my school.
Best wishes,
Lin Hua
假如你是林华,你的一位英国笔友Tom来信询问你学校的情况。请你根据下面的表格内容,给他回信,向他介绍你的近况。
【要求】1. 短文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
2. 短文须包括所有内容要点,语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。
3. 词数80左右,短文开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. I'm very glad to tell you more about my school.
Best wishes,
Lin Hua
答案
Our school is big and nice. We have a bright library with lots of books, and I often go there to read or borrow books. There is also a large playground, we always play sports happily there after class. We learn many subjects at school, like Chinese, Maths and English. English is my favourite subject. We have different after-school activities too, and I am in the Reading Club now. I have a good time at school every day. I really love my school life a lot.
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务是给英国笔友Tom回信介绍学校情况,需覆盖表格所有要点:学校场所(图书馆、操场)、学校生活(科目、课后活动)、个人感受。写作时要注意:不得出现真实姓名和学校名称,语言通顺连贯,词数80左右,开头结尾已给出,只需补充中间内容。思路为:先介绍学校整体及场所,再讲科目与课后活动,最后表达对学校生活的喜爱。
【解析】
根据要求整合表格要点:①学校场所:图书馆(藏书多,常去阅读/借书)、操场(课后做运动);②学校生活:科目(如语文、数学、英语,英语是最爱)、课后活动(加入阅读俱乐部);③感受:每天过得开心,热爱学校生活。按书信逻辑组织语言,确保符合词数和格式要求。
【答案】
Our school is big and nice. We have a bright library with lots of books, and I often go there to read or borrow books. There is also a large playground, we always play sports happily there after class. We learn many subjects at school, like Chinese, Maths and English. English is my favourite subject. We have different after-school activities too, and I am in the Reading Club now. I have a good time at school every day. I really love my school life a lot.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、要点整合、词汇运用
【点评】
本题为初中英语基础应用文写作题,考查学生整合给定信息、组织连贯语言完成书信的能力,贴近学生日常学习生活,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
本次写作任务是给英国笔友Tom回信介绍学校情况,需覆盖表格所有要点:学校场所(图书馆、操场)、学校生活(科目、课后活动)、个人感受。写作时要注意:不得出现真实姓名和学校名称,语言通顺连贯,词数80左右,开头结尾已给出,只需补充中间内容。思路为:先介绍学校整体及场所,再讲科目与课后活动,最后表达对学校生活的喜爱。
【解析】
根据要求整合表格要点:①学校场所:图书馆(藏书多,常去阅读/借书)、操场(课后做运动);②学校生活:科目(如语文、数学、英语,英语是最爱)、课后活动(加入阅读俱乐部);③感受:每天过得开心,热爱学校生活。按书信逻辑组织语言,确保符合词数和格式要求。
【答案】
Our school is big and nice. We have a bright library with lots of books, and I often go there to read or borrow books. There is also a large playground, we always play sports happily there after class. We learn many subjects at school, like Chinese, Maths and English. English is my favourite subject. We have different after-school activities too, and I am in the Reading Club now. I have a good time at school every day. I really love my school life a lot.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、要点整合、词汇运用
【点评】
本题为初中英语基础应用文写作题,考查学生整合给定信息、组织连贯语言完成书信的能力,贴近学生日常学习生活,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
1.本文是一封信件。 2.时态为“一般现在时”。 3.根据表格中的提示介绍自己的学校生活,适当进行发挥。
写作模板

开篇点题 → I study at Nanjing Star Middle School now...
详细介绍 → We have three classroom buildings...
There is a playground in front of the classroom buildings...
收篇结尾 → We always have a good time at school...
写作模板
开篇点题 → I study at Nanjing Star Middle School now...
详细介绍 → We have three classroom buildings...
There is a playground in front of the classroom buildings...
收篇结尾 → We always have a good time at school...
答案
Dear David,
How is everything going?
I study at Nanjing Star Middle School now. It is a very beautiful school, and I enjoy my school days here a lot.
We have three classroom buildings. My classroom is on the second floor. It is clean and bright, and all my classmates get on well with each other. There is a playground in front of the classroom buildings. We have our PE lessons there, and we often play badminton and run after class. Our school also has a nice hall, we have different meetings and shows in the hall every month. We have 6 lessons every day, and my favourite subject is Geography, because it is very interesting.
We always have a good time at school. Do you want to visit my school some day?
Yours,
Zhang Hua
How is everything going?
I study at Nanjing Star Middle School now. It is a very beautiful school, and I enjoy my school days here a lot.
