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五、书面表达。
假如你是李华，下周日是你父亲的生日，你亲自动手给你的父亲做了一个礼物。请你将制作礼物的过程写成一篇英语短文。
注意:1. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Next Sunday is my father's birthday.
假如你是李华，下周日是你父亲的生日，你亲自动手给你的父亲做了一个礼物。请你将制作礼物的过程写成一篇英语短文。
注意:1. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Next Sunday is my father's birthday.
I made a bookshelf for my father because he likes reading and has many books.
My good friend Andrew came to help me and brought some tools. We read the instructions first, and then we began to work. Andrew is not only good at DIY, but also helpful. It took us about two hours to finish it. I kept making mistakes when I used the tools, because I was too excited. We had a good time working together.
This is the first present I made for my father. I hope he will like the present and have a happy birthday.
答案
One possible version:
Next Sunday is my father's birthday. I made a bookshelf for my father because he likes reading and has many books.
My good friend Andrew came to help me and brought some tools. We read the instructions first, and then we began to work. Andrew is not only good at DIY, but also helpful. It took us about two hours to finish it. I kept making mistakes when I used the tools, because I was too excited. We had a good time working together.
This is the first present I made for my father. I hope he will like the present and have a happy birthday.
Next Sunday is my father's birthday. I made a bookshelf for my father because he likes reading and has many books.
My good friend Andrew came to help me and brought some tools. We read the instructions first, and then we began to work. Andrew is not only good at DIY, but also helpful. It took us about two hours to finish it. I kept making mistakes when I used the tools, because I was too excited. We had a good time working together.
This is the first present I made for my father. I hope he will like the present and have a happy birthday.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以李华的身份，结合给定的制作DIY书架的相关信息续写短文。解题时需先明确写作核心主题（为父亲生日制作DIY书架），再梳理给定的关键信息：制作原因（父亲热爱阅读、藏书丰富）、制作过程（好友Andrew携带工具协助、先研读说明书后制作、两人合作两小时完成、因兴奋操作工具犯小错但过程愉快）、情感（首次为父亲制作礼物，希望父亲喜欢）；写作时需注意词数要求，语句衔接自然，不得出现真实人名、校名、地名，符合英语表达逻辑。
【解析】
首先承接开头，点明制作书架的原因；接着介绍好友Andrew的帮助及制作步骤；然后说明两人合作的情况，补充操作时的小插曲；最后表达作为首次为父亲做礼物的心意，希望父亲喜欢。整体需将给定要点连贯串联，符合英语表达习惯，满足词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Next Sunday is my father's birthday. I made a bookshelf for my father because he likes reading and has many books.
My good friend Andrew came to help me and brought some tools. We read the instructions first, and then we began to work. Andrew is not only good at DIY, but also helpful. It took us about two hours to finish it. I kept making mistakes when I used the tools, because I was too excited. We had a good time working together.
This is the first present I made for my father. I hope he will like the present and have a happy birthday.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点整合写作
【点评】
本题结合生活实际，考查学生整合信息、连贯写作的能力，贴近学生生活，易于发挥，能体现真情实感，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以李华的身份，结合给定的制作DIY书架的相关信息续写短文。解题时需先明确写作核心主题（为父亲生日制作DIY书架），再梳理给定的关键信息：制作原因（父亲热爱阅读、藏书丰富）、制作过程（好友Andrew携带工具协助、先研读说明书后制作、两人合作两小时完成、因兴奋操作工具犯小错但过程愉快）、情感（首次为父亲制作礼物，希望父亲喜欢）；写作时需注意词数要求，语句衔接自然，不得出现真实人名、校名、地名，符合英语表达逻辑。
【解析】
首先承接开头，点明制作书架的原因；接着介绍好友Andrew的帮助及制作步骤；然后说明两人合作的情况，补充操作时的小插曲；最后表达作为首次为父亲做礼物的心意，希望父亲喜欢。整体需将给定要点连贯串联，符合英语表达习惯，满足词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Next Sunday is my father's birthday. I made a bookshelf for my father because he likes reading and has many books.
My good friend Andrew came to help me and brought some tools. We read the instructions first, and then we began to work. Andrew is not only good at DIY, but also helpful. It took us about two hours to finish it. I kept making mistakes when I used the tools, because I was too excited. We had a good time working together.
This is the first present I made for my father. I hope he will like the present and have a happy birthday.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点整合写作
【点评】
本题结合生活实际，考查学生整合信息、连贯写作的能力，贴近学生生活，易于发挥，能体现真情实感，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
