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五、书面表达
每逢新年，每位同学都会收到来自长辈的红包。七年级（2）班的同学在班会课上，就如何合理利用零花钱展开讨论。有的同学想给自己买书，有的同学想为山区贫困儿童买衣物，你准备怎样做呢？请用英语写一篇短文，阐述讨论结果和你的看法。
注意事项：
1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数不少于70，短文的首句和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
When the Spring Festival comes, every student can get lots of red packets.
I think we should learn to spend and save money wisely.
每逢新年，每位同学都会收到来自长辈的红包。七年级（2）班的同学在班会课上，就如何合理利用零花钱展开讨论。有的同学想给自己买书，有的同学想为山区贫困儿童买衣物，你准备怎样做呢？请用英语写一篇短文，阐述讨论结果和你的看法。
注意事项：
1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数不少于70，短文的首句和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
When the Spring Festival comes, every student can get lots of red packets.
Some students want to buy some books with their pocket money because they can learn a lot from books.
Others want to buy clothes or food for the children in poor areas because the children there don’t have enough money to buy them.
As for me, I want to buy some presents for my parents and grandparents because I want to give my thanks to them in this way.
I think we should learn to spend and save money wisely.
答案
One possible version:
When the Spring Festival comes, every student can get lots of red packets. Some students want to buy some books with their pocket money because they can learn a lot from books. Others want to buy clothes or food for the children in poor areas because the children there don’t have enough money to buy them. As for me, I want to buy some presents for my parents and grandparents because I want to give my thanks to them in this way.
I think we should learn to spend and save money wisely.
(70 words)
When the Spring Festival comes, every student can get lots of red packets. Some students want to buy some books with their pocket money because they can learn a lot from books. Others want to buy clothes or food for the children in poor areas because the children there don’t have enough money to buy them. As for me, I want to buy some presents for my parents and grandparents because I want to give my thanks to them in this way.
I think we should learn to spend and save money wisely.
(70 words)
解析
【分析】
本题为七年级英语话题书面表达题，要求围绕“合理利用零花钱”展开，需结合班会讨论的两种情况（同学买书、给贫困儿童买衣物）及个人看法，衔接给定的首尾句。解题思路：先承接首句引出班会讨论的话题，分别说明同学两种做法的原因，再阐述自己的做法及理由，最后自然衔接给定结尾，确保语句通顺、要点齐全、词数达标。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接首句引出班会讨论的内容；2. 分别说明同学的两种想法及原因：部分同学用零花钱买书（可从书中学到知识），另一些同学想给贫困地区孩子买衣物或食物（那里的孩子没钱购买）；3. 阐述自己的做法及原因：给父母和祖父母买礼物（表达感谢）；4. 确保衔接给定结尾，语句连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
When the Spring Festival comes, every student can get lots of red packets. Some students want to buy some books with their pocket money because they can learn a lot from books. Others want to buy clothes or food for the children in poor areas because the children there don’t have enough money to buy them. As for me, I want to buy some presents for my parents and grandparents because I want to give my thanks to them in this way.
I think we should learn to spend and save money wisely.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活实际，考查学生围绕给定话题组织语言、表达观点的能力，符合七年级英语写作的考查要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为七年级英语话题书面表达题，要求围绕“合理利用零花钱”展开，需结合班会讨论的两种情况（同学买书、给贫困儿童买衣物）及个人看法，衔接给定的首尾句。解题思路：先承接首句引出班会讨论的话题，分别说明同学两种做法的原因，再阐述自己的做法及理由，最后自然衔接给定结尾，确保语句通顺、要点齐全、词数达标。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接首句引出班会讨论的内容；2. 分别说明同学的两种想法及原因：部分同学用零花钱买书（可从书中学到知识），另一些同学想给贫困地区孩子买衣物或食物（那里的孩子没钱购买）；3. 阐述自己的做法及原因：给父母和祖父母买礼物（表达感谢）；4. 确保衔接给定结尾，语句连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
When the Spring Festival comes, every student can get lots of red packets. Some students want to buy some books with their pocket money because they can learn a lot from books. Others want to buy clothes or food for the children in poor areas because the children there don’t have enough money to buy them. As for me, I want to buy some presents for my parents and grandparents because I want to give my thanks to them in this way.
I think we should learn to spend and save money wisely.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活实际，考查学生围绕给定话题组织语言、表达观点的能力，符合七年级英语写作的考查要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