We have three classroom buildings. My classroom is on the second floor. It is clean and bright, and all my classmates get on well with each other. There is a playground in front of the classroom buildings. We have our PE lessons there, and we often play badminton and run after class. Our school also has a nice hall, we have different meetings and shows in the hall every month. We have 6 lessons every day, and my favourite subject is Geography, because it is very interesting.
We always have a good time at school. Do you want to visit my school some day?
Yours,
Zhang Hua
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书信写作任务,要求围绕“介绍学校生活”展开,需使用一般现在时,遵循给定的结构(开篇点题、详细介绍、收篇结尾)。解题思路:① 先确定书信格式,包含称呼、问候语、正文、结尾署名;② 开篇点题部分,需点明自己所在学校,表达对学校的喜爱,呼应给定开头句;③ 详细介绍部分,围绕教学楼、操场补充合理细节,可添加学校其他设施、日常课程等内容,确保用一般现在时;④ 收篇结尾部分,总结校园生活的愉快,可适当发出邀请,丰富内容。
【解析】
1. 遵循书信格式:开头用称呼Dear David,搭配问候语How is everything going?,结尾用署名Yours, Zhang Hua;
2. 开篇点题:承接给定句“I study at Nanjing Star Middle School now...”,补充“It is a very beautiful school, and I enjoy my school days here a lot.”,点明对学校的喜爱;
3. 详细介绍:围绕教学楼补充教室位置、环境及同学相处情况,围绕操场补充用途,还可添加学校礼堂、日常课程、喜爱的科目等细节,丰富内容;
4. 收篇结尾:承接给定句“We always have a good time at school...”,补充邀请语,使文章完整。
【答案】
Dear David,
How is everything going?
I study at Nanjing Star Middle School now. It is a very beautiful school, and I enjoy my school days here a lot.
We have three classroom buildings. My classroom is on the second floor. It is clean and bright, and all my classmates get on well with each other. There is a playground in front of the classroom buildings. We have our PE lessons there, and we often play badminton and run after class. Our school also has a nice hall, we have different meetings and shows in the hall every month. We have 6 lessons every day, and my favourite subject is Geography, because it is very interesting.
We always have a good time at school. Do you want to visit my school some day?
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般现在时、话题拓展
【点评】
本题考查基础英语应用文写作,要求学生掌握书信格式,运用一般现在时围绕学校话题写作,需适当补充细节使内容充实,是初中阶段常见的写作练习题型。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题是英语书信写作任务,要求围绕“介绍学校生活”展开,需使用一般现在时,遵循给定的结构(开篇点题、详细介绍、收篇结尾)。解题思路:① 先确定书信格式,包含称呼、问候语、正文、结尾署名;② 开篇点题部分,需点明自己所在学校,表达对学校的喜爱,呼应给定开头句;③ 详细介绍部分,围绕教学楼、操场补充合理细节,可添加学校其他设施、日常课程等内容,确保用一般现在时;④ 收篇结尾部分,总结校园生活的愉快,可适当发出邀请,丰富内容。
【解析】
1. 遵循书信格式:开头用称呼Dear David,搭配问候语How is everything going?,结尾用署名Yours, Zhang Hua;
2. 开篇点题:承接给定句“I study at Nanjing Star Middle School now...”,补充“It is a very beautiful school, and I enjoy my school days here a lot.”,点明对学校的喜爱;
3. 详细介绍:围绕教学楼补充教室位置、环境及同学相处情况,围绕操场补充用途,还可添加学校礼堂、日常课程、喜爱的科目等细节,丰富内容;
4. 收篇结尾:承接给定句“We always have a good time at school...”,补充邀请语,使文章完整。
【答案】
Dear David,
How is everything going?
I study at Nanjing Star Middle School now. It is a very beautiful school, and I enjoy my school days here a lot.
We have three classroom buildings. My classroom is on the second floor. It is clean and bright, and all my classmates get on well with each other. There is a playground in front of the classroom buildings. We have our PE lessons there, and we often play badminton and run after class. Our school also has a nice hall, we have different meetings and shows in the hall every month. We have 6 lessons every day, and my favourite subject is Geography, because it is very interesting.
We always have a good time at school. Do you want to visit my school some day?
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般现在时、话题拓展
【点评】
本题考查基础英语应用文写作,要求学生掌握书信格式,运用一般现在时围绕学校话题写作,需适当补充细节使内容充实,是初中阶段常见的写作练习题型。
【难度系数】
0.3
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